Lo aao, galey milo ab to!

by abdbundeli on September 30, 2013, 02:32:38 PM
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Shab hai andhiyaaree: jaaree hai:
Lo aao, galey milo ab to!
 
     Chhaye hain abra jawon tak ab;
     Hain sabhee sitaarey dhhakey huye!
     Halkee-see bahak hawaa mein hai:
     Hain mahak rahey phooley mahuye!!
Oudhhey hai qudrat taareeqee;
Is par bhee sharmaaogey tum?
               Fir andhiyaaron mein chhupney ko
               Mat jaao, galey milo ab to!
 
      Kyaa patah, subah hotey-hotey,
      Khalwat kaa yeh mousam badley?
      Kyaa patah, mashriqee koney mein,
      Bahr sey nayaa sooraj nikley?
Pattey-pattey ko chhuuney ko,
Noor key farishtey aayengey:
      Kyaa patah khabar ley saath yahee,
      Purwaayi koyi chaal chaley?  
               Aisey mein to chhoo leyney do
               Sapnon-hee chhuye huye lab ko;
               Mat, sirf sunahrey sapnon sey
               Bahlaao: galey milo ab to!

                       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2013, 02:44:24 PM »
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waah waah waah Bundeli sahab, bahut khoob.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2013, 02:46:34 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on September 30, 2013, 02:44:24 PM
waah waah waah Bundeli sahab, bahut khoob.... Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Bishwajeet ji!
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2013, 03:00:26 PM »
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bahot khoooob, dheron daaaad waaaah waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2013, 11:27:50 PM »
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Nyc 1.
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Kyaa patah, subah hotey-hotey,
      Khalwat kaa yeh mousam badley?
      Kyaa patah, mashriqee koney mein,
      Bahr sey nayaa sooraj nikley?

Bahut khoob Sir
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2013, 12:54:29 AM »
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Vismit karti is pur fusoon rachna par aapko sad hazaar laakh daad aur badhaiyaan Abd sahab
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2013, 04:24:37 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2013, 04:22:06 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on September 30, 2013, 03:00:26 PM
bahot khoooob, dheron daaaad waaaah waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriyah janab!
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 30, 2013, 11:27:50 PM
Nyc 1.

Thanks!
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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2013, 04:24:17 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 30, 2013, 11:38:36 PM
Kyaa patah, subah hotey-hotey,
      Khalwat kaa yeh mousam badley?
      Kyaa patah, mashriqee koney mein,
      Bahr sey nayaa sooraj nikley?

Bahut khoob Sir

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mukesh ji!
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Quote from: zarraa on October 01, 2013, 12:54:29 AM
Vismit karti is pur fusoon rachna par aapko sad hazaar laakh daad aur badhaiyaan Abd sahab

Haardik dhanyawaad, zarraa ji!
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2013, 04:26:27 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 01, 2013, 04:24:37 PM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah!
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«Reply #13 on: October 03, 2013, 07:01:45 PM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab...!


Kia kahne jee waaH behad khoobsurat aur umdaa khayaaloN ko sanjoya hai aapne...
Badi hi khoobsurat kalaam rahi janab...

Is khubsurat aur dilkash kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2013, 04:29:06 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 03, 2013, 07:01:45 PM

Abd Jee Aadaab...!


Kia kahne jee waaH behad khoobsurat aur umdaa khayaaloN ko sanjoya hai aapne...
Badi hi khoobsurat kalaam rahi janab...

Is khubsurat aur dilkash kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Namaskaar: bahut-bahut shukriyah, ParwaaZ ji! WOH aapko hameyshaa khush wa seyhatmand rakhey! Aap khoob tarakkee kareyn!
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