Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

by abdbundeli on May 10, 2009, 04:30:52 PM
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Mujhey jaanaa hai gagan key paar!
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Doobtee jaatee nishaa parchhaaiyon mein badliyon kee;
Saghan tam, abhisaar beylaa!
Malaya-mrudu sheetal pawan kuchh kah rahaa hai!!
Ghir uthhaa hai kshitij mein baadal akeylaa!!
- Aur, urwar dharitree, sankeyt sey muskaa rahee hai:
Umag baarambaar!!
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Witap gaatey geet; alharh jhakoron mein ghulaa hai sangeet!
Wirahee ghaatiyon key liye, nirjharnee akeylee gaa rahee hai!
Jhoomtaa hai koun: wismrut spandanon mein sajag ho kar;
Ur-chashhak mein dhaaltaa hai pyaar?
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Mujhey jaanaa hai gagan key paar!

                   - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2009, 08:45:54 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2009, 09:55:02 PM »
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very very nice abd ji.
hve a blessed day.
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2009, 03:12:50 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 10, 2009, 08:45:54 PM
Bahut Khoob Abd Ji

Thanks a lot, Rajesh Harish ji!
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2009, 03:21:52 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 10, 2009, 09:55:02 PM
very very nice abd ji.
hve a blessed day.

Thanks a lot, Madhu!
Tum madhu, sneyh tumhaaraa madhumaya!
Maan ho mamtaamaya, karunaamaya!
Har pal shubh ho, sumukhi, tumhaaraa;
Krupaa kareyn bhagwaan dayaamaya!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2009, 03:55:52 AM »
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Bohat bohat Khoob Bhaiyya itni shudh hindi ke samne kuch likhne ki himmat meri nahi. Khuda aapko achchi sehat de AAMEEN
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2009, 07:51:04 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 11, 2009, 03:55:52 AM
Bohat bohat Khoob Bhaiyya itni shudh hindi ke samne kuch likhne ki himmat meri nahi. Khuda aapko achchi sehat de AAMEEN
Sajid ji! Mein daad kaa naheen pyaar-o-dulaar kaa bhookhaa hun, jo aap key dil-o-dimaag mein  samudra kee lahroun-saa thaathheyn maartaa hai! Shukriyah!
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2009, 08:03:23 AM »
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Atisunder Racha pesh ki hai aapne ABD jI..
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2009, 08:12:35 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on May 11, 2009, 08:03:23 AM
Atisunder Racha pesh ki hai aapne ABD jI..
Sophi ji! Dhanyawaad! Mujhey khushee hai aap HINDI mein bhi 'ruchi' leyteen hain!
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2009, 12:17:45 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 10, 2009, 04:30:52 PM
Mujhey jaanaa hai gagan key paar!
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Doobtee jaatee nishaa parchhaaiyon mein badliyon kee;
Saghan tam, abhisaar beylaa!
Malaya-mrudu sheetal pawan kuchh kah rahaa hai!!
Ghir uthhaa hai kshitij mein baadal akeylaa!!
- Aur, urwar dharitree, sankeyt sey muskaa rahee hai:
Umag baarambaar!!
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Witap gaatey geet; alharh jhakoron mein ghulaa hai sangeet!
Wirahee ghaatiyon key liye, nirjharnee akeylee gaa rahee hai!
Jhoomtaa hai koun: wismrut spandanon mein sajag ho kar;
Ur-chashhak mein dhaaltaa hai pyaar?
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Mujhey jaanaa hai gagan key paar!

                   - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'








Bohot hi sundar kavita hai Babu Ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2009, 03:57:06 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 11, 2009, 12:17:45 PM
Bohot hi sundar kavita hai Babu Ji
Thanks bitia Celmira!
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2009, 04:04:27 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 10, 2009, 04:30:52 PM
Mujhey jaanaa hai gagan key paar!
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Doobtee jaatee nishaa parchhaaiyon mein badliyon kee;
Saghan tam, abhisaar beylaa!
Malaya-mrudu sheetal pawan kuchh kah rahaa hai!!
Ghir uthhaa hai kshitij mein baadal akeylaa!!
- Aur, urwar dharitree, sankeyt sey muskaa rahee hai:
Umag baarambaar!!
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Witap gaatey geet; alharh jhakoron mein ghulaa hai sangeet!
Wirahee ghaatiyon key liye, nirjharnee akeylee gaa rahee hai!
Jhoomtaa hai koun: wismrut spandanon mein sajag ho kar;
Ur-chashhak mein dhaaltaa hai pyaar?
Lo, priya, aaj aamantran karo sweekaar!

Mujhey jaanaa hai gagan key paar!

                   - Ram Prakash Garg 'Ramwatiya'








Bahut hii pyaari Rachna hai, Abd Ji! Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2009, 05:55:02 AM »
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Bahut hii pyaari Rachna hai, Abd Ji! Applause
Deepati, thanks a lot!
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Wah Abdbundeli ji.. Bahut khubsoorat rachna pesh ki hai aapne.. Applause


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Quote from: Mann on May 12, 2009, 10:16:58 AM
Wah Abdbundeli ji.. Bahut khubsoorat rachna pesh ki hai aapne.. Applause

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Shukriyah Mann ji!
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