Lohri ka ek din pyar key naam .............. (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on January 12, 2009, 08:07:03 PM
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KAL SAB SEY PEHLEY TOH AAP KOH MORNING TEA DENGEY
KISS KEY SAATH SAATH, I LOVE YOU BHI KAHENGEY

SMILE DEKEY AAP KOH HUM HUG KARENGEY
DHIREY SEY AAP KI EAR BHI BITE KARENGEY

TAYAAR HOKAR HUM FIR BAHAR JAYENGEY
GADI MEH SAWAAR, HUM BAZAR JAYENGEY

SHOPPING AAP KOH KHOOB KARENGEY
KUCH NOTTY WALI SHOPPING BHI KAR JAYENGEY

FIR HUM EK LONG DRIVE PAR JAYENGEY
ROMANTIC BATOH SEY DIL BEHLAYENGEY

HALCHAL TOH BAHUT HOTI HAMAREY DIL MEH
ISI LIYE AAP KOH NAJDEEK BITHAYENGEY

CHAND TOH SAATH BAITHA HAI MERE
MAJBOORI MEH SAMNEY DEKHKAR CAR CHALAENGEY

PYARE SEY TOURIST SPOT PAR HUM
AAP KOH PYARA SA DINNER KHILWAYENGEY

CANDLE LIGHT MEH KHATEY WAQT
HUM AAP KI AAKHOH MEH DEKHTEY JAYENGEY

MANN TOH BAHUT KAREGA HAMARA
NA JANEY KAISEY KHUDD KOH HUM ROK PAYENGEY

PAKAD KAR HAATH AAP KA
DANCE FLOOR PEH LEH JAYENGEY

KASS KEY HUG DENGEY HUM AAP KOH
HOLEY HOLEY DANCE BHI KARTEY JAYENGEY

MANN TOH ABHI BHI NAHI BHARA HAI HAMARA
MAJBOORI MEH HUM GHAR KOH AAYENGEY

GHAR LOAT KAR HUM LOHRI JALAYENGEY
PHERE KAAAT TEY HUM DIL BEHLAYENGEY

DHOLL BHI APNI MASTI MEH HOGA
NACHENGEY, JHOOMENGEY, HUM GAYENGEY

REWDI, MUNGFALLI, MAKKI KEY DANEY
LOHRI KI AAG MEH ARPIT KARAENGAY

PRASAD KHA KAR HUM FIR
AAP KOH ROOM MEH LEH JAYENGEY

MANN TOH BAHUT KAREGA HAMARA
PAR KISS DEH KEY HI HUM GOODNIGHT KARJAYENGEY

SWEET DREAMS KEH KAR HUM
PYARA SA HUG BHI JARUR DEH JAYENGEY

LOAT KAR HUM FIR DOBARA
SUBAH MORNING TEA PAR AAP KOH JAGAYENGEY

EK NAYE DIN KI SHURUWAAT
EK NAYI AAS DIL MEH JAGAYENGEY

KATT TEY , KATT TEY, KATT TEY
YEH DIN BHI GUJAR JAYENGEY

AAP HAR PAL, HAR LAMHA
DIL HI DIL MEH BASTEY JAYENGEY

ROJ HUM EK NAYI SUBAH KEY SAATH
AAP PEH HI MARTEY JAYENGEY
AAP PEH HI MARTEY JAYENGEY



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 08:33:31 PM »
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Good one Jas ji!!! bahoot simple shabdo main apne man ki bhawnao ki is kavita mai piroya hai...Good work
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2009, 08:43:02 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 12, 2009, 08:33:31 PM
Good one Jas ji!!! bahoot simple shabdo main apne man ki bhawnao ki is kavita mai piroya hai...Good work

Thanks JI. I am not that brilliant writer like many on this site, including you, who can write beautiful words to put weight on the poem. I can just write my feelings with the common words i am aware of.


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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2009, 09:08:11 PM »
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the person u have all these plans with well she is one lucky gal   love4 love4 happy3  acha likha hai
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2009, 09:11:08 PM »
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Quote from: gurinder on January 12, 2009, 09:08:11 PM
the person u have all these plans with well she is one lucky gal   love4 love4 happy3  acha likha hai


Hai ni SACCHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIiiiiii .....
but more than she, I am lucky to have her with me  .... WHAT SAY ?   Giggle Giggle Winking Winking happy9
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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2009, 02:08:08 AM »
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haaaa bahut accha laga padkar Jasbir Singh jii..  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2009, 05:07:02 AM »
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Wah wah jasbir ji bohat khoob Happy lohri aapko bhi... Thumbs UP
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Quote from: Roja on January 13, 2009, 02:08:08 AM
haaaa bahut accha laga padkar Jasbir Singh jii..  Usual Smile Usual Smile






Thanks ROJA

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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2009, 06:16:14 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 13, 2009, 05:07:02 AM
Wah wah jasbir ji bohat khoob Happy lohri aapko bhi... Thumbs UP

Thanks HONEY PARTNER and wish you happy Lohri too.

ALso wishing you Happy Pongal today.

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2009, 07:42:21 AM »
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Bahut vadiya likheya Jasbir Paji ..... Simple yet impreesive.
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2009, 07:44:27 AM »
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bahot khoob Jasbir sahab.
waah
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2009, 07:55:09 AM »
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Quote from: HumTum on January 13, 2009, 07:42:21 AM
Bahut vadiya likheya Jasbir Paji ..... Simple yet impreesive.




Thanks HUMTUM

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2009, 07:56:46 AM »
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bahot khoob Jasbir sahab.
waah

Thanks Seraj

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2009, 10:13:46 AM »
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bhoot khoob jasbir ji. wah wah
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2009, 10:15:27 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 13, 2009, 10:13:46 AM
bhoot khoob jasbir ji. wah wah

THANKS SOPHI... chalo shukar hai, aap koh pasand toh aaya, warna aap toh band bajaney key chakkar meh rehtey ho .... hee hee

Thanks once again

Jasbir Singh
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