maa ko samrpit

by sakhi1909 on May 13, 2007, 05:31:27 PM
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hi dosto

aaj mein us maa ke liye kuch likh kar lai hun jiske mayne hamari jindagi mein sabse badke hai kyun ki usi ne hamein janam diya pala bada kiya hai..us maa ko lekar sabne likha hai shayd...meine aaj us maa ki saari ko paribhashit karne ki koshish ki hai. asha hai aap sabhi ko pasand aayega ye roop maa ki saari ka.
kyun ki ye itna vishal hai ismein bahut kuch chhipa mila mujhe.

sakhi with love    :D



Maa teri saari ka kinara
Ismein samaa gay hai maa
Vistarrit akash ye saara
Kitne riste gunthey huye hai
Iske kache dhagoin mein
Iske hare k dhage se
Milta hai majboot sahara
Maa teri saari ka kinara

Ek chhor se dusre chhor tak
pyar hi pyar samaya
iske dhagoin se milkar
maa ka anchal kahalaya
maa ka anchal jis se
bahti hai mamta ki dhara
ismein jaise samaa gya
maa koi sagar saara
maa teri saari ka kinara

ye dharaye hasti hai maa
tere anchal ke sagar mein
jaise kisi ne amrit ras
bhar diya maa ke anchal mein
suraj ki kirne bikhari
bikhari hai chand ki sheetalata
bijali ki hai kaundh bhi ismein
hai ismein jal ki nirmalata
maa teri saari ka kinara

indradhanush ke rang bhare hai
rang bhare jo jeevan mein
ek pyar ki lahar uthey hai
sabke liye iske tan mein
shahad ki meethas bhari hui
maa tere laad dular mein
khushiyo ka ambaar chhipa
maa ke ashirwaad mein
maa teri saari ka kinara

maa ki saari ka kinara
rakhata hai kitne mayane
ek lakshman rekha tay hai
naari ki is kinare ki aad mein
iski maryada langh nahi sakta
koi bhi is sansar mein
is kinare mein rahta hai
surakshit pariwaar hamara
maa teri saari ka kinara



maa ke liye bahut saare pyar ke sath sakhi :D  :D

   
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2007, 07:05:41 PM »
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Very nice attempt !  
Good work !
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2007, 12:52:17 PM »
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Very Nice Thinking Sakhi....

I could Just Say.. Wow.. that's Really very Beautiful... =D>

Keep Sharing your Thoughts with us.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2007, 03:51:31 PM »
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Sakhi,

Its seems uor maa is very close to uor heart..
Very nice sharing.

Neer
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2007, 10:45:23 AM »
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Sakhi its really beatiful likea feeling of mother's touch.. well expressed.

Love
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2007, 09:50:30 PM »
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thnx dear

ricky, shikha, nirbhay and divya

sakhi with love
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2007, 07:12:42 PM »
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that was xcellent sakhiiiiiiiii

keep up d good work
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«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2007, 12:28:53 PM »
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thnx ankur ji

sakhi
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