Maa Meri :-) :-):Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

arifuddin

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Maan dunya ki sab se badi niymat hai dost

mere chalne k liye Qadmo'n k niche Apne Paon deti thi
Oodhni Hatati sar se Apne mere cheh reko thandi chaon deti thi

mere bilak ne se uska kaleja jal sa jata tha
wo godi me joleti maosam sara badal sa jata tha

naraaz hun kehkar wo munh pherleti
yu'n mithi si saza deti
mai muskura kar Maa'n kehta wo Dil se du'a deti

mere chahre ko padhkar pareshani bhaa'np leti wo
mere paet ki Aag ko apne seene se bujha deti wo

Aaj raat Aankh nahi lagi pehlisi to Qoob roya mai
neend me to tabtak tha jabkat maa'n se lipat kar soya mai

Aage Aage mai wo mere piche piche daod lagati thi
samjha bujha kar wo luqma luqma Khana khila ti thi

wo phal khilati aur aksar ungliya'n kaatle ti thi
mujhse chupati aur mere Gumo'n ko baat leti thi

jab bhi maoqa mile Maa'n se mohabbat mangleArif
jannat ko mangne se Maa'n to nahi milti

wo ghar laot to jatein hai lekin ponch nahi pate
jinke gharon me unki maayei'n nahi hoti

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cara

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Re: Maa'n meri

«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2010, 04:22:07 AM »

wah kya baat hai Arifuddin ji

Maangna hai khuda se to "MAA" maang jannat nahin
"MAA" ke kadmon me jannat bhi mil jayengi wahin..


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arifuddin

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Re: Maa'n meri

«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2010, 04:25:23 AM »

ek dam sahi kaha Aap ne
bohat Qoob aur shukriya cara jii


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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2010, 06:22:28 PM »

Bahut bahut khoob Arif ji... maa se rishtey ko aapne bahut hi sundarta se likha hai... bahut umda tarike se aapne apne ehsaason ko shabdon me daala hai... bahut khoob... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2010, 09:39:02 PM »

Waise to Maa ke bare me har likha kalam kalamo ka Imam hota hai.......lekin is kalam me jo Qafiye aur Radeef ko baar baar badla gaya yeh baat pasand nahi aayee....na hi ise aap Ghazal bana sake na Nazm na Geet.


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arifuddin

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2010, 04:30:02 AM »

sajid bhai iske liye Mafi chata hun
inshaAllah Aainda iska Qayaal rakkhunga

SHukriya sajid bhai Aapne Apne nek Qwahishat ka izhar kiya aur mujhe talQeen bhi ki shukriya


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madhuwesh

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2010, 06:48:58 AM »

Bahut khoob Arif ji,aapne apni maa ke mamta ko mahsoos kiya aur apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likha.bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita.midblowing creation,great lines by Cara ji,keep up the good work icon_salut


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arifuddin

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2010, 07:55:51 AM »

shukriya madhu ji aap hamesha mere kalaam ko saraah ti hain
bohat bohat shukriya aap ka jo apna Qimti waqt yaha sarf kiya


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2010, 08:48:37 AM »

Bahut khoob Arif Ji


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mdarif

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2010, 10:42:53 AM »

shukriya rajesh ji


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2010, 08:20:44 PM »

Quote from: arifuddin on May 25, 2010, 04:30:02 AM

sajid bhai iske liye Mafi chata hun
inshaAllah Aainda iska Qayaal rakkhunga

SHukriya sajid bhai Aapne Apne nek Qwahishat ka izhar kiya aur mujhe talQeen bhi ki shukriya

Mere bhai aapse zyda khushi mujhe huwi hai yeh jaankar ke aapne meri mamuli islah ko itni mohabbat se kabool kiya...........warna zydatar to hum khamosh rehna hi pasand karte hai mere bhai........aajkal kisi se kuch keh do uske kalam ke bare me to achcha khasa bawaal mach jata hai.

Allah aapki kalam ko aur takat bakshe....AAMEEN


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deepika_divya

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2010, 08:33:36 PM »

MashaAllah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob aur sahi Likha hai.. bahoot Umda Peshkash..

Keep Writing....!


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arifuddin

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #12 on: May 26, 2010, 04:43:38 AM »

sophi ji Bohat Bohat shukriya
Aap ka jo apna Qimti waqt mere kalam
ko padhne me lagaya thanks


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arifuddin

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Re: Maa Meri :-) :-)

«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2010, 04:46:06 AM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on May 25, 2010, 08:20:44 PM

As salamu alaikum :
sajid bhai maine Haa galati to ki hai soo maine Qubool karli
aur sajid bhai Shukar hai jo Aapne samjha ya shayed mai samjh gaya
inshaAllah umeed hai Aur aage bhi Aap mujhe talqeen karoge bhai
du'a k liye Shukriya ,,,,,
Salaam


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