MAHFIL MAI............

by akela on October 29, 2004, 08:47:06 PM
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nishita
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«Reply #15 on: November 06, 2004, 05:29:16 PM »
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Waah! Akela ji! Nice

Tu Chale to Sagar Lahraaye!
Tu Hanse to gulshan Muskuraaye!

Tu Baat kare to Moti Jharein!
Tirchhi Chtwan Chain harein!

Angdaai jo le tu ho ke magan,
Baadal ko Paseena Aa Jaaye!


Aankho me teri chahat ka nasha,
Zulfo me teri khushboo ki ghata,
Mujhe achi lage taarif teri,
Ab naam teri har saas meri,
Naa mujhse kabhi takraar kare,
Mujhe pyar kare bas pyar kare,
Naa shak mujhpe kabhi yaar kare,
tu sirf mera aetbaar kare.  (NM)
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akela
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«Reply #16 on: November 06, 2004, 07:21:13 PM »
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wah!!!! nce AKS ji auur nishita ji
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #17 on: November 06, 2004, 07:30:14 PM »
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Wah Nishita ji! Excellent!!! Bahut Khoob!!!!

Mere Khwaab tere, Tassawur tera, Wafa teri,Armaan tere,
Na Ho yakeen Agar to Mujhe Aajmaa le Chahe Kahin!
Is Duniya mein Jitna tujh par hai ay Jaan-e-Jigar Mere,
Unta Eitbaar to mujhe Khud apni saanson pe bhi Nahin!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #18 on: November 06, 2004, 07:31:49 PM »
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Shukriya Akela ji!!
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akela
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«Reply #19 on: November 06, 2004, 09:09:55 PM »
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nice again AKS JI
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #20 on: November 07, 2004, 05:04:27 AM »
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Zahenaseeb!!!Shukriyaa! Akela ji!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #21 on: November 07, 2004, 06:30:05 AM »
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wah!!!!!!!!1  nishita.............arun kumar.............
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«Reply #22 on: November 07, 2004, 08:04:42 AM »
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good work nishita and arun```

Ae khuda....

ae kudha ek chand sa dost hum bhi rakte hain,
jab tarif hoti hai tere chand ki
log misaal mere chand ki dete hain ( NOT MINE)
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«Reply #23 on: November 07, 2004, 09:11:11 AM »
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Wah Nishita ji! Excellent!!! Bahut Khoob!!!!

Mere Khwaab tere, Tassawur tera, Wafa teri,Armaan tere,
Na Ho yakeen Agar to Mujhe Aajmaa le Chahe Kahin!
Is Duniya mein Jitna tujh par hai ay Jaan-e-Jigar Mere,
Unta Eitbaar to mujhe Khud apni saanson pe bhi Nahin!


kyu karu gam jo duniya mere khilaaf hai
main to issi baat se khush hu ke tu mere saath hai
Teraa ishq mujh pe hai maharbaan mere dil ko haasil do jahaan
meri jaan-e-jaan isi baat par meri jaan jaaye to baat hai....

the first 2 lines r mine... last 2 lines r not mine
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #24 on: November 07, 2004, 10:13:29 AM »
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wah!!!!!!!!  excellent wirte heartfeltgal.........nice one nishita....
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #25 on: November 07, 2004, 05:09:55 PM »
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Waheed Bhai,heartfeltgal ji N nishita ji! Aap sabhi ka shukriyaa1
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«Reply #26 on: November 07, 2004, 05:13:11 PM »
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Wah Nishita ji! Excellent!!! Bahut Khoob!!!!

Mere Khwaab tere, Tassawur tera, Wafa teri,Armaan tere,
Na Ho yakeen Agar to Mujhe Aajmaa le Chahe Kahin!
Is Duniya mein Jitna tujh par hai ay Jaan-e-Jigar Mere,
Unta Eitbaar to mujhe Khud apni saanson pe bhi Nahin!


kyu karu gam jo duniya mere khilaaf hai
main to issi baat se khush hu ke tu mere saath hai
Teraa ishq mujh pe hai maharbaan mere dil ko haasil do jahaan
meri jaan-e-jaan isi baat par meri jaan jaaye to baat hai....

the first 2 lines r mine... last 2 lines r not mine


Wah! Very Nice Nishita ji!!

Kuchh to log Kahenge Logon ka kaam hain kahna,
Chorho bekaar ki baaton mein kahin Beet na jaaye Rainaa...

(NM)
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diljala
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«Reply #27 on: November 08, 2004, 08:27:55 AM »
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Ek roj wo boli ke  aur bhi dost tumhare siva duniya mai.n
Aur bhi rahguzar ek tumhare assyne ke siva duniya mai.n
hum bole jara apne dosto.n ke naam to bata do
jara mai.n  apne dushmano.n ki tadad dakh loo.n.....
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #28 on: November 08, 2004, 10:26:07 AM »
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Wah!! Very Good!!Diljala ji!
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diljala
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«Reply #29 on: November 08, 2004, 10:54:39 AM »
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Thanks sharmaarunkumar

Urj Hai

har ek tamashai tamasha bana raha tha mere ishq ka
har kahso aam ke haat mai.n nafart ke patthar tha
maine to wafa hi ki thi mubbhat mai.n
U.n sare bazar mera ishq ruswa hua...
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