MAHFIL MAI............

by akela on October 29, 2004, 08:47:06 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #45 on: November 09, 2004, 05:15:41 PM »
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Shukariya Nishita!!!!!
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«Reply #46 on: November 10, 2004, 09:50:18 AM »
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Shukriya Nishita ji Talat ji, akela ji and Pooja ji!!

Very Nice Nishita ji! & Pooja ji!!
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nishita
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«Reply #47 on: November 10, 2004, 10:04:51 AM »
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thanks sharmaji
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Nedura!
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«Reply #48 on: November 10, 2004, 10:16:24 AM »
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Wah Nishita ji! Excellent!!! Bahut Khoob!!!!

Mere Khwaab tere, Tassawur tera, Wafa teri,Armaan tere,
Na Ho yakeen Agar to Mujhe Aajmaa le Chahe Kahin!
Is Duniya mein Jitna tujh par hai ay Jaan-e-Jigar Mere,
Unta Eitbaar to mujhe Khud apni saanson pe bhi Nahin!


kyu karu gam jo duniya mere khilaaf hai
main to issi baat se khush hu ke tu mere saath hai
Teraa ishq mujh pe hai maharbaan mere dil ko haasil do jahaan
meri jaan-e-jaan isi baat par meri jaan jaaye to baat hai....

the first 2 lines r mine... last 2 lines r not mine


Wah! Very Nice Nishita ji!!

Kuchh to log Kahenge Logon ka kaam hain kahna,
Chorho bekaar ki baaton mein kahin Beet na jaaye Rainaa...

(NM)


IS PYAAR KE SAGAR ME ABHI KASTI KO NA UTAAR
PAHLE HIMMAT TO PAYDA KAR TOOFAANO SE TAKRAANE KI  (NM)


Wah!! Nisita ji!! Bahut Khoob!!

Mohabbat ka irada ab badal jaana bhi Mushkil hai
Tera Aana bhi Mushkil tha Tera Jaana Bhi Mushkil hai!

Zara si baat par aankhein Bhigo kar baith jaati ho,
Tumhe to apne dil ka haal batlaana bhi mushkil hai!

Udaasi tere chehre par Gawaraa Bhi nahin lekin,
Teri khatir sitaare tod kar laana bhi Mushkil hai!

Yahan logon ne khud par itne parde daal rakhe hain,
Kisi ke dil mein kya hai yeh nazar aana bhi mushkil hai


wow Arun ....amazing lines...........

"Zara si baat par aankhein Bhigo kar baith jaati ho,
Tumhe to apne dil ka haal batlaana bhi mushkil hai!"
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Nedura!
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«Reply #49 on: November 10, 2004, 10:20:55 AM »
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Dil se dil tak ek raah hoti hai
udhar zakhm ho toh idhar aah hoti hai
yeh deewangee toh chah hoti hai
magar hum deewanon ko kahan parwaah hoti hai ........

1st line isnt mine..
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nishita
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«Reply #50 on: November 10, 2004, 10:26:46 AM »
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wah nice nedura...
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #51 on: November 10, 2004, 11:12:22 AM »
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Shukriya Nedura ji!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #52 on: November 10, 2004, 04:13:10 PM »
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good work all.............
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #53 on: November 10, 2004, 08:34:44 PM »
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Thanks Waheed Bhai!
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Pooja
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«Reply #54 on: November 10, 2004, 09:29:57 PM »
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Irade badalane hume nahi atty
Rishaty nibhane tumhe nahi atty

jara si baat per rooth jaty ho
tumhe manane hume nahi atty

udas hokar aise hume ajmaya na karo
Duniya ke taane humse sahe nahi jaty

yaha log najare lagai bathy hai
ek app hai ki sunanae mai nahi atty!!!!
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akela
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«Reply #55 on: November 10, 2004, 11:58:05 PM »
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wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dosto sabhi ne kya khob likha hai

sanam tera ye nazere jhukana ...
najere jhuka kar tera ye sharmana
kya kahu ,kya khoob lagta hai tera.....
bin bole hi sab kuch kah jana.
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Pooja
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«Reply #56 on: November 11, 2004, 12:31:31 AM »
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Shukariya akela ji!!!!
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«Reply #57 on: November 11, 2004, 07:03:23 AM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
Irade badalane hume nahi atty
Rishaty nibhane tumhe nahi atty

jara si baat per rooth jaty ho
tumhe manane hume nahi atty

udas hokar aise hume ajmaya na karo
Duniya ke taane humse sahe nahi jaty

yaha log najare lagai bathy hai
ek app hai ki sunanae mai nahi atty!!!!


wah!!!!!!!!!  pooja......nice wordings....  nice one akela...

wah!!!! pooja ...akela..........  bahot khoob........

Ek Vaada Hai Kisii Ka Jo Wafa Hota Nahin
Marmari Taaro.N Bhari Raaton Mein Kyaa Hota Nahin

Ji Mein Aataa Hai Ulat Den UnKe Chehare Se Naqaab
Hausala Karate Hain Lekin Hausala Hota Nahin

Shama Jis Kii Aabaruu Par Jaan De De Jhuum Kar
Vo Patangaa Jal To Jaata Hai Fana Hota Nahin..............
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nishita
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«Reply #58 on: November 11, 2004, 09:57:02 AM »
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wah pooja and waheed
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #59 on: November 11, 2004, 02:38:39 PM »
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Thanx Nishita..........
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