MAHFIL MAI............

by akela on October 29, 2004, 08:47:06 PM
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akela
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«Reply #75 on: November 16, 2004, 07:09:23 PM »
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shukariya pooja ji
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akela
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«Reply #76 on: November 16, 2004, 09:27:46 PM »
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mere khawabo ki tasweer ho tum ,
jo mili nahi kabhi woh taqdeer ho tum
baandh diya jissne mujhe iss mahfil mai
shayad husn ki woh janjir ho tum.
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Pooja
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«Reply #77 on: November 16, 2004, 10:09:10 PM »
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wah!!!
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akela
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«Reply #78 on: November 16, 2004, 10:20:13 PM »
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shukariya
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akela
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«Reply #79 on: November 18, 2004, 02:52:54 PM »
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mahfil mai aaker woh humse jane kya kuch kah gaye,
auur mai matlab usska dertalak sochta raha.
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«Reply #80 on: November 18, 2004, 07:23:38 PM »
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mere khawabo ki tasweer ho tum ,
jo mili nahi kabhi woh taqdeer ho tum
baandh diya jissne mujhe iss mahfil mai
shayad husn ki woh janjir ho tum.


Waaah! Akela ji!! Very Nice!

Bediyaan Teri Yaadon ki Ay Meri Jaan-e-Tamanna,
Pad gayi hain ab to mere Khwaabon ke pairon mein!

Tamanna thi Tujhe Meffil mein apne dil ki Sajaate hum,
Dhoondha Tumhe to payaa Tum baithe the Gairon mein!

Ek Deewane ne Saunpa Khud ko Jallad ke haathon, Yeh kahkar,
Ataa ki jaaye Maut mujhe, Maghar Husn ke Pahron mein!

Uski maut ka charcha hoga Ghar Galiyon Cahupalon mein,
Jaisa bhi woh ashiq tha, par Tha woh ek hazaaron mein!
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Pooja
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«Reply #81 on: November 18, 2004, 08:36:21 PM »
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WAH!!! BAHOOT KHOOB AKS JI!!!! kamal ji!!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #82 on: November 18, 2004, 08:44:19 PM »
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Shukriya ji Pooja ji!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #83 on: November 19, 2004, 06:52:06 AM »
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Quote from: "akela"
mere khawabo ki tasweer ho tum ,
jo mili nahi kabhi woh taqdeer ho tum
baandh diya jissne mujhe iss mahfil mai
shayad husn ki woh janjir ho tum.


Waaah! Akela ji!! Very Nice!

Bediyaan Teri Yaadon ki Ay Meri Jaan-e-Tamanna,
Pad gayi hain ab to mere Khwaabon ke pairon mein!

Tamanna thi Tujhe Meffil mein apne dil ki Sajaate hum,
Dhoondha Tumhe to payaa Tum baithe the Gairon mein!

Ek Deewane ne Saunpa Khud ko Jallad ke haathon, Yeh kahkar,
Ataa ki jaaye Maut mujhe, Maghar Husn ke Pahron mein!

Uski maut ka charcha hoga Ghar Galiyon Cahupalon mein,
Jaisa bhi woh ashiq tha, par Tha woh ek hazaaron mein!


wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! arun bhai.......talat.....akela.........bahot accha accha likha aap logon ne..........

Ab to gabhra ke kehte hein ki marr jayeinge
marr ke bhi chain na paaya to kidher jayeinge.....................
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«Reply #84 on: November 19, 2004, 07:15:27 AM »
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Shukriya waheed Bhai!!!

Wah Very Nice written!!!

Na Bhoolega Yeh dil Meharbaaniyaan Tumhaari,
Dikhoge tum hi Tum Har Taraf, Jidhar jaayenge!
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Talat
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«Reply #85 on: November 19, 2004, 07:17:48 AM »
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Thanks Waheed!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #86 on: November 19, 2004, 08:21:20 AM »
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Shukriya waheed Bhai!!!

Wah Very Nice written!!!

Na Bhoolega Yeh dil Meharbaaniyaan Tumhaari,
Dikhoge tum hi Tum Har Taraf, Jidhar jaayenge!


wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Arun Bhai........... glorious..........

Itne Achhe Kyon Hote Hain, Kuch Log Is Zamane Mein!
Kyon Dil Ko Bha Jaate Hain, Ki Dard Hota Hai Unhen Ganwane Mein!!
Aa To Jaate Hain Gharon Mein, Wo Ajnabi Chupchaap Se!
Kaanp Jaati Hai Dharti, Goonj Jo Hoti Hai Unke Jaane Mein!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #87 on: November 19, 2004, 06:06:06 PM »
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Shukriya waheed Bhai!!! N Very Nice!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #88 on: November 20, 2004, 04:26:42 PM »
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Thanx Arun Bhai...................
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akela
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«Reply #89 on: November 22, 2004, 04:16:51 PM »
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shukariya dosto
aaur kya khoob likha hai aap logo ne
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