Mahobat

by BeNam on April 27, 2005, 10:00:35 AM
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Ajib chij hai mahobat,

Kain Pane ke liye tadapte hain umra bhar,
Kain pa kar tadapte hain umra bhar!

Woh mahobat hi kya jismain judai na ho,
Ahen na bhare husn aur khafa bhi na ho!

Mana ke woh khafa huey hain harkatonse hamari,
Yun to sahi nahi jati khamoshi bhi hamari!

Gum na kar BENAM aaj jo ruthi hai kal man jayegi,
Mahobat bhi ajib chij hai door hokar hi badh payegi!

---- BENAM --------
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mnajmi
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2005, 11:15:11 AM »
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sahi aapney khaa bahut khoob............................................ ...
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BeNam
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2005, 11:28:16 AM »
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Thanks for the appreciation! This is my first posting on this site and I am seeing there are people like who share the same view!
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dhadkan
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2005, 11:31:14 AM »
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Mana ke woh khafa huey hain harkatonse hamari,
Yun to sahi nahi jati khamoshi bhi hamari!

ohhhhh nice benam........
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BeNam
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2005, 11:42:49 AM »
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Thanks Dhadkan,

Its great to see such quick responses! to my 1st posting!
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rahul03
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2005, 12:34:16 PM »
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Nicely written "BeNam"...Baat hui hai mohabbat ki to mohabbat ka ek pehlu ye bhi hai...


Dil lagaane ka challlan sa hai jamane mein
log fakrr saa mehsoos karte hain ye batane mein,
uss ke peeche hoon mein aaj kal, likh do naam mera bhi deewano mein,
parr gam ye hai ki 'mohabbat' ko tola jaa raha hai 'jism' ke paimane mein...



Kya khayal hai janab.....??
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Qutubuddin
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2005, 02:57:18 PM »
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Well Said All..

Ques...

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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2005, 04:04:41 PM »
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Quote from: "BeNam"
Ajib chij hai mahobat,

Kain Pane ke liye tadapte hain umra bhar,
Kain pa kar tadapte hain umra bhar!

Woh mahobat hi kya jismain judai na ho,
Ahen na bhare husn aur khafa bhi na ho!

Mana ke woh khafa huey hain harkatonse hamari,
Yun to sahi nahi jati khamoshi bhi hamari!

Gum na kar BENAM aaj jo ruthi hai kal man jayegi,
Mahobat bhi ajib chij hai door hokar hi badh payegi!

---- BENAM --------


nice one benam ji and welcome to yoindia!!!

 :D
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pandit
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2005, 04:12:48 PM »
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nice benaam ji............................................... ......
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BeNam
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2005, 04:33:29 AM »
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Thanks for the wonderful words that you have quoted on Mahobat. They are really direct from DILSE!
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BeNam
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2005, 04:44:57 AM »
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Thanks Qutubuddin Sahab,

Yeh to aapki zara nawazi hai ! Aapke sher ko jawab dene ki gustakhi kar raha hun mafi chahunga:

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NaThee Hamaree Kismat..
Kay Vesaalay Yaar Hotaa..
Na Tum Humsay Miltay..
Na Humkoo Tumsay Pyaar Hota...

Na umid na ho ai dost pyaar khuda ki naymat hai,
Gar mahobot sachhi hai to uska lautna kismat main hai!
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