mai bhee (aye jalim)

by NETRAPAL on May 23, 2008, 04:30:23 AM
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Murjhaayaa hooa fool hoo khil ke dihoonga
Karungaa saakaar mai ek toote hooe khawab ko
Aye  jindgee meree tujhe mai jee  kar dkhaoonga

Har pal kee sathee hee dagaa de gaye
Apne hee hame jahar de gayee
Hanste hai  hame ansoo dene wale
Aye jamane mai bhee tujhe, hans ke dikhaoonga

Sajee hai mahil gairo ke ashiyaano me
Ham pade hai kisee ke kaidkhaane me
Aye gairo kee mahfilo kee ronak
Mahifle mai bhee saja ke dikhaaongaa


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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2008, 12:08:03 PM »
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wo itrate hai, kadardaan bahut hai
ham bhee khade hai raho me unke
ek najar bhee dekhna mushkil hai jalim ka
ham hai kee khwaab dekhte hai unke

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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2008, 09:36:36 AM »
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bohut khoob netrapal ji bohut hi acha likha aapne
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2008, 11:16:10 AM »
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bohut khoob netrapal ji bohut hi acha likha aapne


thanks bhawna ji

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