-----/// Main hosh mein aaun kaise ///----- Hriday

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nashili aankhon  se main  ab  dur jaaun kaise
tere chehre se nazar ab  main  hataaun kaise

nashaa chadhaa hai dheere  dheere teraa ab
tu hi bataa  ab  main  hosh mein  aaun kaise

jaanaa  hai tujhse duur yeh  bhi jaante hain
apne  is paagal dil ko main  samjhaaun kaise

likha  thaa  tune  raat geeley labon se apne
mehfil mein woh ghazal main sunaaun kaise

zulfon  ke  ghere  mein  guzri  hai raat saari
teri  bikhri   laton  ko  main  bhulaaun kaise

apni jo haalat hai woh bhi hum jaante hain
magar  yeh baat kisi ko main bataaun kaise






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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2016, 09:00:24 AM »
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Bahot khoob, hamesha ki tarha waaaah hi waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2016, 11:02:45 AM »
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Bahot hi khubsurat hridayji
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2016, 11:12:34 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waah Waah Kya khoob likha hai
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2016, 03:19:10 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai janaab...


ek gujarish thi aapse.. main bahr ko seekhne ka soukeen hun. plz apni kalam ko bahr me mod kar kuch likhe. mujhe bahut khushi hogi...

aap ek umda shayar lagte hai mujhe bas isliye....

gustakhi k liye muafi chahta hun... janaab..

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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2016, 09:12:37 PM »
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kyaa baat Hriday jee waah waah waah, dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2016, 12:13:42 AM »
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kapil dino dino nikhaar par ho mujhe baht khushee hai achhaa jaa rahe ho god bless u
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2016, 08:55:26 AM »
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m speechless really, sab kuch aankho k aage aa jata hai, aapke kalaam mujhe bahot sunder pal fir se mehsoos karwa dete hai Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Waah kya kehne janab...
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2016, 12:35:40 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2016, 07:22:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rustum ji....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2016, 08:35:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shikha ji....!!!

Bahot hi khubsurat hridayji
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2016, 07:39:20 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa R D ji...!!!

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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2016, 06:38:52 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Arjun ji.....!!!

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