main kya karu...

by punam on May 07, 2008, 10:05:25 AM

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punam

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unki baaten mere dil ke saaz ko ched jaati hai
sath hote hain jab khud ko bhul jati hun to main kya karu

unki awaaz sunte hi dil machal uth.ta hai
dil ki baat dil me hi dabi rehe jati hai to main kya karu...

unki ehsaason me main saans lene lagi hun
saamne unhe dekh lab na khule to main kya karu...

unki wafa unka dil jab padh sakti hun bin bataye
mera dil unki wafaon me behe jata hai to main kya karu...

unki baaton me sachai lubhati hai mujhe
woh mera dil padh na paye toh main kya karu...


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honeyrose

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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2008, 10:24:51 AM »

Wah bohat hi acha likha hai punam dear.. Usual Smile


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baadal102

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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2008, 10:33:30 AM »

kya baat hai punam ji
aaj kal to bahut hi aache aache lines mil rahe hai padne ko
keep it baby

Baadal


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punam

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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2008, 11:31:44 AM »

Thanx Honey di...

Thanx baadal ji..chalo aap ko acha laga ..thanx a lot...


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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2008, 11:34:34 AM »

bahut ache punam ..zabardast likha hai..


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syednaami

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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2008, 11:53:20 AM »

Iss ziyada men nahin kah sakta Punam jee.


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nikss

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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2008, 02:44:28 PM »

kabhi waqat milay toaajao....
hum jheel kinaray ja baithey....!
tum apnay sukh ki baat karo....
hum apnay dukh ki baat kare....
or un lamho ki baat karei.....
jo sung tumhrey beet kare....!
oe ehd-khizan ki nazr hoey....
in sabz ruto k daaman main...
hum pyar ki khushbu mehkaain....
in bikhrey sabz nazro ko hum.....
ankhoo main tasveer krain.....
phir apnay pyar k jadu se.....
hum lamhon ko jageer kren....!
kabhi waqat mikay to aajao.....
hum jheel kinary ja bethen


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syednaami

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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2008, 02:53:38 PM »

Nikss, amazing poem, so meaningful and excellent work. Bravo!!


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Pooja

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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2008, 02:55:40 PM »

wah!! bahoot khoob Punam and nikss ji !!! dono ne kamal ka likha hai... Good creations!!!


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punam

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Re: main kya karu...

«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2008, 06:34:06 PM »

Thanx samnoj ji....aake padhe toh sahi..

Thanx syed ji...jyada nahi kahunga kehte huye bahot kuch kehe gaye...

Nikss bahot acha likha aap ne...

pooja di thanx ...