Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

by Talat on December 05, 2007, 11:43:27 AM
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Ek baar phir se yahan kaafi din baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..........

Tere pyaar ne woh raag cheda dil ke soone taaron par
Zindagi lage khoobsurat, phir kyun na gungunaoon main

Masti bhari nigaahen jaane kya kya ishaara karti hain
Samjhoon tere ishaare, phir kyun na muskuraoon main

Dekhi hai woh deewangi tere ishq ke har andaaz main
Hai naaz uthaane wala koi, phir kyun na ithlaoon main

Yeh shokhiyaan teri, us par qayamat hai tera baankpan
Bebaak nigaahen teri hain, phir kyun na sharmaoon main

Saathi mera humdam hai, humraaz hai, mera humsafar
Tumsa na koi dunya main, phir kyun na vaari jaaoon main !!
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«Reply #1 on: December 05, 2007, 11:53:59 AM »
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Tallu

Kya baat hai ! Itna khumar  :o tongue3

Bahut khoobsurat likha hai !
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«Reply #2 on: December 05, 2007, 01:08:10 PM »
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Talat... Bahut achha laga padh kar.. Usual Smile

Bahut hi achha likha hai, humesha ki tarah.. lekin phir bhi yeh thread kuch khaas sa lag raha hai... Winking
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radab
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2007, 12:50:11 PM »
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2007, 10:18:35 AM »
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really very nice talat Di...
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mask
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2007, 04:42:18 AM »
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as usual beautiful!
Its been a while (long while) for me, but its good to see
the charm is still the same ..

hai javan mehafil, hai barkarar rang-e-noor
   chaya hua hai vahi madmast saroor
chal aa peele yaar tu bhi do ghoont
   vaqt thamta hai kabhi kabhi, na jaye kahin saqi rooth.
   
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2007, 01:10:05 PM »
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Good everyone
Mask ji aapne bhi achi jugalbandi ki !
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aankhain
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2007, 01:52:03 PM »
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sahiba jugalbendii sad5 ye kya hota ha??? aor zra btana ap kider likhti ho;)) ap ka likha hoa kuch b aj tak meri nazer k samny nai aaya.
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2007, 01:55:26 PM »
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sorry talet ye likhna to bhol hi gai...k.. ap ny hmesha ki tara bohat acha likha ha:) ..sahiba ko tang kerny main ap k liye claping bhol gai=D> =D> sorryyy:)
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2007, 04:53:56 PM »
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WOW....nice flow...
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2007, 04:58:29 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai talat ji....kuch kosis humari bhi..

hai toote is dil ko phir se behlana kab mna.
khamosh samander mein kyn kasti dagmaga rahi...
phir de khusi ki laher kyn mere paas aa rahi,
us bejaan kasti mein paal meiney phir tana.
hai toote is dil ko phir se behlana kab mana..

ek hwa ke jhoke se mera ashiyaana tha uda.
kismat bhi kehne lagi thi tere saath hua hai bura.
us samay chaya tha aankho mei andiyara ghana.
chun chun ke phir se tinke mainey aasiyaana phir buna
hai toote is dil ko phir se behlana kab mana..


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«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2007, 10:41:04 AM »
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hi talat,

yeh koshish bahut acha hai.aise hi koshishein karte rahiye.i donno much abt it,ek baat kehna chahunga ki bahut simple hai with lot of meaning in it
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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2007, 10:53:20 AM »
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Tallu

Kya baat hai ! Itna khumar  :o tongue3

Bahut khoobsurat likha hai !

Haan ji !!! Shukriya !!
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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2007, 10:54:35 AM »
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Talat... Bahut achha laga padh kar.. Usual Smile

Bahut hi achha likha hai, humesha ki tarah.. lekin phir bhi yeh thread kuch khaas sa lag raha hai... Winking

Thanks a lot Shikha for the appreciation ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2007, 10:54:55 AM »
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bahoot khoob

Bohot shukriya
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