Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!! -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: December 11, 2007, 10:55:27 AM »

Quote from: deepika_divya on December 07, 2007, 10:18:35 AM

really very nice talat Di...

Thanks a lot Divs Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #16 on: December 11, 2007, 10:56:34 AM »

Quote from: mask on December 08, 2007, 04:42:18 AM

as usual beautiful!
Its been a while (long while) for me, but its good to see
the charm is still the same ..

hai javan mehafil, hai barkarar rang-e-noor
chaya hua hai vahi madmast saroor
chal aa peele yaar tu bhi do ghoont
vaqt thamta hai kabhi kabhi, na jaye kahin saqi rooth.

Hi Mask,

Great to see you after a long long time !!! You also have written very nice...keep coming Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #17 on: December 11, 2007, 10:57:02 AM »

Quote from: Sahiba Zehra on December 08, 2007, 01:10:05 PM

Good everyone
Mask ji aapne bhi achi jugalbandi ki !

Shukriya


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Talat

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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #18 on: December 11, 2007, 10:57:29 AM »

Quote from: aankhain on December 08, 2007, 01:55:26 PM

sorry talet ye likhna to bhol hi gai...k.. ap ny hmesha ki tara bohat acha likha ha:) ..sahiba ko tang kerny main ap k liye claping bhol gai=D> =D> sorryyy:)

Thank you Aankhain Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #19 on: December 11, 2007, 10:57:53 AM »

Quote from: badnaam_shayar on December 08, 2007, 04:53:56 PM

WOW....nice flow...

Thanks a lot Gaurav !


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Talat

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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #20 on: December 11, 2007, 10:59:07 AM »

Quote from: BHONDU on December 08, 2007, 04:58:29 PM

bahut khoob likha hai talat ji....kuch kosis humari bhi..

hai toote is dil ko phir se behlana kab mna.
khamosh samander mein kyn kasti dagmaga rahi...
phir de khusi ki laher kyn mere paas aa rahi,
us bejaan kasti mein paal meiney phir tana.
hai toote is dil ko phir se behlana kab mana..

ek hwa ke jhoke se mera ashiyaana tha uda.
kismat bhi kehne lagi thi tere saath hua hai bura.
us samay chaya tha aankho mei andiyara ghana.
chun chun ke phir se tinke mainey aasiyaana phir buna
hai toote is dil ko phir se behlana kab mana..

Bhondu,

Bohot bohot shukriya....aur aapne bhi bohot achcha likha...very nice Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #21 on: December 11, 2007, 11:00:03 AM »

Quote from: roshan20 on December 11, 2007, 10:41:04 AM

hi talat,

yeh koshish bahut acha hai.aise hi koshishein karte rahiye.i donno much abt it,ek baat kehna chahunga ki bahut simple hai with lot of meaning in it

Hi Roshan,

Thank you very much for your appreciation...Your comments will definitely help me improve Usual Smile


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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #22 on: December 18, 2007, 01:19:27 PM »

Quote from: Talat on December 11, 2007, 10:59:07 AM

Bhondu,

Bohot bohot shukriya....aur aapne bhi bohot achcha likha...very nice Usual Smile

talat ji yahan shayri ka jawab sirf shayri se hona chahiye... jawab do


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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #23 on: January 30, 2008, 02:47:09 PM »

Quote from: BHONDU on December 08, 2007, 04:58:29 PM

Haan, toote dil ko phir se behla rahe hain
Ashkon ko pi kar hum muskura rahe hain

Mere qadmon ke saath hai chaap kisi aur ki
Door reh kar bhi wo mere saath aa rahe hain !


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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #24 on: January 30, 2008, 03:22:49 PM »

bahoot khoob Talat and Vikram ji!!


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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #25 on: January 31, 2008, 11:56:31 AM »

Quote from: Talat on January 30, 2008, 02:47:09 PM

Haan, toote dil ko phir se behla rahe hain
Ashkon ko pi kar hum muskura rahe hain

Mere qadmon ke saath hai chaap kisi aur ki
Door reh kar bhi wo mere saath aa rahe hain !

sahi jaa rahi ho talat ji...
hai pyaar to duriyoon mein saath rehta hai
khamosiyon mein bhi pyaara zasbaat rehta hai
phoolon meinhi rehti hai khusboon ki tajgi,
ye dastaan her chaman her baag kehta hai


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Re: Main Muskuraun Jo woh mere saath hai ....!!!!

«Reply #26 on: February 20, 2008, 09:58:32 PM »

Bohot Khoob Vikram !


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Talat

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«Reply #27 on: September 22, 2008, 06:49:34 PM »

Yoindia


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