Main ney adhroun sey chhuaa --

by abdbundeli on July 08, 2012, 06:10:54 AM
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Main ney adhroun sey chhuaa,
Aur, rahey tum mook!
Tab sey tan-man mein satat
Rahee kokilaa kook!!

     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2012, 06:48:44 AM »
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waah beautiful couplet
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2012, 07:13:49 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 08, 2012, 06:48:44 AM
waah beautiful couplet

Saini ji, dhanyawaad!
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2012, 07:20:49 AM »
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Baarish ka asar hai shayad..
Bahut khoob Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2012, 08:22:19 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 08, 2012, 07:20:49 AM
Baarish ka asar hai shayad..
Bahut khoob Applause

mkv ji, dhanyawaad! 'Meghdootam' kaa teesaraa chhand padhhiyegaa! "Meghaaloke bhawati sukhino---" (The third line starts with these words).
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2012, 08:42:24 AM »
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Thanks sir
mai koshish karunga padhne kee ..jaroor..
Aap ko aksar padhta hun, naam na bhee likhe apna..par andaaj se pahchaan lunga.
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2013, 09:14:36 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 08, 2012, 08:42:24 AM
Thanks sir
mai koshish karunga padhne kee ..jaroor..
Aap ko aksar padhta hun, naam na bhee likhe apna..par andaaj se pahchaan lunga.

Shukriyah dost, sach hai, 'Jaananey waaley qayaamat kee nazar rakhtey hain!' WOH aapko khush wa tandurust rakhey!
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2013, 12:22:58 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 08, 2012, 06:10:54 AM

Main ney adhroun sey chhuaa,
Aur, rahey tum mook!
Tab sey tan-man mein satat
Rahee kokilaa kook!!

     - abd bundeli

wah...
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2013, 01:13:32 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on February 24, 2013, 12:22:58 PM
wah...

Shukriyah Suman ji!
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