Main Us Ko Soch lun Mujhe Manzil Dikhayi De.

by Rajnish.raaj on July 04, 2013, 02:42:09 AM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1209 times)
Rajnish.raaj
Guest
Reply with quote
Toofan Mein jaise Door Se Shahil Dikhayi De,
Main Us Ko Soch lun Mujhe Manzil Dikhayi De.

Har Aks Mein Dikhta Hai Ab Us Ka Hi Chehra,
Aise Wo Meri Rooh Mein Shamil Dikhayi De.

Mere Jaan Se Bhi Pyaara Hai Mehboob Mera,
Us Ki Har Adaa Muhabbat Ke Kabil Dikhayi De.

Us Ke Saath Chalna Mera Naseeb Hai Ya Nahin,
Bina Us Ke Ab Jina Mujhe Mushkil Dikhayi De.

Kash Mujhe Hashil Ho Jaye Us Ki Muhabbat,
Ye Sara Jahan Mujhe Phir Haashil Dikhayi De.
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
ye na pooch manzil kab milegi mujhe by Alam Qazi in Shayri-E-Dard
ho gayee manzil-e-ishq-o-ashiquee haasil mujhe by jianrangrej in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
ho gayee manzil-e-ishq-o-ashiquee haasil mujhe by jianrangrej in Shayri-E-Dard
Main apni soch ki har soch mein....Nazm by Yaseen Shahi by amj22224@yahoo.com in Share:Love Poetry
To Tum soch paate main Kya Ban gaya hu... by vipul kumar in Ghazals
sbechain
Guest
«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2013, 03:08:29 AM »
Reply with quote
Toofan Mein jaise Door Se Shahil Dikhayi De,
Main Us Ko Soch lun Mujhe Manzil Dikhayi De.
wah wah wah kya kahne ji.....! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Har Aks Mein Dikhta Hai Ab Us Ka Hi Chehra,
Aise Wo Meri Rooh Mein Shamil Dikhayi De.
bahut bahut khoob....!
Mere Jaan Se Bhi Pyaara Hai Mehboob Mera,
Us Ki Har Adaa Muhabbat Ke Kabil Dikhayi De.
subhaan allah......! icon_flower icon_flower
Us Ke Saath Chalna Mera Naseeb Hai Ya Nahin,
Bina Us Ke Ab Jina Mujhe Mushkil Dikhayi De.
wah wah wah...! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Kash Mujhe Hashil Ho Jaye Us Ki Muhabbat,
Ye Sara Jahan Mujhe Phir Haashil Dikhayi De.

kya khoob kya kahne....!


iss khubsoorat andaaz ko
ek rau dena laazim dikhaai de.........!
Logged
Advo.RavinderaRavi
Guest
«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2013, 03:20:11 AM »
Reply with quote
Bahut Khoob.
Logged
Rajnish.raaj
Guest
«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2013, 03:48:03 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks sheba
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2013, 09:08:54 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob
Logged
poonamA
Guest
«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2013, 12:00:23 PM »
Reply with quote
nice
Logged
Miru;;;;
Guest
«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2013, 12:35:01 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2013, 12:48:49 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2013, 04:35:57 PM »
Reply with quote
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Rajnish ji... bahut achchaa lagaa padh ke..... ek dum zabardassstttt ...!!!
Logged
nashwani
Guest
«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2013, 05:31:33 PM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut badhiya rajnish jee..Chha gayi apki ye rachna..happy9
Logged
aqsh
Guest
«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2013, 05:35:27 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaaaaaaaaaaaah aur sirf waaaaaaaaah. bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai aapne rajnish ji. is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad qubool kare..
Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2013, 10:48:01 PM »
Reply with quote

Rajnish Jee Aadaab... !


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai...
La jawaab andaaz e bayaaN aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal meiN ashaaroN ko piroya hai aapne...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez ...
Logged
Ram Saraswat
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 26
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
10 days, 7 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 999
Member Since: Apr 2008


View Profile
«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2013, 11:24:52 PM »
Reply with quote

Main Us Ko Soch lun Mujhe Manzil Dikhayi De.

Waah  Applause Applause Applause
Logged
iAdmin
Administrator
Yoindian Shayar
*****

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
49 days, 23 hours and 12 minutes.

Posts: 3125
Member Since: Dec 2003


View Profile
«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2013, 01:16:34 PM »
Reply with quote
Congratulations,

Your work has been featured in "Aug 2013 Yoindia Shayariadab Newsletter". We hope you will continue to grace this Bazm with your beautiful words always. Comments and feedback is appreciated.
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 14, 2024, 03:56:51 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.113 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8508 Real Poets and poetry admirer