----- /// Maine Dekha Tha /// -----

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kal subah use julfen lehraate huye maine dekha tha,
usko kisi ki baat pe khilkhilaate maine dekha tha,

ek parda meri khidki ka, ek parda uske ghar ka tha,
kal maine dono pardon ko ek saath uth_te dekha tha,

uski geeli aankhon me maine pyaar pyaar dekha tha,
uski komal kaaya ko maine bin shringaar dekha tha,

khile gulaab ki tarah kal maine usko khilte dekha tha,
kal kuch is tarha usko kali se phool bante dekha tha,

suraj ki pehli kiran ko kal maine uspe padte dekha tha,
apne rang se use maine suraj ko roshan karte dekha tha,

kal subah maine ek khoobsurat sa aisa sapna dekha tha,
aankhen band karke neend me maine usko apna dekha tha,

kal apne sapne me usko maine julfen lehraate dekha tha,
kal subah maine ek khoobsurat sa aisa sapna dekha tha.


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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2010, 09:35:46 PM »
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wah ji wah !!!!!

kya baat hai kapil ..........

Full of beauty.... Full of love ..........

BHUT KHOOB ....... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2010, 09:41:05 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Klaskar Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahen...


Yaash...
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2010, 04:17:46 AM »
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Waah ji waah bahut khoob kapil ji..bahut pyari peshakash hai apki...
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2010, 12:49:12 PM »
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thank you so much Neel ji...!!!

wah ji wah !!!!!

kya baat hai kapil ..........

Full of beauty.... Full of love ..........

BHUT KHOOB ....... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2010, 12:49:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Yaash ji,....!!!

Bohat Khoob Klaskar Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahen...


Yaash...
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2010, 12:50:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji....!!!

Waah ji waah bahut khoob kapil ji..bahut pyari peshakash hai apki...
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2010, 01:01:01 PM »
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wowwwwww........mastam mast poem kapil.....aate hi kya mast post dikhai hai tumne......
dil khush khush kar diya......
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kuch iska jawab likha hai ..itna achhca to nahin par koshish ki hai bhttttt din baad kuch likhne ki...
achcha na lage to avoid hmmmmm...

Subah ki pehli kiran aur wo madhosh nigaahein
Dono ka na jane kaisa asar tha mujhpe na jane

Wo dekh rahi thi mujhe tukur tukur kuch iss tarah
Koi ajuuba sa saamne dekh liya usne kya na jane

Khidki se jhankti unn do nigaahon me thi ek aisi kashish
Main bhi na bhuul paii wo ehsaas kaise na jane

Kholte hi parde ko takra gai thi unse nazar meri
Aur ho gai thi pehli hi nazar me guftaguu kya na jane

Uljhi si laton ko baandh kar maine sambhala jo dupatta
Laga jaise khidki se gir jayega wo kyun na jane

Uski aankhon me tha nasha kuch aisa k main bhi machal gai
Ho gaya ek pal me dil uska kyun ye wo na jane

Uska sapna kab meri hakikat ban gaya ye samjh na pai
Kaise hua ye mujhpe jaadu koi bhi ye na jane…….
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2010, 02:36:45 PM »
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Wah wah wah kapil tum tou khumaar kay rang es kadar beekher rahe ho ki koi bhee range bina na reh sake...ussme bheeg dube bina na reh sake... Applause Clapping Smiley

Lo Kapil tum bhi rang jaao in satrangi rango me....

Subah uthte meine parda khol kay dekha tha
Usha kee pratham kirno ko aamantri kiya tha

Samne wali khidki me koi khoyasa khada tha
Khuli aankho se wo meri oor aplak dekhta tha

Mein tou Suryadev kay darshan kar rahi thee
Wo tak-taki lagaaye Chand ko dekh raha tha

Achaanak nazarein hamaari aapas me takraayi
Tan-badan me mere beejlee ho jaise  lahraayee

Palkon ne tou jaise jhapakna he chhod diya tha
Aur Pyaasi Nazaron se wo mujhko pee raha tha

Hawa k ek jhonkhe ne julfein jo meri udaayee
Laga usse jaise Chanda pe badlee ho chhayee

Jhatak k apnee julfein lee jo meine angdaayee
Khuda gawah usski tou bas jaan pe ban aayee

Haan subah uthte he meine koi apnaasa dekha tha
Mere dil k Rajkumaar ko mujhe dekhte dekha tha


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kal subah use julfen lehraate huye maine dekha tha,
usko kisi ki baat pe khilkhilaate maine dekha tha,

ek parda meri khidki ka, ek parda uske ghar ka tha,
kal maine dono pardon ko ek saath uth_te dekha tha,

uski geeli aankhon me maine pyaar pyaar dekha tha,
uski komal kaaya ko maine bin shringaar dekha tha,

khile gulaab ki tarah kal maine usko khilte dekha tha,
kal kuch is tarha usko kali se phool bante dekha tha,

suraj ki pehli kiran ko kal maine uspe padte dekha tha,
apne rang se use maine suraj ko roshan karte dekha tha,

kal subah maine ek khoobsurat sa aisa sapna dekha tha,
aankhen band karke neend me maine usko apna dekha tha,

kal apne sapne me usko maine julfen lehraate dekha tha,
kal subah maine ek khoobsurat sa aisa sapna dekha tha.


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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2010, 02:54:41 PM »
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maar daala koyal rani maar daala.........itna khubsurat replyyyyy wowwwwwwwww amazing,,,,pyaar k nashe me bheega hua ..dil jhum utha padhke.....mastam mastttttttttt reeeeeeeeeeee Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Wah wah wah kapil tum tou khumaar kay rang es kadar beekher rahe ho ki koi bhee range bina na reh sake...ussme bheeg dube bina na reh sake... Applause Clapping Smiley

Lo Kapil tum bhi rang jaao in satrangi rango me....

Subah uthte meine parda khol kay dekha tha
Usha kee pratham kirno ko aamantri kiya tha

Samne wali khidki me koi khoyasa khada tha
Khuli aankho se wo meri oor aplak dekhta tha

Mein tou Suryadev kay darshan kar rahi thee
Wo tak-taki lagaaye Chand ko dekh raha tha

Achaanak nazarein hamaari aapas me takraayi
Tan-badan me mere beejlee ho jaise  lahraayee

Palkon ne tou jaise jhapakna he chhod diya tha
Aur Pyaasi Nazaron se wo mujhko pee raha tha

Hawa k ek jhonkhe ne julfein jo meri udaayee
Laga usse jaise Chanda pe badlee ho chhayee

Jhatak k apnee julfein lee jo meine angdaayee
Khuda gawah usski tou bas jaan pe ban aayee

Haan subah uthte he meine koi apnaasa dekha tha
Mere dil k Rajkumaar ko mujhe dekhte dekha tha


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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2010, 06:49:45 PM »
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K-BHAI..ek aur moti joda aapne...apne kavita sagar me... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Yaar kitna gehra gota lagaate ho...har baar moti chun late ho......


kal subah use julfen lehraate huye maine dekha tha,
usko kisi ki baat pe khilkhilaate maine dekha tha,

ek parda meri khidki ka, ek parda uske ghar ka tha,
kal maine dono pardon ko ek saath uth_te dekha tha,

uski geeli aankhon me maine pyaar pyaar dekha tha,
uski komal kaaya ko maine bin shringaar dekha tha,

khile gulaab ki tarah kal maine usko khilte dekha tha,
kal kuch is tarha usko kali se phool bante dekha tha,

suraj ki pehli kiran ko kal maine uspe padte dekha tha,
apne rang se use maine suraj ko roshan karte dekha tha,

kal subah maine ek khoobsurat sa aisa sapna dekha tha,
aankhen band karke neend me maine usko apna dekha tha,

kal apne sapne me usko maine julfen lehraate dekha tha,
kal subah maine ek khoobsurat sa aisa sapna dekha tha.


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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2010, 06:53:00 PM »
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Kasak ji aapka bhi jawaab nahi....haazir jawaab ho....moti ko
anguthi me jad leti ho..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wowwwwww........mastam mast poem kapil.....aate hi kya mast post dikhai hai tumne......
dil khush khush kar diya......
icon_flower icon_flower
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kuch iska jawab likha hai ..itna achhca to nahin par koshish ki hai bhttttt din baad kuch likhne ki...
achcha na lage to avoid hmmmmm...

Subah ki pehli kiran aur wo madhosh nigaahein
Dono ka na jane kaisa asar tha mujhpe na jane

Wo dekh rahi thi mujhe tukur tukur kuch iss tarah
Koi ajuuba sa saamne dekh liya usne kya na jane

Khidki se jhankti unn do nigaahon me thi ek aisi kashish
Main bhi na bhuul paii wo ehsaas kaise na jane

Kholte hi parde ko takra gai thi unse nazar meri
Aur ho gai thi pehli hi nazar me guftaguu kya na jane

Uljhi si laton ko baandh kar maine sambhala jo dupatta
Laga jaise khidki se gir jayega wo kyun na jane

Uski aankhon me tha nasha kuch aisa k main bhi machal gai
Ho gaya ek pal me dil uska kyun ye wo na jane

Uska sapna kab meri hakikat ban gaya ye samjh na pai
Kaise hua ye mujhpe jaadu koi bhi ye na jane…….
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«Reply #12 on: September 27, 2010, 06:55:52 PM »
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Kasak ji aapka bhi jawaab nahi....haazir jawaab ho....moti ko
anguthi me jad leti ho..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


kya krun anaam ji...moti se bht pyaar jo hai mujhe......
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«Reply #13 on: September 27, 2010, 07:02:58 PM »
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Koyal ji aapne tou kamaal kar diya jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Ab lagne laga Guddiya....badi ho gayee hai...... mubaarak ho.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

ITNI SUBAH-SUBAH NAA TUM UTHA KARO
PARDA TOU BILKUL BHI NAA KHOLA KARO

Hushn ko sajda karne walo ki kami nahi tum ye socha karo
Nazerein sab paak nahi hoti 'Chashmebadoor' samjha karo

  
Saamne wali khidki k Rajkumaar ko he tum naa dekha karo
Hum bhi tou hain yahaan par kabhi humko bhi parkha karo........



Wah wah wah kapil tum tou khumaar kay rang es kadar beekher rahe ho ki koi bhee range bina na reh sake...ussme bheeg dube bina na reh sake... Applause Clapping Smiley

Lo Kapil tum bhi rang jaao in satrangi rango me....

Subah uthte meine parda khol kay dekha tha
Usha kee pratham kirno ko aamantri kiya tha

Samne wali khidki me koi khoyasa khada tha
Khuli aankho se wo meri oor aplak dekhta tha

Mein tou Suryadev kay darshan kar rahi thee
Wo tak-taki lagaaye Chand ko dekh raha tha

Achaanak nazarein hamaari aapas me takraayi
Tan-badan me mere beejlee ho jaise  lahraayee

Palkon ne tou jaise jhapakna he chhod diya tha
Aur Pyaasi Nazaron se wo mujhko pee raha tha

Hawa k ek jhonkhe ne julfein jo meri udaayee
Laga usse jaise Chanda pe badlee ho chhayee

Jhatak k apnee julfein lee jo meine angdaayee
Khuda gawah usski tou bas jaan pe ban aayee

Haan subah uthte he meine koi apnaasa dekha tha
Mere dil k Rajkumaar ko mujhe dekhte dekha tha


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«Reply #14 on: September 27, 2010, 07:08:13 PM »
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Neki aur puchh-puchh....dekhiye Anuji....Hum kal jaa rahe hain...humein bahut he chinta thee apne MOTI ki....Ab jab aapko itna pyaar hai tou hum apna MOTI AAPKE PAAS CHHODE JAATE HAIN JI...Bada he wafaadaar jaan...var hai ji..... Winking

kya krun anaam ji...moti se bht pyaar jo hai mujhe......
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