----- /// Maine Dekha Tha /// ----- -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: September 28, 2010, 05:27:20 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Anaam ji...!!!

Quote from: ANAAM on September 27, 2010, 06:49:45 PM

K-BHAI..ek aur moti joda aapne...apne kavita sagar me... Applause

Yaar kitna gehra gota lagaate ho...har baar moti chun late ho......


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Re: ----- /// Maine Dekha Tha /// -----

«Reply #16 on: September 28, 2010, 05:30:02 AM »

thank you so much Koyal.. aap itne khoobsurti se taarif karte ho ki taarif bhi sharma jaye... aur aapne jo jawaab likha hai ek dum mast hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....

kal subah mujhe khwaab me uska chehra nazar aaya tha,
kal din me pehli baar mujhe ek chaand nazar aaya tha,

wo chaand jo bedaag tha, wo chaand jo ki paak tha,
kal subah mujhe khwaab me wo chaand nazar aaya tha,

hawaa ke jhaunke se udne laga wo dupatta uska,
dupatte ki aad me uska wo chehra nazar aaya tha,

uski har adaa me kal mujhe iqraar nazar aaya tha,
kal subah uski aankh me mujhe pyar nazar aaya tha...

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 27, 2010, 02:36:45 PM

Wah wah wah kapil tum tou khumaar kay rang es kadar beekher rahe ho ki koi bhee range bina na reh sake...ussme bheeg dube bina na reh sake... Applause

Lo Kapil tum bhi rang jaao in satrangi rango me....

Subah uthte meine parda khol kay dekha tha
Usha kee pratham kirno ko aamantri kiya tha

Samne wali khidki me koi khoyasa khada tha
Khuli aankho se wo meri oor aplak dekhta tha

Mein tou Suryadev kay darshan kar rahi thee
Wo tak-taki lagaaye Chand ko dekh raha tha

Achaanak nazarein hamaari aapas me takraayi
Tan-badan me mere beejlee ho jaise lahraayee

Palkon ne tou jaise jhapakna he chhod diya tha
Aur Pyaasi Nazaron se wo mujhko pee raha tha

Hawa k ek jhonkhe ne julfein jo meri udaayee
Laga usse jaise Chanda pe badlee ho chhayee

Jhatak k apnee julfein lee jo meine angdaayee
Khuda gawah usski tou bas jaan pe ban aayee

Haan subah uthte he meine koi apnaasa dekha tha
Mere dil k Rajkumaar ko mujhe dekhte dekha tha

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«Reply #17 on: September 28, 2010, 05:33:25 AM »

hmmmm aadat se majboor hain aap bhi.. koi kasar nahi chhodti taarif karte waqt... itni jyaada taarif karti hain aap ki padhte waqt sochta hoon ye taarif mere poem ke liye hi hai ya kisi aur k liye.... bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... aur aapke jawaab k kya kehne... ek dum aapke comment ki tarha ...mastammmm.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

na poochho yaaron mujhse mere dil ka tab kya haal hua,
nashili uski aankhon se jab mere aankhon ka milna hua,

bechaini uski aankhon me thi, apna to jal jaana hua,
dekho fir se koi kaise kisi shaama ka parwaana hua,

dekhte the khwaabon me jise, uska kuch aisa aana hua,
aankhon pe mere bas na chala, ye to uska deewana hua,

dekha usko angrai lete, dupatte me khudko chhupaate,
dekh geele hothon ko uske mera to tab mar jaana hua,

hosh hi tha maine khoya jab uska khidki pe aana hua,
khwab me aati thi kal tak, aaj haqeeqat me aana hua,

geet uspe likhna chaaha par shabdon ka gum jaana hua,
kal uske husn ke maikhaane me apna to behek jaana hua...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 27, 2010, 01:01:01 PM

wowwwwww........mastam mast poem kapil.....aate hi kya mast post dikhai hai tumne......
dil khush khush kar diya......

kuch iska jawab likha hai ..itna achhca to nahin par koshish ki hai bhttttt din baad kuch likhne ki...
achcha na lage to avoid hmmmmm...

Subah ki pehli kiran aur wo madhosh nigaahein
Dono ka na jane kaisa asar tha mujhpe na jane

Wo dekh rahi thi mujhe tukur tukur kuch iss tarah
Koi ajuuba sa saamne dekh liya usne kya na jane

Khidki se jhankti unn do nigaahon me thi ek aisi kashish
Main bhi na bhuul paii wo ehsaas kaise na jane

Kholte hi parde ko takra gai thi unse nazar meri
Aur ho gai thi pehli hi nazar me guftaguu kya na jane

Uljhi si laton ko baandh kar maine sambhala jo dupatta
Laga jaise khidki se gir jayega wo kyun na jane

Uski aankhon me tha nasha kuch aisa k main bhi machal gai
Ho gaya ek pal me dil uska kyun ye wo na jane

Uska sapna kab meri hakikat ban gaya ye samjh na pai
Kaise hua ye mujhpe jaadu koi bhi ye na jane…….


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«Reply #18 on: September 28, 2010, 06:19:55 AM »

aahhhhaaaaaaaaaaa kapil kya khubsurat subah ho gai hai aaj ki.....
wo aankhon aankhon me ishare wo baatein sab yaad aagai re.....
uffffffff
lo ji mera rplyyyyy..maza aaraha hai likhne me..

Kya kahun ab main uske aage ki daastaan
Mere dil me to jaise kisi ka thaher jana hua

Un nazron me thi kuch aisi kashish ki jaise
Wo har janam me sirf mera hi deewana hua

Pehli nazar me hi laga mujhe aise jaise
Uska mere ghar me roz ka aana jana hua

Na jaan na pehchaan fir bhi wo ajnabee
Kyun iss tarah mere husn ka parwana hua

Angdai li to thaam k baith gaya wo dil
Aur dekh use meri muskaan ka fail jana hua

Meri muskurahut pe wo kho baitha dil ko
Aur uske iss andaaz pe mera bhi dil deewana hua

Ab to khyaalon khwaabon pe chhaya hai bas wo
Uski yaad me fir aaj mere dil ka bechain ho jana hua…!!!

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«Reply #19 on: September 28, 2010, 07:20:30 AM »

aaj lag raha hai prem ras ki baarish zoron pe hai.. bahut tez barsaat ho rahi hai.. baadal bhi garaj rahe hain aur bheegne me bada hi mazaa aaraha hai... itne din se ye sab mis u miss u kar raha tha main.. ab jaake jaan me jaan aayi hai... bahut achcha lag raha hai yun likhte jaana aapke saath... bahut achcha likha hai aapne...

aaj kuch is qadar mehek raha hai saara samaa,
jaane kaise khushboo ka mere ghar aana hua,

har gulaab aaj kuch zyaada hi laal hai,
aur us rang me tere hothon ka rang jaana hua,

samundar me bhi lehren aaj kuch paagal si hain,
aur unke paagalpan me mera bhi behek jaana hua,

dekh ke teri husn ki jaadugari aaj fir se,
mera to aaj khayaalon me kahin gum jaana hua,

likhe the kai geet teri mohabbat k naam humne,
aaj apne hothon se un geeton ka gungunana hua,

kal tak teri muskaan dekh tadapte the hum,
aaj tujhe dekh mere hothon ka muskuraana hua,

tujhe baahon me bhane ki chaahat jaagi hai aaj,
jaane kyun ye paagal aaj fir se deewaana hua,

chumne tere labo ki laali teri or badh jaana hua,
dekh teri madmast jawaani mera to behek jaana hua,

tere chaahat ke samundar me mera to doob jaana hua,
kisi toofaan ka aake mere chaukhat pe thahar jaana hua,

aake meri bahon me aaj tera to pighal jaana hua,
aaj fir se ye dil teri mohabbat ka deewaana hua...


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«Reply #20 on: September 28, 2010, 07:22:22 AM »

Wah! Kapil Bahut umda lekh hai aap ki
Kya mehfil jami hai


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«Reply #21 on: September 28, 2010, 07:36:50 AM »

Hayeeeeeeeeeee reeeeeeeee…
sach me nasha sa chha raha hai tumhare geeton se…….wowwwwwww
Mastam maza hai ye…sach me bearish me bheegna hai to chalo le chalein bearish ki uss yaad me tumhe…….

Abhi to kal hi dekha hai maine tumhe
Aur aaj dil tumse fir milne ko baawra hua

Subah fir se tere deedar k intezar me
Raat bhar mera karwat badalte jan hua

Subah jab tadke hi aankh khuli meri
Nazron ka fir usi khidki pe pahonch jana hua

Khud se hi sharma gai main haayeeeee
Ye kaise mera dil kisika deewana hua

Pahonch gai main alsaai si usi dariche par
Jahan se uski nazar ka mere dil ko ishara hua

Tabhi kahin se baadal aaye zor se rimjhim hui
Ghanghor barsaat k sath mere uss deewane ka aana hua

Dhak se reh gaya ye dil uski muskaan se
Jab nazron ka hamari ekduje se mil jana hua

Sharma k ghabrake main palat gai lekin
Uski nazron ka teer fir bhi dil me mere utar jana hua

Mahek gai saansein uss bheege mausam me
Jab haule se uska mera naam le pukaarna hua

Aage ka haal bhi kahungi main tumse kabhi
Abhi to ye sab soch k mera ab bahek jana hua……!!!


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«Reply #22 on: September 28, 2010, 07:55:12 AM »

hmmmm bheego hi diya fir se mujhe baarish me aapne aur khud bhi bheeg gaye... ab itna nasha karenge to log hum dono ko bewda kahenge na ... baat bigad jayegi fir to... kaise control karein ji... aadat kharaab ho rahi hai... yun roz roz khidki pe aise na aaya karo ji...

aaj fir se us khidki pe mera thahar jaana hua,
dekh ke tujhe parde me chhipte mera muskuraana hua,

baarish bhi bahut khoob thi, garajte baadal bhi the,
mohabbat ki us baarish me fir tera bheeg jaana hua,

dekh tere bheege badan ko, chunri ko tere bheege huye,
mera khud ko chunri samajh tujhse lipat jaana hua,

aaj tujhko dekh jaise aankh bhi maikhaana hua,
aankhon se tujhko pi bhi liya, mera machal jaana hua,

baarish ki ek boond ko tere hothon pe rukte dekh,
khud ko wo boond samajh tere hothon ko chhuu jaana hua,

aankh teri jhuk si gayi, tera kuch yun sharmaana hua,
jab beheki us baarish me hamaara khidki pe nazar aana hua,

kya kahoon us baarish ka main uska kuch yun aana hua,
bheeg ke us baarish me hi tan badan ka jal jaana hua....


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«Reply #23 on: September 28, 2010, 09:55:09 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji....!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 28, 2010, 07:22:22 AM

Wah! Kapil Bahut umda lekh hai aap ki
Kya mehfil jami hai


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«Reply #24 on: September 28, 2010, 10:54:05 AM »

Kya kahu zarre ko aasmaan pe beetha rahi ho Anu-di..... icon_flower

Jaanti hu aap jaisa achha nahi likh paati....
par koshish kar rahi hu... notworthy

aapki shagird ban k....eklavya k jaise.... Winking

Guru-Dakshina mai ungaliyen mat maang lena.... Giggle

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 27, 2010, 02:54:41 PM

maar daala koyal rani maar daala.........itna khubsurat replyyyyy wowwwwwwwww amazing,,,,pyaar k nashe me bheega hua ..dil jhum utha padhke.....mastam mastttttttttt reeeeeeeeeeee

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«Reply #25 on: September 28, 2010, 10:59:33 AM »

Anaamji aapka tahe dil se shukriya.... icon_flower

Umra k saath bada tou hona he hai....kab tak tum log mujhe Gudiya bulaaoge... Winking

Aapne bhi bahut achha lika hai.... Applause

Are haan tum tou jaa rahe ho....Bon-voyege Anaam ji.....Khoob masti se ghoom k aana....Yo ko hum sambhaal lenge...dont worry.... wave

Quote from: ANAAM on September 27, 2010, 07:02:58 PM

Koyal ji aapne tou kamaal kar diya jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Ab lagne laga Guddiya....badi ho gayee hai...... mubaarak ho.... Applause

ITNI SUBAH-SUBAH NAA TUM UTHA KARO
PARDA TOU BILKUL BHI NAA KHOLA KARO

Hushn ko sajda karne walo ki kami nahi tum ye socha karo
Nazerein sab paak nahi hoti 'Chashmebadoor' samjha karo

Saamne wali khidki k Rajkumaar ko he tum naa dekha karo
Hum bhi tou hain yahaan par kabhi humko bhi parkha karo........


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«Reply #26 on: September 28, 2010, 11:03:04 AM »

Kapil ji yu shaminda naa kijiye....
hum kab aapke saath likh paate hain...
Ye tou bas yu he mood aagya tha....
Warna hamaara aalas kab udta hai.....Thanks a lot..

Quote from: klaskar on September 28, 2010, 05:30:02 AM

thank you so much Koyal.. aap itne khoobsurti se taarif karte ho ki taarif bhi sharma jaye... aur aapne jo jawaab likha hai ek dum mast hai... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....


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«Reply #27 on: September 28, 2010, 11:48:46 AM »

wah jiii dher sari daad kapil jiii apke or anu ji ke liyeee


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«Reply #28 on: September 28, 2010, 12:58:29 PM »

U r welcome ... bahut achcha likha hai sach me Koyal aapne...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on September 28, 2010, 11:03:04 AM

Kapil ji yu shaminda naa kijiye....
hum kab aapke saath likh paate hain...
Ye tou bas yu he mood aagya tha....
Warna hamaara aalas kab udta hai.....Thanks a lot..


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«Reply #29 on: September 28, 2010, 08:38:20 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 28, 2010, 11:48:46 AM

wah jiii dher sari daad kapil jiii apke or anu ji ke liyeee


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