Maine phank laga liye hain

by mistufer on July 04, 2009, 06:06:51 PM
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Maine pankh laga liye hain
aao tum bhi pankh laga lo
aaj ek udhan bhar lain
le chalein hum khud ko
badlon ke uss paar

bhar le aaj jholi sitaron ke sang
banalein ghar pahadon par
bichayain chadar sitaron se
suraj sang khelain holi
siraton ke deep jalakar

khuli waadiyon mein ghoom aayain
gulmohar ke phool bichayain
kahi koyal ki kuhu kuhu
kahin papiye ki pihu pihu
soonkar apna jee bahlayain
aao aaj hum bhi apne pankh failayain.

Nira
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2009, 06:15:18 PM »
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Wah Nira ji,very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 09:01:49 PM »
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Bohot hi behtarein creation hai nira ji...
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 10:09:11 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Nira Ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2009, 02:08:28 AM »
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Waah.. Bohot achhi nazm hai nira ji bohot achha likhte hain aap...
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2009, 04:45:10 AM »
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Wah Didi.. PYaar Bhare Ehasaaason Ko Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai..!! aur Lafzon Ko Jis khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai.. Waqai Tareef Ke Qaabil Hai.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2009, 04:52:31 AM »
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Quote from: Nira on July 04, 2009, 06:06:51 PM


Maine pankh laga liye hain
aao tum bhi pankh laga lo
aaj ek udhan bhar lain
le chalein hum khud ko
badlon ke uss paar

bhar le aaj jholi sitaron ke sang
banalein ghar pahadon par
bichayain chadar sitaron se
suraj sang khelain holi
siraton ke deep jalakar

khuli waadiyon mein ghoom aayain
gulmohar ke phool bichayain
kahi koyal ki kuhu kuhu
kahin papiye ki pihu pihu
soonkar apna jee bahlayain
aao aaj hum bhi apne pankh failayain.

Nira



khoob nira ji bhut khoob very nice creation
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2009, 07:11:55 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Nira Ji.
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 08:02:12 AM »
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Wah Wah, Nira Ji, Bahut he pyaari kalaam hai! Bahut Khoob! Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 03:50:45 PM »
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So beautiful Nira Ji... Bahoot hi pyari rachna hai,... bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2009, 05:20:56 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 04, 2009, 06:15:18 PM
Wah Nira ji,very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

madhu ji
aapki hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya
nira
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«Reply #11 on: July 06, 2009, 05:23:53 AM »
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Bahut khoob NIRA JI Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 06, 2009, 06:05:16 PM »
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Quote from: superspawn10 on July 04, 2009, 09:01:49 PM
Bohot hi behtarein creation hai nira ji...

suparspawn ji

aapka ko pasand aayi rachna aapka shukriya adaa karti hoon
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«Reply #13 on: July 06, 2009, 06:06:21 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 04, 2009, 10:09:11 PM
Bahut Khoob Nira Ji

rajesh ji shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: July 06, 2009, 06:06:53 PM »
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bahoot khoob Nira ji!!!
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