Maine phank laga liye hain

by mistufer on July 04, 2009, 06:06:51 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 06, 2009, 06:07:52 PM »
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Waah.. Bohot achhi nazm hai nira ji bohot achha likhte hain aap...

sayyid ji
hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya
nira
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«Reply #16 on: July 06, 2009, 06:08:40 PM »
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bahoot khoob Nira ji!!!

pooja ji

thanks aapko poem pasand aayi
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«Reply #17 on: July 06, 2009, 06:11:45 PM »
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Wah Didi.. PYaar Bhare Ehasaaason Ko Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai..!! aur Lafzon Ko Jis khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai.. Waqai Tareef Ke Qaabil Hai.. Applause Applause

thank u vickyyyy
aapko yeh pyaar ka rang bhi pasand aaya


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #18 on: July 06, 2009, 06:15:02 PM »
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khoob nira ji bhut khoob very nice creation

aaina

aapki saharna ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
nira
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«Reply #19 on: July 06, 2009, 06:17:22 PM »
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Bahot khoob Nira ji, bahot hi khumaar se bhari kavita likhi aapne,awesome poem

kaash ji
aapko pasand aayi kavita
bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #20 on: July 06, 2009, 06:18:17 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Nira Ji.

sammual ji

bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #21 on: July 07, 2009, 09:04:48 PM »
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Maine pankh laga liye hain
aao tum bhi pankh laga lo
aaj ek udhan bhar lain
le chalein hum khud ko
badlon ke uss paar

bhar le aaj jholi sitaron ke sang
banalein ghar pahadon par
bichayain chadar sitaron se
suraj sang khelain holi
siraton ke deep jalakar

khuli waadiyon mein ghoom aayain
gulmohar ke phool bichayain
kahi koyal ki kuhu kuhu
kahin papiye ki pihu pihu
soonkar apna jee bahlayain
aao aaj hum bhi apne pankh failayain.

Nira

Good work Nira ji!!
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«Reply #22 on: July 08, 2009, 03:51:44 AM »
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Maine pankh laga liye hain
aao tum bhi pankh laga lo
aaj ek udhan bhar lain
le chalein hum khud ko
badlon ke uss paar

bhar le aaj jholi sitaron ke sang
banalein ghar pahadon par
bichayain chadar sitaron se
suraj sang khelain holi
siraton ke deep jalakar

khuli waadiyon mein ghoom aayain
gulmohar ke phool bichayain
kahi koyal ki kuhu kuhu
kahin papiye ki pihu pihu
soonkar apna jee bahlayain
aao aaj hum bhi apne pankh failayain.

Nira

Ati sundar.... with lovely color image  Applause
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 04:33:49 AM »
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Wah Wah, Nira Ji, Bahut he pyaari kalaam hai! Bahut Khoob! Applause

deepati ji
aapko pasand aayi rachna
bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #24 on: July 08, 2009, 04:35:18 AM »
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So beautiful Nira Ji... Bahoot hi pyari rachna hai,... bahoot khoob!

sophi ji
aapki hausla afzaayi ka dil se shukriya adaa karti hoon
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«Reply #25 on: July 08, 2009, 04:37:20 AM »
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Good work Nira ji!!

pooja ji
thanks a lot
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«Reply #26 on: July 08, 2009, 04:38:44 AM »
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Ati sundar.... with lovely color image  Applause

roja sis
aapko yahan dekhkar acha laga
kavita pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
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