Maine unki nigaah mein...

by daljeet_faqeer on March 28, 2010, 11:16:13 AM
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Maine unki nigaah mein pyar dekha hai,
mere aane ka besabr intezaar dekha hai.

Ye baat aur hai ishq woh kaboolte nahin sareaam,
chuppke se jharokhe tale iqraar dekha hai.

Raah pe chalna chalke rukna aur mudkar dekhna,
isi ada ko uski humne beqarar dekha hai.

Mana woh humse dil ki baat kehne mein sharmate hain,
khat mila unka khat mein izhaar dekha hai.

Saath mere guzar denge woh tamam umar sanam,
unki khamoshi ne wafa pe aitbaar dekha hai.

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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2010, 12:12:32 PM »
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bahut achhe daljeet ji.
Quote from: daljeet_faqeer on March 28, 2010, 11:16:13 AM
Maine unki nigaah mein pyar dekha hai,
mere aane ka besabr intezaar dekha hai.

Ye baat aur hai ishq woh kaboolte nahin sareaam,
chuppke se jharokhe tale iqraar dekha hai.

Raah pe chalna chalke rukna aur mudkar dekhna,
isi ada ko uski humne beqarar dekha hai.

Mana woh humse dil ki baat kehne mein sharmate hain,
khat mila unka khat mein izhaar dekha hai.

Saath mere guzar denge woh tamam umar sanam,
unki khamoshi ne wafa pe aitbaar dekha hai.

                        Daljeet'faqeer'
 
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2010, 01:29:38 PM »
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Bahut Accha Daljeet Ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2010, 01:48:41 PM »
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Wow Daljeet ji bahut pasand aayi aapke poem,mindblowing creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause keep it up.
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2010, 09:06:02 AM »
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waah daljeet ji bahut hi badhiya likha hai...
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2010, 09:34:46 AM »
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Bohat KhuuB Daljeet ji ... u write superb ... keep writing ... wanna see some more beautiful creations



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