~~maloom na tha~~

by Naya_Daur on December 29, 2005, 09:42:48 AM
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Berukhi is kader dikhaenge maloom na tha,
bas chand roz me badal jaienge maloom na tha,

wo bholapan, masumiat, dil lubaya jis ne,
dil laga kar dil jalayenge maloom na tha.

Yun to khaate rahe kasme sath jeene marne ki,
 chand kadmo pe dagmagaynge ye maloom na tha,

Humne to unko khuda mana tha magar
wo apna bhi na banyenge, maloom na tha,

Bach k nikalte hain log kanto se suna tha humne,
hum phool me hi ulajh jayenge ye maloom na tha...
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2006, 12:27:07 PM »
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wah jeet amazing work!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2006, 12:41:42 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Yaar,..

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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2006, 08:46:52 PM »
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Thanks Gesu n Jsheen

teri chahat yeh sab likhwayegi mehfil mein
maloom na tha

tu har jagah mujhe nazar aayegi
maloom na tha

tere aane se har lamha gungunayega
maloom na tha

teri liye deewangi iss kadar bard jayegi
maloom na tha

khumar-e-IshQ mein kabhi likhunga dard-e-dil
maloom na tha

Teri yaadein  Is qadar satayeingi
maloom na tha....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2006, 11:26:20 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai, dono hi poems bahoot achi likhi hai Jeet!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2006, 10:03:03 AM »
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Thanks Gesu n Jsheen

teri chahat yeh sab likhwayegi mehfil mein
maloom na tha

tu har jagah mujhe nazar aayegi
maloom na tha

tere aane se har lamha gungunayega
maloom na tha

teri liye deewangi iss kadar bard jayegi
maloom na tha

khumar-e-IshQ mein kabhi likhunga dard-e-dil
maloom na tha

Teri yaadein  Is qadar satayeingi
maloom na tha....!!!


wah jeet behadd khoobsuratt!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2006, 10:07:18 AM »
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Ishq kya kya rang dikhayegi
Maloom na tha,
Teri rooh mere jism mein utar jaayegi
Maloom na tha,
Ibaadatt to karte hi hain khuda ki per yeh dua kabool hogi
Maloom na tha,
Bahut suni thi hamne woh pariyon ki kahani
Kabhi guzregi khud per bhi hamein yeh
Maloom na tha,
Sharab pee ke kehte hain nashaa chadta hai
Karega pyar bhi madhosh hamein yeh
Maloom na tha,
Chalte thhey in waadiyon mein pahele bhi
Kisi modh per farishta bhi mil sakta hai hamein yeh
Maloom na tha...........

gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2006, 10:50:25 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai, kamal ka likha hai Gesu.... good job!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2006, 02:18:46 PM »
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wow yaar...all the poems are superb..gr8 work Jeet and Gesu
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2006, 03:11:55 PM »
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Thanks Gesu,Pooja n Rishi

Gesu apne bhut acha likha :D
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2006, 03:21:42 PM »
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Yoon dil tera bhi meri tarah bekarar hai, maloom na tha
Yoon karti tu bhi mujh par jaa.N-nisar hai, maoom na tha

Dil ke jazbaat ye khayalaat pyar hai maloom na tha
Dagar Tay kartey chalein sath sath zamane mein..
Manzil kiski, Mehfil kiski, thikana humein maloom na tha
Baaton-2 mein hojaata hai bukhar-e-isq, maloon na tha..
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2006, 03:09:59 AM »
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Thats really nice Neer....
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2006, 06:42:11 AM »
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shukriya janaab shukriya bahut khoob.. neer ji excellent work!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2006, 05:06:44 PM »
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bahut khoob jeet

dil na bhulega unhe ham ko ya maloom na tha
bhool jaenge vo yun ye bhi to maloom natha
tujh ko dekha tha sanam itani khata thi meri
ishq me dard yun hoga ye tab maloom natha
furqaten jitani badhi ishq mera utna chadha
ye nasha karne se pahle mujhe maloom na tha
nafraten karke bhi dekha hai kabhi bhool ke bhi
dil me vo aur hansega ye to maloom na tha
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«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2006, 08:03:55 AM »
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bahoot KHoob Doston Lage rahe,..
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