mata e sukhan

by deetri1 on May 26, 2008, 08:17:43 PM
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shauk e nazzara e jamaal nahi hai
aaj sachmuch tera khayaal nahi hai

phir tere kooche ko chal pada dil
ye ab bhi shareek e malaal nahi hai

teri jafa se bada hunar nahi koi
meri wafa se bada kamaal nahi hai

tera husn pur kashish hai magar
mere ishq ki bhi misaal nahi hai

meri deewanagi pe koi sawal uthe
ab mere aage ye sawaal nahi hai

din se raat ko bhi milte dekha
tere firaq me magar visaal nahi hai

sab kuchh chhod kar ishq kar baithe
samajhte the,ki ye bawaal nahi hai

muflisi me bhi jeena muhaal nahi hai
mata e sukhan se shayir kangaal nahi hai

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«Reply #1 on: May 27, 2008, 01:09:30 PM »
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Sachmuch aapne bahut accha likha hai.  Applause love4
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2008, 06:19:22 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai deepak ji!! bahoot he khubsurat rachna likhi hai apne!!! Good Job!!

yah lines to kamal ki likhi hai apne:

teri jafa se bada hunar nahi koi
meri wafa se bada kamaal nahi hai
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2008, 05:29:02 PM »
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deepak bhai,

aapki taareef kitni aur kub talak!

teri shaayri-e-daastan sun-ne ko
mujh se jyada koi betaab nahi he
bohut kuch he mere paas bhee
pur teri likhi kitaab nahi he!

Prateek
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2008, 05:33:54 PM »
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Good one Prateek ji!!
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2008, 09:11:56 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Deetri.....Nice lines Prateek !
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2008, 01:43:25 PM »
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thanks prateek bhai
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2011, 02:43:52 AM »
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Bahut Ache janaab,
Bahut khoob

1000 dad apke ashaar par

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