~ Mausam ka Khumar~

by deepika_divya on June 26, 2007, 07:13:54 AM
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Bini bini khusbu mitti kikuch ehsaas jaga rahi hai
Behak rahi hai saansein, betabi mujhe aagosh mea barti ja rahi hai

Na jaane kesa ye akhumar hum par chane laga hai
Dil, Dhadkhan aur saansein bekabu hoti ja rahi hai

Machalane lagi hun main bhi is sard mausam ki aad mein
Sanam k pyar ki bela chup chup ajab si aas jaga rahi hai

Na jaanu mein, kyun lab par apne aap hi muskarahat cha rahi hai
Cham cham barasati Versha mein teri yaadein kahin armaan jaga rahi hai

Dekh meri madhoshi ko sanam , SAAVAN bhi dekho
Masti mein doob lehar lehar Phool(bunde) barsa rahi hai

J kabhi na mehsoos hua tha man ka bhav
Use ehsaasa kar meri nazre bhi saram se jhuki ja rahi hai

Sun re basanti bela, aur na tadapa mujhe
Tri aad mea yea pawan ki lehere mere man ko gudguda rahi hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2007, 07:22:14 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Divya Ji.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Rachna Pesh Ki hai aapne... !!!!!

Aisa Laga Jaise YO par Basanti Pawan chal nikli Ho aur Saawan Bhigo Raha Ho..!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Bahut Bahut khooooob Divya Ji.. Mazaa Aa Gaya Padh kar..!!!


Vicky
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2007, 10:10:43 AM »
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Really Beautiful Shayari... Divya... =D>
Good Going... Winking
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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2007, 11:09:27 AM »
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good yaar mast hai jayda to samjha nahi per jo likha hai or samjh mai aaya hai....i cant explain this time....!
anyways good going....but kaha tak...................?
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2007, 03:59:47 AM »
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Quote from: "deepika_divya"
Bini bini khusbu mitti kikuch ehsaas jaga rahi hai
Behak rahi hai saansein, betabi mujhe aagosh mea barti ja rahi hai

Na jaane kesa ye akhumar hum par chane laga hai
Dil, Dhadkhan aur saansein bekabu hoti ja rahi hai

Machalane lagi hun main bhi is sard mausam ki aad mein
Sanam k pyar ki bela chup chup ajab si aas jaga rahi hai

Na jaanu mein, kyun lab par apne aap hi muskarahat cha rahi hai
Cham cham barasati Versha mein teri yaadein kahin armaan jaga rahi hai

Dekh meri madhoshi ko sanam , SAAVAN bhi dekho
Masti mein doob lehar lehar Phool(bunde) barsa rahi hai

J kabhi na mehsoos hua tha man ka bhav
Use ehsaasa kar meri nazre bhi saram se jhuki ja rahi hai

Sun re basanti bela, aur na tadapa mujhe
Tri aad mea yea pawan ki lehere mere man ko gudguda rahi hai


bhoot achee rachana aapne fir pesh kee hai divya jee kamal kar diya aapne to

ye aalma n sard havaao ka hai na sawan ki rim jim ka
tune dekha hee khuk do jee bahar khar, madmast jawaani ka hai

ab tak to kheli thi to bachapan me apne hee
aaj hogyee too solha hee, madhosh to is sawan me yowan karta hai

ab tak n sharmayee the jamane me too
ab jan gayee ho tum, nirmal se yowan ka chitwan tujh kyo sharmata hai

netra.....
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: June 27, 2007, 03:51:38 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai divya bahoot hi khoob likha hai.... nice reply Netra ji!! :D
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2007, 05:08:22 PM »
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Bini bini khusbu mitti kikuch ehsaas jaga rahi hai
Behak rahi hai saansein, betabi mujhe aagosh mea barti ja rahi hai

Na jaane kesa ye akhumar hum par chane laga hai
Dil, Dhadkhan aur saansein bekabu hoti ja rahi hai

Machalane lagi hun main bhi is sard mausam ki aad mein
Sanam k pyar ki bela chup chup ajab si aas jaga rahi hai

Na jaanu mein, kyun lab par apne aap hi muskarahat cha rahi hai
Cham cham barasati Versha mein teri yaadein kahin armaan jaga rahi hai

Dekh meri madhoshi ko sanam , SAAVAN bhi dekho
Masti mein doob lehar lehar Phool(bunde) barsa rahi hai

J kabhi na mehsoos hua tha man ka bhav
Use ehsaasa kar meri nazre bhi saram se jhuki ja rahi hai

Sun re basanti bela, aur na tadapa mujhe
Tri aad mea yea pawan ki lehere mere man ko gudguda rahi hai
wan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! deepika ji very nice poem,,,,,, its really gud,,,,


aaj man hai kuchh sharaarat ka,
aur ye mausam bhi baimaan hai,
koi ruth bhi kaise sakta hai is mausam mein,
hai ye kaisa imtihaan hai.

jab chhua mujhe bundo ne,
laga mujhe ki tumne chhua hai,
ye jaadu hai saara mausam ka,
na jaane mujhe kya hua hai.

yu thandi hawa chalti jab,
na jaane kyun ye jism jalta hai,
dasti hai ye tanhaai mujhko,
ye dil bas tumko yaad karta hai.

humko yu tadapa kar is mausan mein,
aise sapno mein khoye hai,
humaari neende uda kar yu,
khud chain se soye hain.

hai kabhi bhi koi kisi ko aisa din na dikhaaye,
E- chain se sone waale ek din tujhe khuda bhi aise hi tadpaaye.......

**************************************** jiya .....


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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2007, 07:37:55 PM »
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bahut khub divyaaaaaaaaa

sakhi
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2009, 12:27:13 PM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Divya Ji.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Rachna Pesh Ki hai aapne... !!!!!

Aisa Laga Jaise YO par Basanti Pawan chal nikli Ho aur Saawan Bhigo Raha Ho..!!! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Bahut Bahut khooooob Divya Ji.. Mazaa Aa Gaya Padh kar..!!!


Vicky

Thank you so much Mann for  all your appreciation
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2009, 12:31:44 PM »
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good yaar mast hai jayda to samjha nahi per jo likha hai or samjh mai aaya hai....i cant explain this time....!
anyways good going....but kaha tak...................?


Thank you Nikhil .. Miss u Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2009, 12:32:32 PM »
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bhoot achee rachana aapne fir pesh kee hai divya jee kamal kar diya aapne to

ye aalma n sard havaao ka hai na sawan ki rim jim ka
tune dekha hee khuk do jee bahar khar, madmast jawaani ka hai

ab tak to kheli thi to bachapan me apne hee
aaj hogyee too solha hee, madhosh to is sawan me yowan karta hai

ab tak n sharmayee the jamane me too
ab jan gayee ho tum, nirmal se yowan ka chitwan tujh kyo sharmata hai

netra.....


Waah Waah Kya khoob kaha hai Netrapal ji Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2009, 12:33:03 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai divya bahoot hi khoob likha hai.... nice reply Netra ji!! :D

Thank you so so so much Pooja di  Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 27, 2009, 12:34:01 PM »
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wan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! deepika ji very nice poem,,,,,, its really gud,,,,


aaj man hai kuchh sharaarat ka,
aur ye mausam bhi baimaan hai,
koi ruth bhi kaise sakta hai is mausam mein,
hai ye kaisa imtihaan hai.

jab chhua mujhe bundo ne,
laga mujhe ki tumne chhua hai,
ye jaadu hai saara mausam ka,
na jaane mujhe kya hua hai.

yu thandi hawa chalti jab,
na jaane kyun ye jism jalta hai,
dasti hai ye tanhaai mujhko,
ye dil bas tumko yaad karta hai.

humko yu tadapa kar is mausan mein,
aise sapno mein khoye hai,
humaari neende uda kar yu,
khud chain se soye hain.

hai kabhi bhi koi kisi ko aisa din na dikhaaye,
E- chain se sone waale ek din tujhe khuda bhi aise hi tadpaaye.......

**************************************** jiya .....




Waah Waah Jiya ji.. Itna khumaar ?? Bahoot hi romantic likha hai .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #13 on: September 27, 2009, 12:34:24 PM »
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bahut khub divyaaaaaaaaa

sakhi

Thank you so much Sakhi Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2012, 07:24:29 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Applause
aajkal log kam hi aate hai.
shayad is baarish ke mausam me sab raaste paani se bhar chuke hai.
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