Mauz RawaaN ho jae ...................................................(PWFS)

by pankajwfs on April 01, 2012, 11:22:40 AM
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MuddatoN thehri rahi hai ye mann ki jheel..
Ek patthar to uchaalo ke mauj rawaaN ho jae.

Ab ke jo mil to kuch is tarha khul ke mil,
Ke bujhti hui shamma phir se jawaaN ho jae.

Na ho koi gila sikwa na dar-o-deewar darmiyaN
Do dil ki ek awaaz ye aavaaz-e-azaaN ho jae.

Wo chand ka tukda hai ya teri chudi ki chamak
khanaka ise aise ke muddaii bad-gumaaN ho jae.

LaboN ki Larjish se aa hila dein ye sara alam
Sharara aag ban jae har ek gam dhuwaaN ho jae.

Sunata raha akshar raqeeb teri jafa ke kissey
Mere pehlu me tum ajao to wo be-jubaaN ho jae.

Jare jare ko jod ke tayaar kiya ye khana-e-dil
Har ek me tera aks nazar aye to makaaN ho jae.

BaghbaaN raha hai rahega ban ke tera 'pankaj'.
Gulfaam tum hojao sehra bhi gulistaan ho jae

(PWFS 01/04/2012)




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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2012, 11:50:51 AM »
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MuddatoN thehri rahi hai ye mann ki jheel..
Ek patthar to uchaalo ke mauj rawaaN ho jae.

Ab ke jo mil to kuch is tarha khul ke mil,
Ke bujhti hui shamma phir se jawaaN ho jae.

Na ho koi gila sikwa na dar-o-deewar darmiyaN
Do dil ki ek awaaz ye aavaaz-e-azaaN ho jae.

Wo chand ka tukda hai ya teri chudi ki chamak
khanaka ise aise ke muddaii bad-gumaaN ho jae.

LaboN ki Larjish se aa hila dein ye sara alam
Sharara aag ban jae har ek gam dhuwaaN ho jae.

Sunata raha akshar raqeeb teri jafa ke kissey
Mere pehlu me tum ajao to wo be-jubaaN ho jae.

Jare jare ko jod ke tayaar kiya ye khana-e-dil
Har ek me tera aks nazar aye to makaaN ho jae.

BaghbaaN raha hai rahega ban ke tera 'pankaj'.
Gulfaam tum hojao sehra bhi gulistaan ho jae

(PWFS 01/04/2012)





what a beautifull composition
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2012, 11:53:14 AM »
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MuddatoN thehri rahi hai ye mann ki jheel..
Ek patthar to uchaalo ke mauj rawaaN ho jae.

Ab ke jo mil to kuch is tarha khul ke mil,
Ke bujhti hui shamma phir se jawaaN ho jae.

Na ho koi gila sikwa na dar-o-deewar darmiyaN
Do dil ki ek awaaz ye aavaaz-e-azaaN ho jae.

Wo chand ka tukda hai ya teri chudi ki chamak
khanaka ise aise ke muddaii bad-gumaaN ho jae.

LaboN ki Larjish se aa hila dein ye sara alam
Sharara aag ban jae har ek gam dhuwaaN ho jae.

Sunata raha akshar raqeeb teri jafa ke kissey
Mere pehlu me tum ajao to wo be-jubaaN ho jae.

Jare jare ko jod ke tayaar kiya ye khana-e-dil
Har ek me tera aks nazar aye to makaaN ho jae.

BaghbaaN raha hai rahega ban ke tera 'pankaj'.
Gulfaam tum hojao sehra bhi gulistaan ho jae

(PWFS 01/04/2012)






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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2012, 01:10:32 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2012, 02:40:35 PM »
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MuddatoN thehri rahi hai ye mann ki jheel..
Ek patthar to uchaalo ke mauj rawaaN ho jae.

Ab ke jo mil to kuch is tarha khul ke mil,
Ke bujhti hui shamma phir se jawaaN ho jae.

Na ho koi gila sikwa na dar-o-deewar darmiyaN
Do dil ki ek awaaz ye aavaaz-e-azaaN ho jae.

Wo chand ka tukda hai ya teri chudi ki chamak
khanaka ise aise ke muddaii bad-gumaaN ho jae.

LaboN ki Larjish se aa hila dein ye sara alam
Sharara aag ban jae har ek gam dhuwaaN ho jae.

Sunata raha akshar raqeeb teri jafa ke kissey
Mere pehlu me tum ajao to wo be-jubaaN ho jae.

Jare jare ko jod ke tayaar kiya ye khana-e-dil
Har ek me tera aks nazar aye to makaaN ho jae.

BaghbaaN raha hai rahega ban ke tera 'pankaj'.
Gulfaam tum hojao sehra bhi gulistaan ho jae

(PWFS 01/04/2012)





very nice dear
daad daad daad
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2012, 06:02:09 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob pankaj ji... Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2012, 06:22:18 PM »
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bahut badiya pankajji...
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2012, 06:46:32 AM »
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wah bahut khoob pankaji ji....
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2012, 09:11:06 AM »
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what a beautifull composition
sukriya masoom ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2012, 10:39:33 AM »
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Pankaj Je Aadaab!


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MuddatoN thehri rahi hai ye mann ki jheel..
Ek patthar to uchaalo ke mauj rawaaN ho jae.

Ab ke jo mil to kuch is tarha khul ke mil,
Ke bujhti hui shamma phir se jawaaN ho jae.

Na ho koi gila sikwa na dar-o-deewar darmiyaN
Do dil ki ek awaaz ye aavaaz-e-azaaN ho jae.

Wo chand ka tukda hai ya teri chudi ki chamak
khanaka ise aise ke muddaii bad-gumaaN ho jae.

LaboN ki Larjish se aa hila dein ye sara alam
Sharara aag ban jae har ek gam dhuwaaN ho jae.

Sunata raha akshar raqeeb teri jafa ke kissey
Mere pehlu me tum ajao to wo be-jubaaN ho jae.

Jare jare ko jod ke tayaar kiya ye khana-e-dil
Har ek me tera aks nazar aye to makaaN ho jae.

BaghbaaN raha hai rahega ban ke tera 'pankaj'.
Gulfaam tum hojao sehra bhi gulistaan ho jae

(PWFS 01/04/2012)





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«Reply #10 on: April 02, 2012, 05:42:21 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 03, 2012, 07:19:27 AM »
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bahut khoob
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very nice dear
daad daad daad
Thanks Sarfira ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2012, 02:24:24 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob pankaj ji... Usual Smile

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