MAZA NA MAYE KE PIYAALON MEIN DOOB KAR PAAYA .................. HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 11, 2013, 07:13:28 PM
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«Reply #30 on: November 14, 2013, 12:29:17 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 11, 2013, 07:32:10 PM
Waaaaaaaaah Hasan ji... kitni khoobsurat kalaam se bazm ko nawaza hai aapne... tareef ke liye alfaaz nahin... dil se hazaron daad qubool kijiye.. rau due raha kal doongi...
Bahut bahut shukriya Aqsh ji . Khush rahye.
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«Reply #31 on: November 14, 2013, 01:21:48 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 11, 2013, 07:36:36 PM
matle se leker maqte tak
umda kalaam hi nazar aya.

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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zarra nawazi k liye Shukriya  sahal ji .
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«Reply #32 on: November 14, 2013, 02:00:22 AM »
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Ek beintehaayee khoobsurat qalaam jis mein samundar si gehree fiqr hai aaftaab si chamak hai aur maahtaab sa jamaal hai ....daad aur tehseen se kaheen aage hai ye qalaam .... bas shukriya adaa karta hooN is tohfe ka Hasan sahab !!!

Wafa , Khuloos ,  Mohabbat   haiN   aaj   kyuuN   Unqaa
Jawaab    in   hi   SawaaloN   meiN   doob    kar  paaya


ye ek naayaab sher laga  .... jis mein jitna doobo to pataa lagtaa hai doobne kitni gehraayee aur baake hai
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«Reply #33 on: November 14, 2013, 02:07:05 PM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on November 11, 2013, 07:46:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause bohut khub
Thanks jeet jainam ji.
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«Reply #34 on: November 14, 2013, 05:38:38 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on November 11, 2013, 07:50:31 PM
ग़ज़ल में आपकी मतले से मक़ता तक साहिब,
बहुत ही उम्दा ख्यालों में डूबता पाया.

वाह,वाह हसन सर,बहुत ही उम्दा ग़ज़ल कही है आपने.
इस खूबसूरत ग़ज़ल के लिये दिली मुबारकबाद कबूल कीजिये.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
tah e dil se shukriya aur duaaein , sudhir ji .
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«Reply #35 on: November 14, 2013, 10:08:55 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on November 11, 2013, 07:52:30 PM

excelleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeent ,sir
thanksssssssssssss, MB ji .
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«Reply #36 on: November 14, 2013, 10:47:16 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 11, 2013, 07:58:07 PM
Sukoot - e - Shab ne , na Shabnam , na  Chaandni  ne  diya
SukooN  jo  Chaand   ke   haaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


Aadaab Sir
jab aise kalaam padhta hun to sochne par mazboor ho jaata hun.
darta hun kaheen sab kuch taaliyon men na kho jaaye.

Bahut shukrguzar hoon Mukesh ji . Sanjida kalam par sanjida tabsiron se dili musarrat hoti hai , chaahe woh taareefi hon ya tanqeedi .aap ne ghazal ko sanjidgi se liya is ke liye bahut shukriya aur duaaein.
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«Reply #37 on: November 15, 2013, 01:48:21 AM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on November 11, 2013, 09:16:27 PM
वाह.....हसन जी....बहुत खूब....क्या बात है.....ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद.....
bahut bahut shukriya aur duaaein , Amit ji .
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«Reply #38 on: November 15, 2013, 02:44:42 AM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on November 11, 2013, 09:32:32 PM
subhanAllah behad khooob kalam raha, dili daad khubool ho...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Iqtedar saheb
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«Reply #39 on: November 15, 2013, 11:23:14 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on November 11, 2013, 09:37:18 PM
waah waah bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Suresh ji bahut bahut shukriya .
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«Reply #40 on: November 15, 2013, 01:30:00 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on November 12, 2013, 12:24:04 AM
waah waah Hasan sir bahut umda, ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye:

Maza  na  Maye  ke  piyaaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya
Jo  uss  HaseeN  ke  KhayaaloN  meiN   doob  kar  paaya

Jalaal  ,   Rahm - o - Karam  ,  AazmaaisheiN  ,  In'aam
Khuda   ko  uss ke  JamaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya

Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya

DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
Shukriya Iftekhar saheb . khush rahye.
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«Reply #41 on: November 16, 2013, 05:47:49 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on November 12, 2013, 12:32:29 AM
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waah waah hasan sir..bahut hi umda..

Laajawab..kamaal ke aashar rahe..

Dhero daad..happy9
Shukriya Nashwani ji .
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«Reply #42 on: November 16, 2013, 10:46:42 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on November 12, 2013, 05:27:12 PM

Maza  na  Maye  ke  piyaaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya
Jo  uss  HaseeN  ke  KhayaaloN  meiN   doob  kar  paaya

khoobsurat Matla janaab... daad


Wafa , Khuloos ,  Mohabbat   haiN   aaj   kyuuN   Unqaa
Jawaab    in   hi   SawaaloN   meiN   doob    kar  paaya

waaahhhh......



Jalaal  ,   Rahm - o - Karam  ,  AazmaaisheiN  ,  In'aam
Khuda   ko  uss ke  JamaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya

Masha Allahh.........


Sukoot - e - Shab ne , na Shabnam , na  Chaandni  ne  diya
SukooN  jo  Chaand   ke   haaloN   meiN   doob  kar  paaya


Waahhhhh... beauty at it best....

Jawaab - e - Maqsad - e - Takhleeq - e - Kaaynaat   'Hasan'
QuraaN   ke   paak   HawaaloN   meiN   doob   kar   paaya


wahh waahhhh waaahhhhhhh..... qayaamat, asardaar, lajawaab , aur maainikhez ghazal likhi hai aapne hassan saahab... Walaaah..... kai kai baar padh gayee is haseen peshkash ko.... dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad aapko.. likhte raheN sir.... Allah aur nawaaze.. aameen.


Sidra
Sidra saheba , tah e dil se aapke khuloos bhari housla afzai ke liye mashkoor hoon . duaaein .
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«Reply #43 on: November 17, 2013, 02:16:47 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on November 12, 2013, 07:29:07 PM

Khamosh awaaz ji , bahut shukriya .
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«Reply #44 on: November 17, 2013, 01:46:39 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 12, 2013, 10:09:07 PM
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Wahh!!!! kya khoob peshkash hai...
Shukriya Saman aapka aur bahut bahut duaaein .
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