Mazhab k faasle bahut khoob hai...

by brokenbyluv on November 14, 2010, 07:14:06 PM
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Adaab dosto,
merri iss rachna mein maine apne aur kisi khaas k mazhab k baare mein ye likhne ki koshish ki hai ki kiss tarah hum alag alag dharamo mein hote hue bhi kitne ek se hai,is kavita k zariya main kisi ki bhawnao ko thes nhi pahuchana chahti is kavita ko sirrf pyar ki nazar se padhiyega aur koi galati hui ho tou maaf kijiyega..hamesha ki tarah aap sab k sath ki umeed karungi..shukriya..GEET...



Naa maine kabhi masjid mein jaa kar sajda kiya hai,
naa usne kabhi mandir mein bhagwan ki pooja ki hai,

naa maine kabhi wazu karke khuda ki ibaadat ki hai,
naa usne kabhi suche muh bhagwan ko jal chadhaya hai,

naa maine kabhi eid per sewaiya khaayi hai,
naa usne diwali per pathake chalaye hai,

naa maine kabhi namaz padhte waqt khuda k aage jholi phelayi hai,
naa usne aarti karte hue bhagwan k aage sir jhukaya hai,

bhale hi ye mazhab kaa faasla hai hamare darmaiya,
phir bhi mazhab k faaslo mein bahut nazdiki lagti hai,

mujhe uski mhbt sachi lagti hai,
uski baato mein merri chahat achi lagti hai,

khuda ho ya bhagwan merre pyar pe hai dono meherbaan,
us per aake hi merra har ehsas rukta hai,

mujhe merre yaar mein sache dil se rab dikhta hai,
isliye har baar uske sajde mein merra sir jhukta hai,

ji lu main inn khushi k lamho ko aaj mein,
luta du mhbt ka saagar apne ajnabi per,

phir jane ye pal ho na ho hamari mhbt ka koi hal ho na ho,
hamari zindgi mein khushiyo ka saahil ho na ho..
jane kal ko vo merri zindgi mein shamil ho na ho.........
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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2010, 07:27:31 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob Geet ji... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2010, 07:29:54 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji..kya baat hai aajkal aap yo per dikhayi nhi dete..sab khairiyat hai naa??
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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2010, 07:34:41 PM »
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U r welcome ji....main last kuch hafton se bahut zyaada bz hoon kuch personal kaam wagera k chakkar me aur kuch din se poems bhi nahi ban rahe hain mujhse. Bas waqt milte hi fir poori tarha laut aaunga.aajkal kalam bhi saath nahi de rahi. hope aap sakushal honge and enjoying life. keep smiling always and take care. Keep writing.
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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2010, 07:36:21 PM »
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Quote from: ~~Hriday~~ on November 14, 2010, 07:34:41 PM
U r welcome ji....main last kuch hafton se bahut zyaada bz hoon kuch personal kaam wagera k chakkar me aur kuch din se poems bhi nahi ban rahe hain mujhse. Bas waqt milte hi fir poori tarha laut aaunga.aajkal kalam bhi saath nahi de rahi. hope aap sakushal honge and enjoying life. keep smiling always and take care. Keep writing.

Ji kapil ji sab thik hai uperwale ki dua hai chaliye jaldi se kaam khatam kijiyega apki rachnayo ka intezar rahega...take care ji god bless u....Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2010, 08:14:30 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 14, 2010, 07:14:06 PM
Adaab dosto,
merri iss rachna mein maine apne aur kisi khaas k mazhab k baare mein ye likhne ki koshish ki hai ki kiss tarah hum alag alag dharamo mein hote hue bhi kitne ek se hai,is kavita k zariya main kisi ki bhawnao ko thes nhi pahuchana chahti is kavita ko sirrf pyar ki nazar se padhiyega aur koi galati hui ho tou maaf kijiyega..hamesha ki tarah aap sab k sath ki umeed karungi..shukriya..GEET...



Naa maine kabhi masjid mein jaa kar sajda kiya hai,
naa usne kabhi mandir mein bhagwan ki pooja ki hai,

naa maine kabhi wazu karke khuda ki ibaadat ki hai,
naa usne kabhi suche muh bhagwan ko jal chadhaya hai,

naa maine kabhi eid per sewaiya khaayi hai,
naa usne diwali per pathake chalaye hai,

naa maine kabhi namaz padhte waqt khuda k aage jholi phelayi hai,
naa usne aarti karte hue bhagwan k aage sir jhukaya hai,

phir bhi mujhe uski mhbt sachi lagti hai,
uski baato mein merri chahat achi lagti hai,

bhale hi ye mazhab kaa faasla hai hamare darmaiya,
phir bhi mazhab k faaslo mein bahut nazdiki lagti hai,

khuda ho ya bhagwan merre pyar pe hai dono meherbaan,
us per aake hi merra har ehsas rukta hai,

mujhe merre yaar mein sache dil se rab dikhta hai,
isliye har baar uske sajde mein merra sir jhukta hai,

ji lu main inn khushi k lamho ko aaj mein,
luta du mhbt ka saagar apne ajnabi per,

phir jane ye pal ho na ho hamari mhbt ka koi hal ho na ho,
hamari zindgi mein khushiyo ka saahil ho na ho..
jane kal ko vo merri zindgi mein shamil ho na ho.........
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«Reply #6 on: November 15, 2010, 08:02:49 AM »
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kya bat he Geet di...

apka ye andaz bada achha laga ..

badi sachchi bat kahi apne..

dher sarii daad..

or haan jate jate ek bat or "pic wali girl is too sweet" heheheheh
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«Reply #7 on: November 16, 2010, 09:41:53 AM »
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Shukriya manoj ji n abhi...
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«Reply #8 on: November 16, 2010, 09:49:46 AM »
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bahoot khoob likha BBL ji....aakhiri tak aate aate kavita apne poore shabab pe hai...dheron daad
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«Reply #9 on: November 16, 2010, 09:51:43 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya bekrar ji bahut acha laga ki apne merri kavita pasand ki..take care..Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2010, 03:45:44 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Geetji..

Umar De Hisaab naal kayi Vaar Insaan Te khayalaat badal Jaande ne,Kuch inj Hi Feel Kita si jad Eh poetry Padhi Si..Baaki kayi Galaan Is Kavita Di Dil Nuu Chuu Jaande ne..

Huemsha Di Tarah Bahut Khooooooob Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2010, 04:21:18 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 19, 2010, 03:45:44 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Geetji..

Umar De Hisaab naal kayi Vaar Insaan Te khayalaat badal Jaande ne,Kuch inj Hi Feel Kita si jad Eh poetry Padhi Si..Baaki kayi Galaan Is Kavita Di Dil Nuu Chuu Jaande ne..

Huemsha Di Tarah Bahut Khooooooob Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #12 on: November 20, 2010, 04:12:46 AM »
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kya baat hai, bahut khoobsurat hai aapki ye rachana

aapne ye sab jinke liye likha hai kaash wo bhi ye sab padh pate to kitna accha hoga na?

anyway keep it up icon_salut
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«Reply #13 on: November 22, 2010, 12:06:51 PM »
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Quote from: ruksar on November 20, 2010, 04:12:46 AM
kya baat hai, bahut khoobsurat hai aapki ye rachana

aapne ye sab jinke liye likha hai kaash wo bhi ye sab padh pate to kitna accha hoga na?

anyway keep it up icon_salut
Thnx alot ruksar ji aapne sahi kaha kaash vo bhi ise padh sakte..per aapne padha uska bahut shukriya ji...
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«Reply #14 on: November 23, 2010, 12:37:51 PM »
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Geet ji Mujhe aapki Yeh Peshkash Bahut hi Pyaari Lagi.. Jin Ehasaason Ko Zahan me rakh kar aapne Yeh Alfaaz Likhe hain.. Waqai Kaabil-e-Taareef Hain.. Behad Khubsoorat Peshkash Hai.. Dil Ko such Me Chhoo Gai..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

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