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neelgold
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Voh neendo main b aane lage hai
Ban ke meetha dard voh satane lage hai
Kahfa hum the aur rusva b humi hue
Voh hume chod doosro ka manane lage hai
Chot dil pe lagti hai to dard b hota hai
Unko yeh samzane main hume zamane lage
Hum unse kabhi b kuch keh na sake
Unko hamare yeh sirf Bahane lage
Char din ki dosti thi aur Judai umar bhar ki
Aaj bi yakin nahi hai paar khud ko yakin dilane lage
Juda ho ke voh kush the kisi aur ke saath to
Hum bi bhut khush hai yeh saab ko dikhane lage
Voh juda ho ke b meetha dard de rehe hai
Door reh reh kar fir se pass aane lage hai
Fir se voh kyon yaad aah rhehe hai ..
Jin ko bhulane main hume zamane lage hai…
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 09:47:35 PM » |
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nazar ghouri
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 11:09:47 PM » |
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bahoot khoob wah wah..achha likha hai aap ne.nice creation Voh neendo main b aane lage hai
Ban ke meetha dard voh satane lage hai
Kahfa hum the aur rusva b humi hue
Voh hume chod doosro ka manane lage hai
Chot dil pe lagti hai to dard b hota hai
Unko yeh samzane main hume zamane lage
Hum unse kabhi b kuch keh na sake
Unko hamare yeh sirf Bahane lage
Char din ki dosti thi aur Judai umar bhar ki
Aaj bi yakin nahi hai paar khud ko yakin dilane lage
Juda ho ke voh kush the kisi aur ke saath to
Hum bi bhut khush hai yeh saab ko dikhane lage
Voh juda ho ke b meetha dard de rehe hai
Door reh reh kar fir se pass aane lage hai
Fir se voh kyon yaad aah rhehe hai ..
Jin ko bhulane main hume zamane lage hai…
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2010, 06:12:32 AM » |
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Wah kya baat hai Neelgold ji .......
Ham jaante hai wo hamse juda hokar kisi aur ke saath bahut khush hai
ham bhi khush hai apne yaadon ka "Meetha Dard" jo de gaye hai.....
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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2010, 06:39:20 AM » |
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Wah ji wah Neel ji kya khoob kavita likhi hai. Bahot khoob.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2010, 07:57:01 AM » |
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Wah ! Kya baat hai Neel Ji
Dil ko chhoo lene wali peshkash hai
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neelgold
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 09:21:02 PM » |
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Thanx a lot Madhu ji .......
Very happy ........ satve asman pe itni tarif ...voh bi aap ne dil se ki hai
Thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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neelgold
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 09:21:55 PM » |
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Thanx Nazar ji Im jst trying ... dekh dekh ke seekh rehi hoon... Bhut danyavaad ji !!!!!!!!!!!!!! bahoot khoob wah wah..achha likha hai aap ne.nice creation
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 09:23:23 PM » |
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neelgold
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 09:28:01 PM » |
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Thnx a lot Cara Ji !!!!!!!!!!!!1 Mere bichdne ka tu gum na kar ,
Apni khushi tu kum na kaar,
Teri kushi main hum b khush hai,
Tuze kasam hai......
Fasla yeh aab tu kum na kar.......
Wah kya baat hai Neelgold ji .......
Ham jaante hai wo hamse juda hokar kisi aur ke saath bahut khush hai
ham bhi khush hai apne yaadon ka "Meetha Dard" jo de gaye hai.....
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neelgold
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 09:31:06 PM » |
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Thanx a lot Riyaz ji ... Bhut bhut shukriya... Wah ji wah Neel ji kya khoob kavita likhi hai. Bahot khoob.[/c/quote] |
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neelgold
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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2010, 09:33:07 PM » |
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Kapil really thnx a lot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Apne pasand ki uske liye bhut bhut sukriya ....Itni Tarif !!!
Wah wah !!!!!
Very happy !!!!!!!!!!
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neelgold
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«Reply #12 on: April 12, 2010, 09:34:46 PM » |
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Thanx a lot Rajesh Ji ....... Really really appericiate!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Wah ! Kya baat hai Neel Ji
Dil ko chhoo lene wali peshkash hai
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«Reply #13 on: April 12, 2010, 09:37:27 PM » |
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U are always welcome...!!! Kapil really thnx a lot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Apne pasand ki uske liye bhut bhut sukriya ....Itni Tarif !!!
Wah wah !!!!!
Very happy !!!!!!!!!!
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