Meetha Dard.... (Neel)

by neelgold on April 11, 2010, 09:17:50 PM
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #15 on: April 15, 2010, 07:26:42 AM »
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Hamne Yellow Gold,Liquid gold, Black Gold tou suna tha...par Neelgold nahi....
Achhi rachna hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause


Dard bhee tumhaare meethe huaa karte hain
Unki judaai me bhi aap khush dikha karte hain

Kab tak sakhee ye iktarfa daur chalta rahega
Jinhe nahi parvah unko DIL yaad karta rahega


Jago sakhee bhula do uske khawab ko uski chubhti yaad ko
Jo na haasil hona hai,kyu tum taiyaar usse ta-umra dhone ko




Voh neendo main b aane lage hai
Ban ke meetha dard voh satane lage hai
Kahfa hum the aur rusva b humi hue
Voh hume chod doosro ka manane lage hai

Chot dil pe lagti hai to dard b hota hai
Unko yeh samzane main hume zamane lage
Hum unse kabhi b kuch keh na sake
Unko hamare yeh sirf Bahane lage

Char din ki dosti thi aur Judai umar bhar ki
Aaj bi yakin nahi hai paar khud ko yakin dilane lage
Juda ho ke voh kush the kisi aur ke saath to
Hum bi bhut khush hai yeh saab ko dikhane lage

Voh juda ho ke b meetha dard de rehe hai
Door reh reh kar fir se  pass aane lage hai
Fir se voh kyon  yaad aah rhehe hai ..
Jin ko bhulane main hume zamane lage hai…


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«Reply #16 on: April 15, 2010, 10:34:30 PM »
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Chalo acha Hua Koyal ji Jo aapne Nahi suna voh Sun Liya
Hai na achi baat ...
Kyon aap ko NeelGold pasand nhi aaya kya ...
Its nt comn na tht's d beauty

Nyc ...very nyc bhut hi acaha likha hai ........

Agar tum hume yaad nahi karte hum bi bhula denga
Apni roti hui ankhion ko fir se hansa denge
Jana to tume door hi tha fir itne Bahane kyon
Tumrae bina hum b khush ho ke Jeena dekha denge!!!!!!!!!
Hamne Yellow Gold,Liquid gold, Black Gold tou suna tha...par Neelgold nahi....
Achhi rachna hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause


Dard bhee tumhaare meethe huaa karte hain
Unki judaai me bhi aap khush dikha karte hain

Kab tak sakhee ye iktarfa daur chalta rahega
Jinhe nahi parvah unko DIL yaad karta rahega


Jago sakhee bhula do uske khawab ko uski chubhti yaad ko
Jo na haasil hona hai,kyu tum taiyaar usse ta-umra dhone ko




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KOYAL46
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«Reply #17 on: April 16, 2010, 01:51:12 PM »
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Wah wah ye huyee na baat....Neelgold-ji...bahoot khoob... Applause Applause Applause

Up-naam aapka achha hai...
Asal kya hai pehchaan...? icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Gold tou aakhir gold hai... wave wave
PEELA HO YA NEELA.... icon_flower icon_flower
Kee farak penda hai... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!

Bhula do usse nahi hai parvaah jise tumhaari
Jeevan mai aur bhee hain rishte Neel-kumaari

Bahaane un-ne bhale he laakh banaye ho sakhee
Tumhe bhee hazaro mil jayenge,mat hona dukhee


Chalo acha Hua Koyal ji Jo aapne Nahi suna voh Sun Liya
Hai na achi baat ...
Kyon aap ko NeelGold pasand nhi aaya kya ...
Its nt comn na tht's d beauty

Nyc ...very nyc bhut hi acaha likha hai ........

Agar tum hume yaad nahi karte hum bi bhula denge
Apni roti hui ankhion ko fir se hansa denge
Jana to tume door hi tha fir itne Bahane kyon
Tumrae bina hum b khush ho ke Jeena dekha denge!!!!!!!!!
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neelgold
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«Reply #18 on: April 16, 2010, 11:13:04 PM »
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Koyal Ji App to Kamal Ho Ji .....
Bhut hi khoob kaha ..... Thumbs UP Usual Smile Applause hello2
Baki U knoe Gold to Gold hota hai
Uski chmak har haal main rehti hai ...
Kyon  hai na.....
Peele neele se koi fark nhi padta .....

Tum jindgi ke rastion main agar kahi aur nikal gyae to,
Hum bi apne kadam bada ke Raah Badal ke chaal diye..........
Wah wah ye huyee na baat....Neelgold-ji...bahoot khoob... Applause Applause Applause

Up-naam aapka achha hai...
Asal kya hai pehchaan...? icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Gold tou aakhir gold hai... wave wave
PEELA HO YA NEELA.... icon_flower icon_flower
Kee farak penda hai... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!

Bhula do usse nahi hai parvaah jise tumhaari
Jeevan mai aur bhee hain rishte Neel-kumaari

Bahaane un-ne bhale he laakh banaye ho sakhee
Tumhe bhee hazaro mil jayenge,mat hona dukhee


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«Reply #19 on: April 17, 2010, 10:12:35 AM »
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Taariff k liye shukriya Neelkumari-ji......

Gold tou Naari ki kamjori hai.....
Usski tou wo hoti deewani hai.....




Koyal Ji App to Kamal Ho Ji .....
Bhut hi khoob kaha ..... Thumbs UP Usual Smile Applause hello2
Baki U knoe Gold to Gold hota hai
Uski chmak har haal main rehti hai ...
Kyon  hai na.....
Peele neele se koi fark nhi padta .....

Tum jindgi ke rastion main agar kahi aur nikal gyae to,
Hum bi apne kadam bada ke Raah Badal ke chaal diye..........
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neelgold
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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2010, 10:59:18 PM »
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Ur ryt ..... sari duniya dewwani hoti hai
App ho ke nahi ?

Koyal its really nyc ....
thnx 4 giving tym 2 me
Taariff k liye shukriya Neelkumari-ji......

Gold tou Naari ki kamjori hai.....
Usski tou wo hoti deewani hai.....




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KOYAL46
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«Reply #21 on: April 20, 2010, 06:41:59 AM »
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Kisi ladki se ye mat puchho.... Giggle Giggle Giggle
Ye tou jag-jaahir hai sab Gold ki deewani hoti hain.... love9 love4 love9
Aaj-kal Diamond ki bhee.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking

You are welcome NGji....

Ur ryt ..... sari duniya dewwani hoti hai
App ho ke nahi ?

Koyal its really nyc ....
thnx 4 giving tym 2 me
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neelgold
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«Reply #22 on: April 20, 2010, 10:49:09 PM »
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I luv diamond rathr thn Gold ....
actually daimond with white Gold ....

Nyc na!!!
Kisi ladki se ye mat puchho.... Giggle Giggle Giggle
Ye tou jag-jaahir hai sab Gold ki deewani hoti hain.... love9 love4 love9
Aaj-kal Diamond ki bhee.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking

You are welcome NGji....

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KOYAL46
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«Reply #23 on: April 21, 2010, 06:58:19 AM »
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Gold is Gold...for ever.... sunny sunny sunny
Diamonds can be synthetic...SOME TIMES Deceptive..... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
White Gold...Platinum...ya its good....but costly...Meetha Dard
 icon_king icon_king icon_king

Tell something about Neelgold.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking

I luv diamond rathr thn Gold ....
actually daimond with white Gold ....

Nyc na!!!
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«Reply #24 on: April 21, 2010, 10:58:47 PM »
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Its relly flattring Koyal.......
SO nyc of u .....
Ur ryt
       Gold is Gold!!!!!!!!!
       Nevr got old!!!!!!!!!
             coz'
       Gold is Gold!!!!!!!!!
 love4 love4
Koyal wat do u vana 2 knoe abt NEELGOLD
IS it really mysterious?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh??
Gold is Gold...for ever.... sunny sunny sunny
Diamonds can be synthetic...SOME TIMES Deceptive..... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
White Gold...Platinum...ya its good....but costly...Meetha Dard
 icon_king icon_king icon_king

Tell something about Neelgold.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking

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«Reply #25 on: April 22, 2010, 06:21:54 AM »
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Voh neendo main b aane lage hai
Ban ke meetha dard voh satane lage hai
Kahfa hum the aur rusva b humi hue
Voh hume chod doosro ka manane lage hai

Chot dil pe lagti hai to dard b hota hai
Unko yeh samzane main hume zamane lage
Hum unse kabhi b kuch keh na sake
Unko hamare yeh sirf Bahane lage

Char din ki dosti thi aur Judai umar bhar ki
Aaj bi yakin nahi hai paar khud ko yakin dilane lage
Juda ho ke voh kush the kisi aur ke saath to
Hum bi bhut khush hai yeh saab ko dikhane lage

Voh juda ho ke b meetha dard de rehe hai
Door reh reh kar fir se  pass aane lage hai
Fir se voh kyon  yaad aah rhehe hai ..
Jin ko bhulane main hume zamane lage hai…


Waah Neel Ji ... KhooB...

Jisey bhoolne me logo zamane lage
woh aksar humein yaad aane lage

Chura kar humi se hum ko dekho
Woh naaz-o-ada fir dikhane lage

Huyi sham hai shayad ab zindagi ki
Ke panchi phir laut kar ghar aane lage


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«Reply #26 on: April 22, 2010, 10:46:35 AM »
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Its mysterious or not I don't know...... Winking Winking Winking Winking
But its still in "Parda"...... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
Neel USA mai kya karti hai...?
Pehle India mai kahaan thee..?
Vana tell evry thng...about "Blue Gold"... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Its relly flattring Koyal.......
SO nyc of u .....
Ur ryt
       Gold is Gold!!!!!!!!!
       Nevr got old!!!!!!!!!
             coz'
       Gold is Gold!!!!!!!!!
 love4 love4
Koyal wat do u vana 2 knoe abt NEELGOLD
IS it really mysterious?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh??
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«Reply #27 on: April 22, 2010, 12:32:24 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Saba ji... bahut khoob...!!!


Waah Neel Ji ... KhooB...

Jisey bhoolne me logo zamane lage
woh aksar humein yaad aane lage

Chura kar humi se hum ko dekho
Woh naaz-o-ada fir dikhane lage

Huyi sham hai shayad ab zindagi ki
Ke panchi phir laut kar ghar aane lage


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«Reply #28 on: April 22, 2010, 12:41:55 PM »
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Voh neendo main b aane lage hai
Ban ke meetha dard voh satane lage hai
Kahfa hum the aur rusva b humi hue
Voh hume chod doosro ka manane lage hai

Chot dil pe lagti hai to dard b hota hai
Unko yeh samzane main hume zamane lage
Hum unse kabhi b kuch keh na sake
Unko hamare yeh sirf Bahane lage

Char din ki dosti thi aur Judai umar bhar ki
Aaj bi yakin nahi hai paar khud ko yakin dilane lage
Juda ho ke voh kush the kisi aur ke saath to
Hum bi bhut khush hai yeh saab ko dikhane lage

Voh juda ho ke b meetha dard de rehe hai
Door reh reh kar fir se  pass aane lage hai
Fir se voh kyon  yaad aah rhehe hai ..
Jin ko bhulane main hume zamane lage hai…


Wah Wah Wah Wah kya baat hai.. Applause Applause akhri line toh dil choo gayi...
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«Reply #29 on: April 22, 2010, 11:02:57 PM »
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Rahim ji Bhut Bhut Thnxxxxxxx

Pasand aah gaye to mehnat safal...

Thnxxxxxx
Wah Wah Wah Wah kya baat hai.. Applause Applause akhri line toh dil choo gayi...
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