Mehez merre nagmo ka andaz nhi hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 23, 2011, 03:56:27 PM
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Khamosh si zindgi mein safar hai manzil nhi hai,
GEET hai saaz nhi hai sur hai awaz nhi hai,

mhbt ki rawangi hai dum todta parwaaz nhi hai,
majbur hai thoda yakinan dhokebaaz nhi hai,

masum sa mehbub hai merra koi janbaaz nhi hai,
merra ajnam tou hai tou kya jo aghaz nhi hai,

merre lafzo mein basi haqiqat hai bus ek alfaz nhi hai,
aap sabka jana pehchana h vo unsuljha koi raaz nhi hai,

merra ajnabi merri zindgi merri mhbt merra sabkuch hai..
mehez merre nagmo ka andaz nhi hai.........
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ANAAM
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 05:38:15 PM »
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Nice poem.......Geet ji
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 08:48:58 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2011, 01:26:55 PM »
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bht khoob geet ji....
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2011, 04:00:12 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya anaam ji,priya ji,rishi ji n shihab ji...
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2011, 04:14:40 PM »
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bahut khubsurat Nagma hai--
lekin BBL ji aap asmanjas me lagti hain isko likhte waqt.
aapki iss peshkash se aisa feel hua mujhe jo pahle kabhi nhi hua!
thoda Kooool rahiye madam.
aur main baat ye ki khus rahiye
thanx
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2011, 04:18:27 PM »
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bahut khubsurat Nagma hai--
lekin BBL ji aap asmanjas me lagti hain isko likhte waqt.
aapki iss peshkash se aisa feel hua mujhe jo pahle kabhi nhi hua!
thoda Kooool rahiye madam.
aur main baat ye ki khus rahiye
thanx

Shukriya nirala ji aur ji main asmanjus mein nhi thi bus pehli baar kuch aesa likhne ka mann hua jo padhne wala ek sans mein padh sake...jaisa ki apne kaha nagma tou chahti yahi hu ki ek nagme ki tarah ise padha aur mehsus kiya jaa sake...Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2011, 04:26:01 PM »
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haha tab thk hai--
mera feel bhi na bas meri tarah faltu ka nirala hai.
haan wese aapki ye kavita alg hi hai aapke andaaz se
bura laga ho to sorry hai ji.
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2011, 04:35:25 PM »
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haha tab thk hai--
mera feel bhi na bas meri tarah faltu ka nirala hai.
haan wese aapki ye kavita alg hi hai aapke andaaz se
bura laga ho to sorry hai ji.
Are na ji naa bura lagna wali apne koi baat nhi ki..aur sorry mat kahiye aap hi ne kaha tha agar aap mujhse kahiin umar mein bade hue tou mujhe paap lagega apne bado se sorry bulwane k liye Giggle ..isiliye bus yu hi comment dete rahiye aur apne pyar kalaam share karte rahiye take care ji...
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