mehfil ki jaan (Boby9457)

by boby9457 on January 10, 2013, 10:56:43 AM
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Unhe aaj bhi mefile sajane ka shok hai.
Wo jo kabhi mehfil ki jaan hua karte the.

Log unhe hamesha pane ki tamanna karte.
Or hamare dil mai sirf arman hua karte the.

Jisse bhi milate hamesha apna hi batate the.
Or hum unke liye sirf mehman hua karte tha.

Wo jo mangte hum hamesha la ke dete.
Bas uske liye hum khud nelam hua karte the.

Huk unhe bhi tha apne dil ki sunne ka "Nishu".
Hum kuch kese kahe us waqt hum unke gulam hua karte the.

Ab shayad unhe meri chahat ka andaza ho.
Pehle to unke dil mai bahut guman hua karte the.
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2013, 11:08:31 AM »
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wah bahut acha likha hai aapne boby jee..v.v. good  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2013, 11:39:58 AM »
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beautiful boby jee bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2013, 12:47:42 PM »
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very nice ji....
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2013, 02:26:17 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2013, 02:49:51 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2013, 03:47:44 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   waah Boby ji waah... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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