Mein waheen jaauungaa!

by abdbundeli on October 01, 2008, 03:34:25 PM
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Woh jahaan hai, waheen kaa raahgeer hoon mein to;
Wasl-e-mahboob, eik hi guzeer* hai meyraa!
Mein waheen jaauungaa, mujh ko hai justajoo us kee;
Kyoun ki, rahbar wahee noor-e-aseer** hai meyraa!
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                                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2008, 05:51:37 PM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji.. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2008, 06:13:10 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 01, 2008, 03:34:25 PM
Woh jahaan hai, waheen kaa raahgeer hoon mein to;
Wasl-e-mahboob, eik hi guzeer* hai meyraa!
Mein waheen jaauungaa, mujh ko hai justajoo us kee;
Kyoun ki, rahbar wahee noor-e-aseer** hai meyraa!
    *   Cure or medical treatment.
   **   Light of horizon
 
                                - abd bundeli

Waah waah... Bahut hi Khoob likha hai Abd Ji..
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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2008, 01:56:07 AM »
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honeyrose ji / Mahiya ji,
 Bahut-bhut shukriyah!
                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2008, 08:41:30 AM »
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CHALE TO JAOGE KYA KOI MUNTAZAIR BHI HOGA
TU CHAHE JIS TARAH USKO KYA WOH BHI TUJKO CHAHTA HOGA
ZINDAGI KO SAMAJ BHAITHE HO TUM SHAYRI GHAYEL
BOHAT BOHAT TAMASHA BANOGE JAB MUSHAYRA HOGA.

                                                -SG-
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«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2008, 09:31:54 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 02, 2008, 08:41:30 AM
CHALE TO JAOGE KYA KOI MUNTAZAIR BHI HOGA
TU CHAHE JIS TARAH USKO KYA WOH BHI TUJKO CHAHTA HOGA
ZINDAGI KO SAMAJ BHAITHE HO TUM SHAYRI GHAYEL
BOHAT BOHAT TAMASHA BANOGE JAB MUSHAYRA HOGA.
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sajid_ghayel ji,
Bahut achchha likhaa hai!  Applause



Mujhey yaqeen hai, woh chaahtaa hai mujh ko bhi:
Kyoun ki, woh meyraa hai, mein us kaa; hon raqeeb bhaley!
Mujhey patah hai, nigaahain hain raah par us keen;
Nazar mileygee: aur, badhh key, woh lagaayegaa galey!!
                                         - abd bundeli


 
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2008, 10:13:43 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 01, 2008, 03:34:25 PM
Woh jahaan hai, waheen kaa raahgeer hoon mein to;
Wasl-e-mahboob, eik hi guzeer* hai meyraa!
Mein waheen jaauungaa, mujh ko hai justajoo us kee;
Kyoun ki, rahbar wahee noor-e-aseer** hai meyraa!
    *   Cure or medical treatment.
   **   Light of horizon
 
                                - abd bundeli

Bohot Khoob Abd Ji  Applause


Hai usi ki justuju, hai wahin ka safar,
Ek usi raah par bas hai meri nazar,
Ki jis pe chalte hue us ka deedar ho,
Jahan mehboob hai, wahin ho khatm-e-safar,
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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2008, 07:43:57 PM »
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 helloShukriyah Celmira ji! Applause Applause
Meyree eik 'Hindi Kavitaa' ki pahlee do 'panktiyaan' hain:

"Antim kshan kaa pratyaasee mein!
 Kitnaa achchhaa ho, Priya, yadi yah hee wah kshan ho!!"

Har rahguzar mein saath-saath jab naheen huye:
Beychain wasl-e-yaar ko ham kab naheen huye?
                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2008, 07:12:58 AM »
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bahut khoob ABD ji



Baadal
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2008, 07:44:55 AM »
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Shukriyah baadal102 ji!
             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: October 04, 2008, 03:54:56 AM »
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thank you abd jee meri lino ko apne style me dhalne ki par aainda aisa mat karna.
Quote from: abdbundeli on October 02, 2008, 09:31:54 AM
sajid_ghayel ji,
Bahut achchha likhaa hai!  Applause
Mein, aisaa likhtaa, to, kuchh is tarah likhtaa:
'CHALE TO JAOGE: KYA KOI MUNTAZAIR HOGA?
 CHAHTEY HO JISEY: KYA WOH BHI CHAHTA HOGA?
 ZINDAGI KO SAMAJ BHAITHE HO SHAYRI, GHAYEL,
 BANO TAMASHA EIK? AB MUSHAYRA HOGA!!'

Mujhey yaqeen hai, woh chaahtaa hai mujh ko bhi:
Kyoun ki, woh meyraa hai, mein us kaa; hon raqeeb bhaley!
Mujhey patah hai, nigaahain hain raah par us keen;
Nazar mileygee: aur, badhh key, woh lagaayegaa galey!!
                                         - abd bundeli


 
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«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2008, 04:18:54 AM »
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sajid_ghayel ji,
Mein ney na aapkey tasawwur ko chhuaa hai, na usey apney naam kiyaa hai; sirf aapki cheez ko 'kuchh kaprhey badal kar' peish kiyaa thaa! Aap ko, shaayad achchhaa naheen lagaa. Mein ney aapkaa farmaan 'note' kar liyaa hai! The 'unwanted' has been removed from the site. You may also remove similarly, to bring these messages to an end. I,ll remove this message also!  Thanks!
              -abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: October 04, 2008, 05:31:52 AM »
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Abd babu..." Ba'khuddaar"
Kahaan Pahuchein ho ?
Bahut door Jaa chuke ho kya ?

Bataiye : Kya Haal Hai ?
          KYa Chal Hai ?

Kahiye : YakeeN Waale To KahaaN se Chale Aur KahaaN Pahunche.,
         Joh Ahal-e-Shaqq Hein, Wo Agar-Magar Mein Rehte Hai......!!!!
 
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«Reply #13 on: October 04, 2008, 05:51:52 AM »
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Muhammed sa'b,
Mein to yaheen thaa; aap hi rozon mein nihaan they!
Kuchh rind qism kaa hoon, is liye rahaa hoon door!
Ab EID ho chukee hai: aap ney to miyaan jee,
Meyraa payaam-e-eid bhi kiyaa naheen qubool!
Meyraa to rastah hi pahunchtaa hai us jagah:
Rahtaa hai jahaan chhup key woh, 'abd' meyraa mahboob!!
                                       - abd bundeli
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