***meine dekha hai ek sapna***

by kaushikbhawna008 on November 20, 2008, 04:41:34 AM
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Meine dekha hai ek sapna
Haath mei uske haath apna
Chaht ki kuch baatein bhi
Chori chupke mulakaatein bhi

Wo behkaa hua tha kuch
Aur mein bhi kuch sharmayi si
Jaane kyu kal so kar bhi lage
Jaise mujhe neend na aayi thi

Pyaara pyaara tha mausam
Aur mehki thi kuch hawayein bhi
Raat akeli ne bhi thi odhi
Chaandni ki chaadar bhi

Dekh mujhe kugh ghabraayi si
Usne liya baahon mei tha thaam
Kaise keh paauon mein labzo mei
Kaise guzri thi kal ki shaam

Meine dekha tha ek sapna
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2008, 04:54:23 AM »
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Hey.. Its Really Very Very Beautiful.. Applause Applause
Very Down to Earth Writing Bhawna Ji..
Keep Writing.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2008, 05:04:22 AM »
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thnk u maahiya ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2008, 05:48:47 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut hi aachi rachna likhi hai aap
ne bhawna ji bahut hi sunder ahsaas




Baadal
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«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2008, 05:07:28 AM »
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bohut bohut shukriya baadal ji 
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«Reply #5 on: November 21, 2008, 05:37:51 AM »
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kya hi sunder aur meetha sapna dekha..aur bakhoobi shabdon me tarasha..bahoot khoob... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2008, 05:41:52 AM »
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kya hi sunder aur meetha sapna dekha..aur bakhoobi shabdon me tarasha..bahoot khoob... Applause Applause Applause


bohut bohut shukriya ji notworthy
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«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2008, 06:41:01 AM »
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Meine dekha hai ek sapna
Haath mei uske haath apna
Chaht ki kuch baatein bhi
Chori chupke mulakaatein bhi

Dekh mujhe kugh ghabraayi si
Usne liya baahon mei tha thaam
Kaise keh paauon mein labzo mei
Kaise guzri thi kal ki shaam
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Wasl-e-yaar kee eik umdah tasweer peish ki gayee hai, seedhey-sachchey alfaazon mein! Waaah!
            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: November 24, 2008, 06:15:09 AM »
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thnk u abd ji  notworthy


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«Reply #9 on: November 24, 2008, 07:22:06 AM »
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bahut khoob bhawna ji.
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2008, 05:00:29 AM »
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bahut khoob bhawna ji.

ji shukriya prateek ji
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