mera adhoora khab hai ...............

by chiraaaaaaaaag on May 18, 2005, 06:46:34 AM
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meri tanhaai ko ab ik mehmaaN chaahiye
    mujhko saaya naheeN ik insaaN chaahiye

    baatoN meiN khulte heiN aksar puraane zakham
    koi kam-sukhan koi bey-zubaaN chhaahiye
        (kam-sukhan = kam bolne waale)

    aNdhere heiN zindagi meiN door talak bahot
    mujhko ujaaloN ka kaarwaaN chaahiye

    mujhko na raas aayega teraa zareeN qafas
    hum parindoN ko khulaa aasmaaN chaahiye
        (zareeN qafas = sunehri pinjaraa)

     eak "khwab" par guzar di zindgi humne
     ab "chirag" koi yakeeNee "haaN" chhahiye
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2005, 06:49:43 AM »
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wow  bahot  acche  chiraag.................................
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2005, 07:06:55 AM »
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shukria wahid sahub pesh hai

'' jindgi ki mehfil me aise kaun aata hai 'chiraag'

koi 'shaksh' milta hai jab 'khuda' milata hai

yun to hum jalte hai jab koi jalata hai

har koi na jane kyon jala ke bhool jaata hai ''
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2005, 10:32:44 AM »
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good one again

mat maang tuh kisi se koi bhi chiraag
ki mangne se tuh bas bheekh milti hai
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2005, 12:47:50 PM »
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thanks sandya ji and waheed sahib .....

par us bheekh me bhi agar kisi ki duniya basti ho

voh bheekh manzoor hai ..........

Bahut roai hai us aasu ke khatir,
Jo nikalta hai khushi ki intaha per
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2005, 05:08:29 PM »
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wah chiraag,kya baat hai,bohat khoob likha..............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2005, 07:12:31 PM »
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Aatish-e-ishq bhadakte hei hawa se pehle
Honth jal jaate hei mohabbat mein duwa se pehle
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2005, 04:20:46 AM »
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kya baat hai Chiraag ji .......

mahobaat ke chirag ko vo roshan kar gaye
ki bhujaya bhi chirag tuh bas jalane kel liye........
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2005, 06:52:40 AM »
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Quote from: "chiraaaaaaaaag"
meri tanhaai ko ab ik mehmaaN chaahiye
    mujhko saaya naheeN ik insaaN chaahiye

    baatoN meiN khulte heiN aksar puraane zakham
    koi kam-sukhan koi bey-zubaaN chhaahiye
        (kam-sukhan = kam bolne waale)

    aNdhere heiN zindagi meiN door talak bahot
    mujhko ujaaloN ka kaarwaaN chaahiye

    mujhko na raas aayega teraa zareeN qafas
    hum parindoN ko khulaa aasmaaN chaahiye
        (zareeN qafas = sunehri pinjaraa)

     eak "khwab" par guzar di zindgi humne
     ab "chirag" koi yakeeNee "haaN" chhahiye


Good work dear,

hum bhi kisi ki aankhon main basna chahte hain, na ki aansun bankar,
hum bhi kisi ke dil main basna chahte hain, na ki dard bankar
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2005, 07:48:29 AM »
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shukria sabhi kadra dano ko tahe dil se ada karte hain


' mere is junooo' ka naateeeza zaroor niklega
      seincha hai ise ' lahoo ' se toh ' noor ' niklega
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2005, 08:07:31 AM »
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hum natizon ki parva nahi karte kabhi bhi ishq main
ki jalake chiraag dilon ke roshan karte hai unki mehfil ko
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2005, 08:21:05 AM »
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ye chiraag benazar hai ye sitara bezuba' hai
abhii tujhse milta julta koi dusra kahan hai


vahi shakhs jispe upne dil-o-jan nisaar kar dun
vo agar khafa nahin hai to zaruur badguman hai
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2005, 10:22:49 AM »
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huum good Chiraag..........

tujhse koi kabhi kafa ho nahi sakta
dil kitna bhi udass ho vo ro nahi sakta
ki aansuon main milkar na beh jaye tu
ek katra bhi aankh se vo baha nahi sakta
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2005, 10:29:56 AM »
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aankh ke katre ki bat kahi hai to main kahoon


hum ne to ashk pi k guzari hai sari umr
hum se khafaa hai kis liye aakhir ye zindgi
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2005, 10:33:11 AM »
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zindagi tujhse khafa nahi rahegi tab
jab aayegi teri zindagi main banke koi teri zindagi
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