!!__-Mera Anjam-__!!

by khamosh.larka on October 12, 2008, 06:46:23 AM
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 Wo Khati ha Mujy Titli Ke Rango se Mohabat ha
  Magar Masoom Titli ke Wo par nouch dalti ha

 Wo kahti ha Mujy Payar ha Pholo or Khusboo se
  Magar Aksar Kuchal deti ha Wo pairo taley in ko

 Wo kahti ha Hinai haat Muj ko Payare lagty hain
  Magar mehndi lagaty he Wo dho deti ha Hatoon ko

 Wo kahti ha Bahali lagti ha Muj ko Sawan ke barish
  Magar Barish ke Hoty he wo chup jati ha Kamry main

 Wo kahti ha Mujy Sitary achy lagty hain
  agar koi sitara toot kar zamen ke taraf ata Hoye deky

  tu kush hoti ha Youn jasy is ne Tabeer pa le hu
 
  Wo kahti ha pareendo se Main bara payar karti hun
   Magar pinjro Main inhy Qaid karti ha Wo zalim

  Wo kahti ha ke Khat likny se Mohabat Or barti ha
  Magar mera Khat party he Wo phar deti ha

   or  or or

  jis lamhy Muj se kahti ha Tum se Payar ha Jana ......sad5
 
   Mujy tum se Payar ha jana ...........)
 
   Kasam le Lo sirf tum bas
 
   Bsss tum se Usual Smile
   
   Payar ha Jana

   Pareshani ke Sagar main mera maan doob jata ..
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   ab mery saat kia ho ga

   Mera anjam kia ho ha ..............Usual Smile

       

 
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2008, 06:52:58 AM »
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wah ali jee...
kya kehna he ap ki shairy ka..
bahut hi khoobsoorat ...
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khamosh.larka
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2008, 06:55:45 AM »
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shukriya  jinab ka

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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2008, 08:13:20 AM »
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Applause Applause bohat khoobsurat achcha likha hai aapne kamosh ji...
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2008, 09:36:15 AM »
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khamosh tumne bohat khoobsurat kalam likha hain par iske khatam hote hi woh or or or wala section tumko nahi likhna chahiye tha isse tumhare kalam ki ehmiyat kam ho gayee hain. anyway beautiful work
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2008, 02:59:34 PM »
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Bouth Shukriya Sajid saab jinab ap ka , ke ap ne itni gahrai main ja kar Meri galati nikali thanks n Very very nice . Well sirf itna kahu ga Insan ju bhi likhta ha Wo os ke souch hoti ha Or wohi souch os ke Nature show karti ha ..Tu  jasi Nature ho gi wasa he souchy ga Or Wasa he Boley ga,, Meri Souch main kia tha Wo saab ke samny rakh dia ab Yea logo ke Nature Or souch ha ke Wo mujy kis andaz main comments dety hain .... Sajid saab  Mujey aik chez ke illwa kisi chez ke ahmiyat ka Nahi pata Usual Smile

 Meri Gurbat ne Uraiya Mery Fan ka Mazaq
 Logo ke Dolat ney UN Ke Aiyab Chupa Rahke Hain
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2008, 06:07:21 AM »
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Dear poet!aapki shayiri men dum hai,magar tuk bandi zra kum hai,Imean to say,joaap kehna chatey ho woh bohat acha hai ,magar Qafiya sahi nahin beth raha yeh nazm ke bajayae nasr ho gayi.
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2008, 01:23:52 PM »
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KHUSHI HAZAR SAHI GUM JUDA NAHI HOTA
GAREEB KITNI BHI PEE LE NASHA NAHI HOTA
                                  -NM-

Quote from: khamosh.larka on October 12, 2008, 02:59:34 PM
Bouth Shukriya Sajid saab jinab ap ka , ke ap ne itni gahrai main ja kar Meri galati nikali thanks n Very very nice . Well sirf itna kahu ga Insan ju bhi likhta ha Wo os ke souch hoti ha Or wohi souch os ke Nature show karti ha ..Tu  jasi Nature ho gi wasa he souchy ga Or Wasa he Boley ga,, Meri Souch main kia tha Wo saab ke samny rakh dia ab Yea logo ke Nature Or souch ha ke Wo mujy kis andaz main comments dety hain .... Sajid saab  Mujey aik chez ke illwa kisi chez ke ahmiyat ka Nahi pata Usual Smile

 Meri Gurbat ne Uraiya Mery Fan ka Mazaq
 Logo ke Dolat ney UN Ke Aiyab Chupa Rahke Hain
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2008, 02:04:19 PM »
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nice work,... magar aapke dusray kalum muhje bahot hee zayada pasand hain...
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2008, 03:36:11 PM »
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wow beautiful poetry
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