Mera dard (nam)

by poonamA on August 30, 2013, 01:52:17 PM
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Dard sah din bhar shaam bhi dhal jaati hai
Ansoo ke sath sath saans bhi pighal jaati hai

Bahoon me aakar uski jannat mil jaati hai
Juda hokar us se meri jaan nikal jaati hai

Usne kuch aise mitayee hai meri hasti
Jaise ke raat roshni ko nigal jaati hai

Ek zakhm bharta nahi uski judayee ka
Phir uski yaad naya dard ugal jati hai

Toote dil pay meray jo hath rakh de vo
Toot.ti saans bhi phir sambhal jaati hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2013, 02:00:32 PM »
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बहुत खूब कहा पूनम जी....
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2013, 02:03:17 PM »
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WAAAH BOHUT KHUBSURAT LIKHA HAI POONAM JI
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2013, 02:15:10 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Achche ehsaas rahe poonama ji... dheron daaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2013, 03:31:17 PM »
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beautiful beautiful
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2013, 03:53:16 PM »
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bahut badhiya likha hai
towards perfection.




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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2013, 04:14:43 PM »
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Bahut Pyaari Aur Dikash Shayari Likhi Hai,,,,,,
Toote dil pay meray jo hath rakh de vo
Toot.ti saans bhi phir sambhal jaati hai
Dilki Betaabi Lafjo mein Pirodi Aapne,
Bahut Khoob Poonamji.
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2013, 09:23:42 PM »
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bahot achey Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2013, 10:30:02 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Poonam ji, kyaa kehne, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2013, 02:55:04 PM »
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thanx to all
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2013, 06:09:07 PM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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