Mera dil-e-naadaaN......

by punam on April 20, 2008, 08:28:38 AM
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kya kahun kaise samjhaun main
unko kitna chahti hun..
kaise bat laun main...

dil me bas unhi ko basayi hun main
her ghadi unhi ke khayalon me khoyi rehti hun main..

na din ko milta hai chain na rat ko soti hun main
unse milne k baad kya kahun kya kya khoyi hun main...

kya kahun kaise samjhaun ....
unhe kitna chahti hun main...
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2008, 09:19:59 AM »
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wah punam kya baat hai



dil me bas unhi ko basayi hun main
her ghadi unhi ke khayalon me khoyi rehti hun main..



Baadal
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2008, 10:01:13 AM »
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thanx baadal ji...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2008, 10:48:16 AM »
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Bohat khoob punam..Usual Smile
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2008, 11:29:31 AM »
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Thanx di...
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2008, 11:36:33 AM »
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Jab se paya hai tumhe poori har aarzoo hui,
raha na kuch humara aur na koi aarzoo hui. 
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punam
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2008, 12:45:36 PM »
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Nice one ..pandit ji..
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2008, 12:50:18 PM »
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kya kahun kaise samjhaun main
unko kitna chahti hun..
kaise bat laun main...

dil me bas unhi ko basayi hun main
her ghadi unhi ke khayalon me khoyi rehti hun main..

na din ko milta hai chain na rat ko soti hun main
unse milne k baad kya kahun kya kya khoyi hun main...

kya kahun kaise samjhaun ....
unhe kitna chahti hun main...


wah wah punam.. bahut accha likha hai aapne.

apna chahat pe perda na dala karo
dil khol kar apna haal suna diya karo

din raat sapnon main na dekha karo
haqikat main unhe pass bulaliya karo

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punam
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2008, 01:18:20 PM »
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Thanx sonia...
and nice reply ...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2008, 01:19:42 PM »
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Very nice reply sonia too..Usual Smile
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punam
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2008, 01:23:40 PM »
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dil hai naadan kuch na kehe ke bhi bahot kuch keheta hai
chup hai lagta hai par dil hi dil me unse baat karta hai...

din raat unhi ko yaad karta rehta hai
unki chah me khud ko jalata rehta hai....

unki ehsason ko sath liye
yeh dhadakta rehta hai...

mera dil hai naadan kuch na keheke bhi bahot kuch keheta hai....
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2008, 01:31:11 PM »
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dil hai naadan kuch na kehe ke bhi bahot kuch keheta hai
chup hai lagta hai par dil hi dil me unse baat karta hai...

din raat unhi ko yaad karta rehta hai
unki chah me khud ko jalata rehta hai....

unki ehsason ko sath liye
yeh dhadakta rehta hai...

mera dil hai naadan kuch na keheke bhi bahot kuch keheta hai....


Very nice lines punam khoob likha hai..

Dil bebas hai unki chahat main
Kabhi na katam hogi aisi ek aag hai chahat main

Dil main hai tumari tasveer basi hue
Ek ehsaas hai joh bujh na paye teri chahat main..
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2008, 01:44:12 PM »
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thanx di and acha likhe ho aap...
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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2008, 03:08:23 PM »
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Bahoot Hi Badiya Likha Hai Punam Nice One,.
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Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2008, 06:41:29 AM »
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Thanx azeem bhai....
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