Mera jee karta hai !

by Rishi on October 16, 2004, 06:17:03 PM
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nishita
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«Reply #30 on: October 27, 2004, 09:20:19 AM »
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wah rishi

and :cry: @cry.com
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«Reply #31 on: October 27, 2004, 10:40:47 AM »
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roomaharis ji!! Aapne Likha to Khoob hai!
Magar Yeh Khumar-e-Ishq Section ke liye Maakool nahin hai!
Hope you'll understand What I wish to say!!! & Don't mind pls!!!
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Rishi
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«Reply #32 on: October 28, 2004, 01:01:15 AM »
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Shocked ye kya ho raha hai  :?:
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ye kya ho raha hai, ye kya ho raha hai,
ishq ki basti mein ye kaun ro raha hai,
mohabbat se saje mere is aahiyaan ko,
kaun gam ke saagar mein dubo raha hai....
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #33 on: October 28, 2004, 06:55:55 AM »
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Wah! Rishi!! Nice!

Mohabbat Ki Basti Mein Aaj yeh Charchaa Ho raha hai!
Pyaari si is Jannat ko kaun Ashkon se Bhigo raha hai!
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eternal
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«Reply #34 on: October 28, 2004, 07:11:54 AM »
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Very Nice Rishi

Janat ko apne askkon se kyun bighoo raha hoo
Kyun inko saata rahay hoo  Puzzled ! Puzzled !
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«Reply #35 on: October 28, 2004, 07:46:52 AM »
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wah!! wah!!! Wah!!1 nice words arun bhai......bahot pyara likha aap ne ..
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nishita
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«Reply #36 on: October 28, 2004, 07:57:06 AM »
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Quote from: "sharmaarunkumar"
Wah! Rishi!! Nice!

Mohabbat Ki Basti Mein Aaj yeh Charchaa Ho raha hai!
Pyaari si is Jannat ko kaun Ashkon se Bhigo raha hai!


mehboob ke pyaar me woh is tarah se kho raha hai
usse khudh hi khabar nahi ke woh aaj yaha ro raha hai
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #37 on: October 28, 2004, 08:08:01 PM »
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Shukriya! Waheed Bhai! Nice written Nishita ji!!Waah!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #38 on: October 28, 2004, 08:41:04 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob!!!
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Rishi
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«Reply #39 on: October 29, 2004, 02:36:08 AM »
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dikha kar khawaab meri aankhon ko,
de gaye kyun aansoo in mein tum,
kaise chhalkaa doon in aansooon ko,
in mein bhi to sanam rehte ho tum....
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #40 on: October 29, 2004, 05:05:19 AM »
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Good one ! Rishi!!
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immi
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«Reply #41 on: October 29, 2004, 07:57:08 PM »
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Bahot khub Rishi ji
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Rishi
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«Reply #42 on: October 30, 2004, 05:01:15 AM »
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Thanx Immi & Arun ! (btw that was not mine, but yesterday in hurry i forgot to mention that....sorry !
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wo khat likhte hain aur khat mein likhte hain,  
ke kaise khat likhoon mujhe sharam aati hai,
koi bataye un ko ki jab padhta hoon un ke khat,
un ki isi masoom adaa par to meri jaan jaati hai....
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #43 on: October 30, 2004, 07:58:37 AM »
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No Problem Rishi You may edit that and can write the name of poet

U R writing very nicely!! Rishi!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #44 on: October 30, 2004, 08:18:24 AM »
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bahut khoob kaha sabhi ne... bahut kboob!
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