Mera Mahboob Meri Dhadkan......

by punam on July 16, 2008, 03:54:54 PM
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uthha ke hath Khuda se jo dua maangi
to us fariyaad men wohi rahte hain..

qalam uthha ke kuch likhna chahati hun
to prerna wohi dete rahte hain...

jab kabhi khayaalon men kho jaati hun
tab tanha mujhe rahne nahin dete hain...

sona chahoon aur neend na aaye
to yaadon men aake sula dete hain....

har ghadi har jagah har pal jahan dekho
wahan woh hi woh nazar aate hain...

unhi se judi hai jaise meri saans
bas wohi is dil ki dhadkan hain...
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2008, 04:02:28 PM »
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Quote from: punam on July 16, 2008, 03:54:54 PM
uthha ke hath Khuda se jo dua maangi
to us fariyaad men wohi rahte hain..

qalam uthha ke kuch likhna chahati hun
to prerna wohi dete rahte hain...

jab kabhi khayaalon men kho jaati hun
tab tanha mujhe rahne nahin dete hain...

sona chahoon aur neend na aaye
to yaadon men aake sula dete hain....

har ghadi har jagah har pal jahan dekho
wahan woh hi woh nazar aate hain...

unhi se judi hai jaise meri saans
bas wohi is dil ki dhadkan hain...

poori tarah se khumar-e-ishq me doob-kar likhi gai hai ye kavita......ye ladki to gai......
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2008, 04:06:02 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 16, 2008, 04:02:28 PM
poori tarah se khumar-e-ishq me doob-kar likhi gai hai ye kavita......ye ladki to gai......

hahahahaha,,,, OMG...
Bhai jaan kahan yeh ladki gayi,,, zara pata to chale...
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2008, 04:06:12 PM »
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nice lines Punam!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2008, 04:13:01 PM »
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Quote from: punam on July 16, 2008, 03:54:54 PM
uthha ke hath Khuda se jo dua maangi
to us fariyaad men wohi rahte hain..
..........
unhi se judi hai jaise meri saans
bas wohi is dil ki dhadkan hain...

Mera mahboob meri dhadkan,,
Kahan se aayi yeh tadpan,,
Deke unko apna tan man dhan,,
Lag gaya inko pyar ka pagalpan..

|Syed Naami|

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Kya kamaal ka title aur aur us se bhi ziyada khoobsurat ghazal... Wah...
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Quote from: bekarar on July 16, 2008, 04:02:28 PM
poori tarah se khumar-e-ishq me doob-kar likhi gai hai ye kavita......ye ladki to gai......

Tanku tanku bhaiya...
Bhaiya aap hi dhoondo na... NaNaNa
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2008, 04:38:57 PM »
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achcha jhooth mat bolo..... Winking
dhoondh-dhandh ke pahle se hi rakh liya hai tumne aur bewazah mujhe khush karne ke liye kah diya dhoondho na.......... BangHead
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2008, 04:43:51 PM »
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Thanx Pooja di...

Quote from: syednaami on July 16, 2008, 04:06:02 PM
hahahahaha,,,, OMG...
Bhai jaan kahan yeh ladki gayi,,, zara pata to chale...

hmmmmmmmm kyun ji pata kar ke kya karna hai...?

Quote from: syednaami on July 16, 2008, 04:13:01 PM
Mera mahboob meri dhadkan,,
Kahan se aayi yeh tadpan,,
Deke unko apna tan man dhan,,
Lag gaya inko pyar ka pagalpan..

|Syed Naami|

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Kya kamaal ka title aur aur us se bhi ziyada khoobsurat ghazal... Wah...

Sukriya ji sukriya...

mera mehboob hi hai meri dhadkan
jab se woh aaya hai dil men
tab se paida hui yeh tadpan..
paake unhen un men kho gayi hun aise
chahe soche koi, ya kahe isse mera pagalpan..
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2008, 06:38:24 PM »
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Bohut achha likha he punam.
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2008, 06:52:12 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 16, 2008, 04:38:57 PM
achcha jhooth mat bolo..... Winking
dhoondh-dhandh ke pahle se hi rakh liya hai tumne aur bewazah mujhe khush karne ke liye kah diya dhoondho na.......... BangHead

bhaiya kauwa se dar lagta hai kahi kat na le..isliye aap se jhoot nahi boli...
chalo jaldi dhoondo....aur khush ho jao...

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 16, 2008, 06:38:24 PM
Bohut achha likha he punam.

sukriya Atiq bhaiya...
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2008, 09:05:56 PM »
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Quote from: punam on July 16, 2008, 04:43:51 PM


hmmmmmmmm kyun ji pata kar ke kya karna hai...?

Sukriya ji sukriya...

mera mehboob hi hai meri dhadkan
jab se woh aaya hai dil men
tab se paida hui yeh tadpan..
paake unhen un men kho gayi hun aise
chahe soche koi, ya kahe isse mera pagalpan..


Chalo Bekarar bhai hain na unse pooch lunga... aap mat kaho kuchh...

Aap ka javaab to buhat hi sundar hai,,, sukriya ji sukriya...
Maja aa gaya... thanx
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2008, 09:38:35 PM »
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Nice lines Punam and S.Naami !
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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2008, 09:41:01 PM »
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So nice of you Celmira... thanks...
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2008, 04:07:02 AM »
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bahoot khoob poonam ji bahoot achaa likha hai aapne

netra....
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2008, 04:50:25 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 16, 2008, 09:05:56 PM
Chalo Bekarar bhai hain na unse pooch lunga... aap mat kaho kuchh...

Aap ka javaab to buhat hi sundar hai,,, sukriya ji sukriya...
Maja aa gaya... thanx

hmmmmmmmm chalo nahi bolete kuch jao...bhaiya kya batayenge main bhi dekhu...

Quote from: Celmira on July 16, 2008, 09:38:35 PM
Nice lines Punam and S.Naami !

Thanx celmira di...

Quote from: NETRAPAL on July 17, 2008, 04:07:02 AM
bahoot khoob poonam ji bahoot achaa likha hai aapne

netra....

sukriya Netra ji...
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