Mera pyaar

by thycreator on May 16, 2008, 07:00:52 PM
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palkhi
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«Reply #30 on: May 17, 2008, 01:54:32 AM »
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Wow.................everyone has written so beautifully.............
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thycreator
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«Reply #31 on: May 17, 2008, 02:23:50 AM »
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Thanks a lot Palkhi ji.........Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #32 on: May 17, 2008, 11:00:06 AM »
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ye nahi ho sakta......

Ishq ek paak jajjba hai, dil mein ho jo kissi ke,
Isko mehfil-e-aam mein laana kabhi accha nahi hota...

Na ishq ko aam karo, na husn badnaam karo,
Magar husn ke saamne, kabhi to izhaar karo  DOH
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Shikha12
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«Reply #33 on: May 17, 2008, 11:00:17 AM »
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Ye noor hai tere chehre ka, ya khud hi mahtaab hai,
Tu haseeno se haseen hai, tera husn lajawaab hai..

Nigaahen hui teri ya hain ye paimane bhare jaam se,
Jaan-e-man teri aankhon mein nasha toh behisaab hai..

Teri muskaan ke sajde hain har ek sheh iss jahan ke,
Tere larazte labon ko chumna toh jaise ek khwab hai..

Teri sanson ki garmi se pighalta jata hai ye dil mera,
Meri har andheri raat ka bas ek tu hi aaftaab hai..

Tu hi armaan iss dil, tu hi ab anjaam-e-jeewan hai,
Tere hi naam se gulshan mera ye chehra-o-aab-aab hai.... love4


Bahut khoob Amit... Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Applause

Nice Replies, Celmira and Pooja di..  Thumbs UP
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Talat
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«Reply #34 on: May 17, 2008, 11:01:31 AM »
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Thanks Mahiya Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #35 on: May 17, 2008, 10:57:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob Amit... Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Applause

Nice Replies, Celmira and Pooja di..  Thumbs UP

Thanks a lot mahiya ji.....kuch shabd apse bhi milte toh accha hota........Usual Smile

Chandani raat hai aur unka khayal aaya hai,
Jo sulajh na sake kabhi wahi sawal aaya hai,
Unko dekh kar har bar kyu lagta yahi mujhe,
Meri hasrat-e-muhabbat mein naya jalal aaya hai....Winking
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thycreator
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«Reply #36 on: May 18, 2008, 06:02:25 AM »
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Teri Khusboo fizaon ko phir mehkaane lagi hai,
Zulf kuch yu udi teri ki ghata chaane lagi hai..

Gulon ka khilna teri muskaan ka kayal hua sa hai,
Baghon ki har kali bhi ab sharmaane lagi hai..

Hamari hai kya bisaat tere bepanaah husn ke aage,
Khuda ki bhi ab toh niyat dagmagaane lagi hai..tongue3

Yu na machal iss ada se sar-e-aam aye zaalim,
Kuch toh kar rehem, ye jaan jaane lagi hai.... love4
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Roja
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«Reply #37 on: May 18, 2008, 06:30:00 AM »
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Ye noor hai tere chehre ka, ya khud hi mahtaab hai,
Tu haseeno se haseen hai, tera husn lajawaab hai..

Nigaahen hui teri ya hain ye paimane bhare jaam se,
Jaan-e-man teri aankhon mein nasha toh behisaab hai..

Teri muskaan ke sajde hain har ek sheh iss jahan ke,
Tere larazte labon ko chumna toh jaise ek khwab hai..

Teri sanson ki garmi se pighalta jata hai ye dil mera,
Meri har andheri raat ka bas ek tu hi aaftaab hai..

Tu hi armaan iss dil, tu hi ab anjaam-e-jeewan hai,
Tere hi naam se gulshan mera ye chehra-o-aab-aab hai.... love4


Wah wah waaaaaaaaaahhhhh ji... Aate hi Ishq section main
khoob damal kardiya hai aapne... bahut accha laga padkar Amit
Aisa hi khoob likhna. Intezar hai aur aapko padne ki tongue3
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thycreator
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«Reply #38 on: May 18, 2008, 06:34:07 AM »
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Thanks a lot Roja ji...........hame bhi apke likhe ka intezaar rehta hai.....jaane kyun hamare thread mein hi aap kanjoosi kar jati jai....waise ye ladki jo bhi hai..........bahut cute hai...apki signature pic...Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #39 on: May 20, 2008, 07:14:21 PM »
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Meri chahat ka na inteha le aur ab khuda mujhse,
Wo aaye mere jeewan mein aur phir ho juda mujhse..

Bhul jaana uski fitrat nahi ye jaante hain hum,
Khudaya cheen na na ab kabhi dil ki dawa mujhse..

Mera mehboob hai wo, uska dil jaalim nahi hoga,
Aye khuda mere dilbar ko, ab toh mila mujhse...
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Talat
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«Reply #40 on: May 20, 2008, 07:16:47 PM »
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Khuda kare ki tera pyar rang laaye,
Mehboob tera tujhe mil jaaye
Phool khilen tere chaman main,
Aur har ghadi tu muskuraye !
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thycreator
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«Reply #41 on: May 20, 2008, 07:23:30 PM »
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Thanks you jee...thank you...

Abhi abhi uska chehra nigahon se gaya hai,
Dil dhakad gaya ek bar, ye bas uski daya hai,
Mere mehboob bas yu bhi rah meherbaa mujhpe,
Teri ulfat hi banati mera har din naya hai...Winking
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thycreator
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«Reply #42 on: May 27, 2008, 07:39:09 PM »
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Aye pyaar mere mujhse tu juda kyun hai,
Bewafa tu nahi hai par khafa kyun hai..

Ulfat ki raah par do pal ko toh theher,
Mujhe teri ye berukhi bewajah kyun hai..

Pyar chalke teri aankhon se beinteha lekin,
Labon par tere chup ka ye parda kyun hai..

Jaan bhi maang le toh fakr hi hoga mujhko,
Nigahen ferne si aisi badi saza kyun hai..

Dillagi hi agar hai husn ki ada phir toh,
Jahan ki nazar mein dilbar koi khuda kyun hai..
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Pooja
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«Reply #43 on: May 27, 2008, 07:43:04 PM »
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wow bahoot khoob Amit!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #44 on: May 27, 2008, 07:46:00 PM »
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Thanks a lot Pooja ji.....Usual Smile

Aaj aap kam hi likh rahi hain....aisa kyun??
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