****mere bas me nahi****

by jannatjahan on May 10, 2009, 07:52:10 AM
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Aaj mera mann mere bas me nahi
saj rahi swapnili duniya taaron ke beech kahin

ehsaas ek ajab sa dil-o-dimag par hai chhaya hua
aankhon me basa chehra ek pyara sa muskuraya hua

lab khamosh hai par aankhen unki kuch bol rahi hai
mere dil ke kone me band pade raaj tatol rahi hai

wo bhi chup hai mai bhi chup hun par dil dono ke mil rahe hain
hume unse unhe humse pyaar hai ye bol rahe hain

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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2009, 07:55:28 AM »
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bahut khoob jannat ji.really beutiful.
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2009, 08:12:24 AM »
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Nice work JJ..
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2009, 08:24:44 AM »
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Jannat ji.. Bahut Hi PYaara Likha hai dear.. Lajawab peshkash Hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2009, 08:38:22 AM »
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Nice work JJ..
Thanks Dear Ghayel Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2009, 08:39:03 AM »
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Aaj mera mann mere bas me nahi
saj rahi swapnili duniya taaron ke beech kahin

ehsaas ek ajab sa dil-o-dimag par hai chhaya hua
aankhon me basa chehra ek pyara sa muskuraya hua

lab khamosh hai par aankhen unki kuch bol rahi hai
mere dil ke kone me band pade raaj tatol rahi hai

wo bhi chup hai mai bhi chup hun par dil dono ke mil rahe hain
hume unse unhe humse pyaar hai ye bol rahe hain



Bahut khoob Jannat meri  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2009, 08:43:16 AM »
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bahut khoob jannat ji.really beutiful.
Thanks Dear Madhu ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2009, 08:55:57 AM »
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Jannat ji.. Bahut Hi PYaara Likha hai dear.. Lajawab peshkash Hai.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Thanks a lot Dear Mann ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2009, 09:14:30 AM »
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Bahut khoob Jannat meri  Usual Smile

Shukriya meri Roja Darling Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2009, 10:16:17 AM »
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nice one jannatjahaan...........
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2009, 05:47:25 PM »
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Bahaut acha likha hai Jannat jee...
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2009, 01:46:13 AM »
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nice one jannatjahaan...........
Thanks Dear Aaina ji
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2009, 01:52:41 AM »
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Nice work jannatji....
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2009, 02:02:35 AM »
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Nice work jannatji....
Shukriya Sager ji...
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2009, 06:48:43 AM »
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Wah kya baat ai bahoot khoob Shweta.
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