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KOYAL46
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Mere Dil K Rajkumar Ko Dekha Tha.....
Subah uthte meine parda khol kay dekha tha
Usha kee pratham kirno ko aamantrit kiya tha
Samne wali khidki me koi khoyasa khada tha
Khuli aankho se wo meri oor aplak dekhta tha
Mein tou Suryadev kay darshan kar rahi thee
Wo tak-taki lagaaye Chand ko dekh raha tha
Achaanak nazarein hamaari aapas me takraayi
Tan-badan me mere beejlee ho jaise lahraayee
Palkon ne tou jaise jhapakna he chhod diya tha
Aur Pyaasi Nazaron se wo mujhko pee raha tha
Hawa k ek jhonkhe ne julfein jo meri udaayee
Laga usse jaise Chanda pe badlee ho chhayee
Jhatak k apnee julfein lee jo meine angdaayee
Khuda gawah usski tou bas jaan pe ban aayee
Haan subah uthte he meine koi apnaasa dekha tha
Mere dil k Rajkumaar ko mujhe dekhte dekha tha
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2010, 05:27:07 PM » |
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Bahot khoob Koyal sis. Ek alag hi tarah ki poem parhne ko mili. Ek romanchak incident ka aapne chitran kiya hai. Achhi kalpana hai. Ek shabd par dhyan bhi dilana chahunga wo hai 2nd line me 'aamantri' jo shayad amantrit hona chahiye. Dekh lijiyega. Shukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2010, 06:45:50 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2010, 08:59:30 PM » |
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WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bhut khoob likha hai ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2010, 11:21:03 PM » |
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mein to suraydev ke darshan kar rahi thi
wo tak taki lagaye chaand ko daikh raha tha
nice one..........likhti rahiye
aslam
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2010, 11:05:57 AM » |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2010, 11:10:36 AM » |
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Aapka tahe dil se shukriya Riyaz-bhai..... Sahi kaha aapne T Chhut gaya tha typing me....thanks...aage bhi batate rahiyega... Bahot khoob Koyal sis. Ek alag hi tarah ki poem parhne ko mili. Ek romanchak incident ka aapne chitran kiya hai. Achhi kalpana hai. Ek shabd par dhyan bhi dilana chahunga wo hai 2nd line me 'aamantri' jo shayad amantrit hona chahiye. Dekh lijiyega. Shukriya.
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«Reply #13 on: September 28, 2010, 11:14:25 AM » |
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Anaamji tamaaro bhuaj aabhaar... |
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«Reply #14 on: September 28, 2010, 11:47:32 AM » |
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aaj subah me ek koyal se mila
ek rajkumar ko dekh rahi thi
mene kaha pagali idhar aa
koi madhur sangeet suna
wahan kya dekh rahi he
ek taktaki lagkar bhi bhala
aree pagal koi cartoon network dekhta he~ hehehehehe
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