<>*Mere dil ki tamanna*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 06, 2011, 07:16:08 PM
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<>*Mere dil ki tamanna*<>


Mere dil ki tamanna aur bhi mukhar ho jati hai
Baahon me teri jab meri aarzuein simat jati hain

Aankhon me jaise kai jugnu chamak jate hain
Teri nazron se meri jab nazrein takra jati hain

Saanson ki raftaar kuch aur badh si jati hain
Jab teri saansein meri saanson se takrati hain

Tujhpe khudko lutaane dhadkan machal jati hain
Tujhe apne dil k bahot kareeb jab ye paati hain

Thartharate honthon ko ek raahut si mil jati hai
Jab tere hothon k aagosh me ye panaah pa jati hai

Mere seene se ye dhaani chunar sarak sarak jati hai
Tere dil me jab meri masum chhabi muskurati hai

Meri ye berang surat tab har tarah se nikhar jati hai
Jab tere pyaar ki laali maathe pe mere saj jati hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2011, 07:24:13 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Aik lambe arse baad aapko yahaaN dekh kar achcha
laga... Aapki kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal to behad
roomaani hai... Usual Smile is kalaam par daad kabul kijiye..

Par hume lag raha hai ke aap shayari karna bhul gaye
haiN... Usual Smile Aapke is kalaam meiN hume pahle jaisi
shayari ki dhaar nazar nahi aayi..Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
khuda Hafez .... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2011, 07:30:09 PM »
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ji parwaz ji sahi kaha aapne..na pehle jaisi shayri na wo ehsaas ..sab bhul gaye hain hum...ab likha nahin jata ye bas ek chhoti si koshish thi dil ko behlane ki......shayad ab likhna hi chhodna padega.... sad5
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2011, 08:16:28 PM »
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Waah Waah waah Kya gehere Jazbaat pesh kiya... Bahoot Umda aur bahoot hi Romantic likha hai.. ak ak lafz mano jazbaato se Ubar Ka Aksaro mein sama gaya hai ho jaise

Bahoot Hi Umda aur behtareen pehkash !!
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2011, 10:38:23 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai Kasak ji ,mindblowing,bahut hi baddiya peshkash. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2011, 04:17:26 AM »
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bahut khub kasakji..... sihde sade lafzo main dil ki baat....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2011, 02:01:14 PM »
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Oye Hoye.. Kya Baat hai Anu Ji.. Mohabbat Ko Lafzon me Ghol kar kahati ho ki Likha nahi jaata.. Kamaal karti ho aap Bhi.. Itna khubsoorat to likha hai.. ek ek lafz ishq bikher raha hai.. Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2011, 09:27:56 AM »
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good one ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2011, 10:12:43 AM »
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Waah Waah waah Kya gehere Jazbaat pesh kiya... Bahoot Umda aur bahoot hi Romantic likha hai.. ak ak lafz mano jazbaato se Ubar Ka Aksaro mein sama gaya hai ho jaise

Bahoot Hi Umda aur behtareen pehkash !!

thnx sophi jo tumne ye pasand kiya....thnx alot
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2011, 10:48:09 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Kasak ji ,mindblowing,bahut hi baddiya peshkash. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Oye Hoye.. Kya Baat hai Anu Ji.. Mohabbat Ko Lafzon me Ghol kar kahati ho ki Likha nahi jaata.. Kamaal karti ho aap Bhi.. Itna khubsoorat to likha hai.. ek ek lafz ishq bikher raha hai.. Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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bahut khub kasakji..... sihde sade lafzo main dil ki baat....

 Applause Applause Applause

good one ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

madhu ji manjum ji adil ji aur maann ji bht bht bht shukriya aap sabka jo aapne apna keemti waqt mujhe diya...aur pasand kiya meri ek koshish ko..thnx alot ....
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2011, 11:00:20 AM »
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Bahut Khub Behna...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

shukriya bhai ..tumne ye koshish pasand ki aur sarahi..yunhi sath rehna....
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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2011, 12:23:40 PM »
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boht acha likha kasak ji apne realy heart touched romantic poem
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2011, 12:31:25 PM »
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thnx saahil .... meri poem pasand karne aur sarahne k liye...thnx alot re...
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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2011, 12:42:33 PM »
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ur welcome
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2011, 12:50:20 PM »
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aapki soch mujhe achha laga
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