Mere dil ne ek raat mujhse poocha..

by ~princess~ on November 24, 2007, 05:25:46 PM
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Nai dil mein koi to bata wo khat mein salaam kiska tha
Naa raqiib tha tera to wo naam kiska tha

Mujhse chupaoge to kya paoge akhir tera "dil" hu
Jo har roz bheja hai narzon se wo payam kiska tha

Hunar chaiye Ishq k rutbe ko chupane k liye
Chalo wo koi nai par tujhpar likha yeh kalaam kiska tha

Aj kal sajne lage ko niharne lage ho khudko aino mein
Teri ankho ko yeh bebq intezaar kiska tha

Kehdo mujhse to khud bhi karar paoge is se
Zehan mein yeh khayal subh o shaam kiska tha

Mujhse kehti ho k Ishq hota kaise hai aye "Dil"
Par ab bata tujhpe jaan yeh shumar kiska tha

ek nazar mein tujhe ghayal karke wo betabi inaam kargaya
Baal.i umar mein bata yeh nazr e katl ka kaam kiska tha?!



~Roshni~
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muskan_bye
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2007, 07:15:39 PM »
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Very nice "princess" ji very good and keep it up
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2007, 09:51:35 PM »
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Roshu

oye hoye ! Bade khumar mein likha hai ji :wink:

Sab khairiyat se to hai na :D

Bahut achche =D>
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2007, 06:34:08 AM »
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Love one Roshu... :D
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2007, 10:44:11 AM »
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Rosh... Bahut hi achha likha hai...
Each and every sher is complete in itself... Very Good Work... =D> =D>
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2007, 07:21:45 AM »
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Really Nice one....
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2007, 04:23:03 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai ROSHNI Sis.. Kamaal Hi kar diya Kalam se.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Behad Khubsoorat Aur Pyaar Bhare Ehasaas Pesh Kiye hain Dear.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Vicky
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2007, 10:42:26 AM »
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aap log sirf wah wah karo....koi khud kuch nai likhega.......hum nai likhenge phir


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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2007, 05:24:46 PM »
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Ohohohoho... Gussa Aa gaya Roshu Ko.. Areeeeee gussa Mat Karo..
Likh raha Hoon Naaaaa.. Lo Likh diya..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile


Is bechani aur beqaraari ko thoda aur badhne do,
zulfon ke saye me humko, apne hosh khone do......

ab in baahon me bharne ko tujhe tadapta ha dil,
machalte in armaano ko, kuch aur bahakne do......

chhane laga hai ab mohabbat-e-suroor is kadar,
ki andheri is raat ko, thoda aur jawaan hone do.......!!
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2007, 06:02:35 PM »
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Mujhse kehti ho k Ishq hota kaise hai aye "Dil"
Par ab bata tujhpe jaan yeh shumar kiska tha

ek nazar mein tujhe ghayal karke wo betabi inaam kargaya
Baal.i umar mein bata yeh nazr e katl ka kaam kiska tha?!

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Roshni.
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2007, 06:04:41 PM »
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Ohohohoho... Gussa Aa gaya Roshu Ko.. Areeeeee gussa Mat Karo..
Likh raha Hoon Naaaaa.. Lo Likh diya..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile


Is bechani aur beqaraari ko thoda aur badhne do,
zulfon ke saye me humko, apne hosh khone do......

ab in baahon me bharne ko tujhe tadapta ha dil,
machalte in armaano ko, kuch aur bahakne do......

chhane laga hai ab mohabbat-e-suroor is kadar,
ki andheri is raat ko, thoda aur jawaan hone do.......!!


Wah wah kya bath hai vicky ji... mast likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #11 on: December 09, 2007, 04:30:13 PM »
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princess sahiba ghazal achchi hai, par merey khyal sey yeh ghulam ali sahab ki gayi hui kaafi purani ghazal hai.

mujhko bata do main bechain hoon yaaron
jisney likhi thi yah ghazal aakhir woh naam kiska tha.
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«Reply #12 on: December 10, 2007, 07:51:10 AM »
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hahaha no i relli dont think k ghulam ali sahab ne likhi hai?!

kyu ki yeh to ek raat  baithe humne likhi thi?!

pata nai shayad iske bol milte ho....par yeh likhi to definetly meine hai....
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«Reply #13 on: December 10, 2007, 07:51:53 AM »
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wow
Ohohohoho... Gussa Aa gaya Roshu Ko.. Areeeeee gussa Mat Karo..
Likh raha Hoon Naaaaa.. Lo Likh diya..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile


Is bechani aur beqaraari ko thoda aur badhne do,
zulfon ke saye me humko, apne hosh khone do......

ab in baahon me bharne ko tujhe tadapta ha dil,
machalte in armaano ko, kuch aur bahakne do......

chhane laga hai ab mohabbat-e-suroor is kadar,
ki andheri is raat ko, thoda aur jawaan hone do.......!!

bro tussi ek hi jo jisko meri fikar hai.....bohot khoob
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«Reply #14 on: December 10, 2007, 07:59:37 PM »
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WAFA KAREGE, NIBHAYENGE, BAAT MAANEGE,
TUMHE BHI TO YAAD HO, KI YE KALAAM KISKA THA.

                   JAKIR KHAN
                   (GUMSUM)
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