Mere Haal Par Hasane Walo--------@Advo.RavinderRavi'Sagar'

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Mere Haak Par Hasane Walo,
Ho Sake To,
Meri Mout Par Musqura Dena /
     Uthane KoHo Ji Zanaja Mera,
     To Kahin,
     Do Aansu Tum Na Bhaha Dena //
Mere Haak Par Hasane Walo,Ho Sake To,Meri Mout Par Musqura Dena / Uthane KoHo Ji Zanaja Mera,To Kahin,Do Aansu Tum Na Bhaha Dena //
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2013, 08:28:36 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2013, 09:01:26 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2013, 09:58:46 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 31, 2013, 07:24:37 PM
Mere Haak Par Hasane Walo,
Ho Sake To,
Meri Mout Par Musqura Dena /
     Uthane KoHo Ji Zanaja Mera,
     To Kahin,
     Do Aansu Tum Na Bhaha Dena //
Mere Haak Par Hasane Walo,Ho Sake To,Meri Mout Par Musqura Dena / Uthane KoHo Ji Zanaja Mera,To Kahin,Do Aansu Tum Na Bhaha Dena //


                    mere haal pe hansne waal.on
                    maut pe bhee mere muskuraa dena.

                    ab uthne ko hai janaaza mere.
                    dekho kahin aansoo na bahaa dena.
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2013, 01:27:14 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on March 31, 2013, 09:58:46 PM

                    mere haal pe hansne waal.on
                    maut pe bhee mere muskuraa dena.

                    ab uthne ko hai janaaza mere.
                    dekho kahin aansoo na bahaa dena.
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2013, 01:27:59 AM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on March 31, 2013, 09:01:26 PM
very nice
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2013, 01:29:35 AM »
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Quote from: ambalika sharma on March 31, 2013, 08:28:36 PM
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2013, 01:33:58 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 31, 2013, 07:24:37 PM
Mere Haak Par Hasane Walo,
Ho Sake To,
Meri Mout Par Musqura Dena /
     Uthane KoHo Ji Zanaja Mera,
     To Kahin,
     Do Aansu Tum Na Bhaha Dena //
Mere Haak Par Hasane Walo,Ho Sake To,Meri Mout Par Musqura Dena / Uthane KoHo Ji Zanaja Mera,To Kahin,Do Aansu Tum Na Bhaha Dena //


check the spellings and correct them. i think mr qalb has done the right job and that is the right way. sir
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2013, 01:42:10 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on April 01, 2013, 01:33:58 AM

check the spellings and correct them. i think mr qalb has done the right job and that is the right way. sir
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2013, 12:27:18 PM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on March 31, 2013, 09:01:26 PM
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 01, 2013, 12:27:18 PM
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