-~Mere Hamsafar~-:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Tosha

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well ... out of all sadism and pessimist impression!! tongue3

here is a poem of love.

Kash-m-kash se guzrti, uthti, girti
Yeh mohabbet aaj rang laye hai
socha na tha rah main saath dete dete
tum zindgi mein hamsafar banjaoge

baithi hun reet main seepe batorti
aur samundr ke thandi lahere tan ko chuti hai
socha na tha panch tantra ke is khel main
saath mere itni door chale aaoge

Mere baabul ko mili hai aaj kushi
Apni beti ke haatn unhe peele karne hai
Socha na tha is asat mohabbet ko dil se laga
tum kayamat tak mere saath nibhaoge

tere khayalo main gumsum hun baithi
hawa ke jokhe mere zulfo ko bahekate hai
socha na tha yuh lajja jayengi yeh aakhen
tum jab mere deedar ki preet manaoge

Hee ee ee heheee ... Yaar saal hua hai aab to koi love-shov ke kavita kilhe ... :wink:

feel free to critics me.

and i'v drown inspiration from Talat. ha ha ha !!


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vikas2210

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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2006, 04:12:55 AM »

Toshaaaaaaaaaaaa

very nice.......

yaar sach mai bahut khoob kaha aapne khas kar:

Mere baabul ko mili hai aaj kushi
Apni beti ke haatn unhe peele karne hai
Socha na tha is asat mohabbet ko dil se laga
tum kayamat tak mere saath nibhaoge

kitna deep meaning hai chahe to love kaho ya samjho tadap...

wah wah man gaye aapko.........


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ranjana

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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2006, 04:46:52 AM »

bahut khoob tosha ....very nice Usual Smile


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Talat

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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2006, 10:37:40 AM »

Bohot hi achcha lilha Tosha.....par mujh se inspired :?:


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Tosha

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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2006, 10:57:53 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Bohot hi achcha lilha Tosha.....par mujh se inspired :?:

raaz ko raaz hi rahene do ... :evil:


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Tosha

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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2006, 10:58:22 AM »

Quote from: "ranjana"

bahut khoob tosha ....very nice Usual Smile

Thanx Ranjana ji!!


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Tosha

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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2006, 10:59:13 AM »

Quote from: "vikas2210"

Thanx Vikas :D

aap bhi kuch likhe Puzzled !


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Tosha

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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2006, 11:03:01 AM »

Quote from: "majid"

apni aankhon ke samandar mein utar jane de
jeeta aaya hoon bemaksad mujhe aaj mar jane de

apna hi aksh paaoge jidhar bhi tum dekhoge
dil ko ek baar mere toot kar bikhar jane de

tere bakshe zakhm meri chahat ki gawahi denge
dard e dil ko mere hadd se guzar jane de

ek baar tujhe dekhne ki aarzoo hai ru_b_ru
behte ashqon ko mere ek baar thehar jane de

ab jo karaar paa liya to kya faayda "majid"
meri aahon se apni duniya sawar jane de

bahut khoob Majid!!


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Talat

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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2006, 11:09:20 AM »

Nice one MAJID !!!


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Talat

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«Reply #9 on: December 19, 2006, 11:13:48 AM »

Quote from: "Tosha"

Quote from: "Talat"

Bohot hi achcha lilha Tosha.....par mujh se inspired :?:

raaz ko raaz hi rahene do ... :evil:

Kehte hain daastaan-e-mohabbat, aur hume dekhte hain
Khuda jaane in bheegi aankhon main wo kya dekhte hain
Kuch aur to bas main nahin, haan bas yahi dua hai Rab se
Khush rahe sada shaad-o-abaad rahe mera dost anmol ye !!


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Tosha

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«Reply #10 on: December 19, 2006, 11:52:17 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

aap ke pyaar ka afsana, aap ke aakho ka utkana
khuwaish hai hamari ek din aap ke dil main hai basjana
bhege bhege lab ho ya phir yeh nam udas aakhen
niti aur aap ke pyaar ke kahani, hanko hai jag ko sunana


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Talat

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«Reply #11 on: December 19, 2006, 11:57:36 AM »

Very nice ...but ye Niti kaun hai Shocked


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Tosha

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«Reply #12 on: December 19, 2006, 12:01:51 PM »

Niti = a moral tale .. hee heh ee hoo!! hum hindi sikh ne ki kosish main hai tongue3


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Talat

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«Reply #13 on: December 19, 2006, 12:05:41 PM »

Good hai phir Usual Smile


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Tosha

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«Reply #14 on: December 19, 2006, 12:07:29 PM »

thanx thanx .. !!


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