-~Mere Hamsafar~- -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

_Vicky_

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«Reply #15 on: December 19, 2006, 12:21:49 PM »

Quote from: "Tosha"

well ... out of all sadism and pessimist impression!! tongue3

here is a poem of love.

Kash-m-kash se guzrti, uthti, girti
Yeh mohabbet aaj rang laye hai
socha na tha rah main saath dete dete
tum zindgi mein hamsafar banjaoge

baithi hun reet main seepe batorti
aur samundr ke thandi lahere tan ko chuti hai
socha na tha panch tranta ke is khel main
saath mere itni door chale aaoge

Mere baabul ko mili hai aaj kushi
Apni beti ke haatn unhe peele karne hai
Socha na tha is asat mohabbet ko dil se laga
tum kayamat tak mere saath nibhaoge

tere khayalo main gumsun hun baithi
hawa ke jokhe mere zulfo ko bahekate hai
socha na tha yuh lajja jayengi yeh aakhen
tum jab mere deedar ki pret manaoge

Hee ee ee heheee ... Yaar saal hua hai aab to koi love-shov ke kavita kilhe ... :wink:

feel free to critics me.

and i'v drown inspiration from Talat. ha ha ha !!

wah wah TOSHA JI.. kamaal ka kalaam likha hai aaapne...
bahut bahut khooooooooooob... Behtreen ehasaas hain aapke... Usual Smile


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Tosha

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«Reply #16 on: December 19, 2006, 12:27:24 PM »

shukeriya ... !! aap bhi kuch arz kare!!


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Tosha

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«Reply #17 on: December 19, 2006, 08:00:34 PM »

Mere hamsafar, mera haath tham lo
seene main chupa lo yeh mohabbet na kahi badnaam ho


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pinky

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«Reply #18 on: December 19, 2006, 08:11:21 PM »

Quote from: "Tosha"

well ... out of all sadism and pessimist impression!! tongue3

itne pyaar se itna kuch keh diya aapne..
bahut khoob words use kiye hain..aur Hindi badhiya hai..!!

Muddaton baad jo mehsus kiya Mohabbat ko
Dil se ek aah kuch yun nikli..
Beh gaya saara Dard ek aansu mein
Aur Gham ko ab mujhse shikayat ho chali..


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Tosha

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«Reply #19 on: December 19, 2006, 08:19:31 PM »

Quote from: "pinky"

Unhe mohabbet unki deewangi
kuch aise hai apni prem kahai
socha na tha muddton baad bhi aach sulagti rahigi
ki gum ko bhi humse shikhayat hogi

Nice said Pinky :D


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pinky

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«Reply #20 on: December 19, 2006, 08:24:02 PM »

bahut khoob.. aur shukriya..

Unki mohabbat mein jo guzre hain
Raat aur din ke pahar..
Wo aalam hi kuch aur tha..
Phir jiyenge kabhi hum uss beqarari ko..
Ye to maine kabhi socha bhi na tha..


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Tosha

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«Reply #21 on: December 19, 2006, 08:28:48 PM »

pyaar main yeh bekarari mitha mitha daard lati hai
yeh daard kabhi judai ke kabhi deedar ke yaad dilati hai
yeh to daastan-e-mohabbat hai, anmol ahsasa
ishq main bewafai bhi kabhi kabhi haseen rang lati hai


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pinky

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«Reply #22 on: December 19, 2006, 08:32:33 PM »

Ishq ke meethe dard ko chakhe bahut din hue
Kudrat ne fir aaj jaam-e-ishq thamaya hai
Pee kar jhoomta hai dil fir mera..
Jaise registan mein baadal ghir aaye hain..


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Tosha

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«Reply #23 on: December 19, 2006, 08:35:55 PM »

aaj ... !!

aaj aakal ke baad barish hogi
jo kiya hai tumhe izhar-e-iskq aapna
aaj dharti haari laal hogi
ishq main jaam jo tumne khankhaya hai


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pinky

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«Reply #24 on: December 19, 2006, 08:39:02 PM »

waah!!

Ishq ki barsat ki baat hi kya kahiye
Bheeg kar bhi dil nahi bharta..
Kaisa nasha hai yaar ke deedar ka
Uski aankhon mein doob kar dil nahi ubharta..


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pyarikudi1983

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«Reply #25 on: December 20, 2006, 01:08:09 PM »

Wahhhhh!!!!!!!! Kamal ki mehfil jaami hai yahan tho dil khush hogaya!!! Lovely tosha, nidhi, pinky and all who have contributed in this mindblowing thread by Anutosha


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Tosha

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«Reply #26 on: December 20, 2006, 01:25:28 PM »

Thanx Ji!!


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Tosha

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«Reply #27 on: December 20, 2006, 07:17:31 PM »

Quote from: "pinky"

waah!!

Ishq ki barsat ki baat hi kya kahiye
Bheeg kar bhi dil nahi bharta..
Kaisa nasha hai yaar ke deedar ka
Uski aankhon mein doob kar dil nahi ubharta..

aashaki main aao ke khud ko bhula giya
deewmndi main aap ke khud ko mita diya
yeh mohabbet hi to hai sanam jo tum pe mer mite
hamne paane ke liye aap ko zamana buhula diya


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Shikha12

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«Reply #28 on: December 20, 2006, 07:23:58 PM »

Ooossome.. Tosha... :D
Very nice replies .... Talat, Majid, Pinky.. =D> =D> =D>


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Tosha

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«Reply #29 on: December 20, 2006, 07:25:36 PM »

:D Thanx !!!


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