-~Mere Hamsafar~-

by Tosha on December 18, 2006, 11:27:20 PM
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«Reply #30 on: December 20, 2006, 08:29:38 PM »
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waah!!

Ishq ki barsat ki baat hi kya kahiye
Bheeg kar bhi dil nahi bharta..
Kaisa nasha hai yaar ke deedar ka
Uski aankhon mein doob kar dil nahi ubharta..


aashaki main aao ke khud ko bhula giya
deewmndi main aap ke khud ko mita diya
yeh mohabbet hi to hai sanam jo tum pe mer mite
hamne paane ke liye aap ko zamana buhula diya


Mohabbat ka hi surur hai..
Ismein dil ka kya kusoor hai..
Har shae bhulakar humne
Aankhon mein tumhi ko basaya..
Dil kyuu itna majbor hai..
Sahayd isliye mohabbat itni mash-hoor hai..
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«Reply #31 on: December 21, 2006, 05:49:56 PM »
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well ... out of all sadism and pessimist impression!! tongue3 here is a poem of love.

Kash-m-kash se guzrti, uthti, girti
Yeh mohabbet aaj rang laye hai
socha na tha rah main saath dete dete
tum zindgi mein hamsafar banjaoge

baithi hun reet main seepe batorti
aur samundr ke thandi lahere tan ko chuti hai
socha na tha panch tantra ke is khel main
saath mere itni door chale aaoge

Mere baabul ko mili hai aaj kushi
Apni beti ke haatn unhe peele karne hai
Socha na tha is asat mohabbet ko dil se laga
tum kayamat tak mere saath nibhaoge

tere khayalo main gumsum hun baithi
hawa ke jokhe mere zulfo ko bahekate hai
socha na tha yuh lajja jayengi yeh aakhen
tum jab mere deedar ki preet manaoge



Hee ee ee heheee ... Yaar saal hua hai aab to koi love-shov ke kavita kilhe ...  :wink:

feel free to critics me.

and i'v drown inspiration from Talat. ha ha ha !!


B'ful Tosha,bohat acha likha hai.Waise ek baat bataaun :D jab mere se bhi kuch likha nahi jaata to main bhi TalaT se hi inspiration le leti hoon :lol: ,and the magic really works.

Gr8 work Majid,pinky.
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«Reply #32 on: December 22, 2006, 09:40:59 PM »
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well ... out of all sadism and pessimist impression!! tongue3 here is a poem of love.

Kash-m-kash se guzrti, uthti, girti
Yeh mohabbet aaj rang laye hai
socha na tha rah main saath dete dete
tum zindgi mein hamsafar banjaoge

baithi hun reet main seepe batorti
aur samundr ke thandi lahere tan ko chuti hai
socha na tha panch tantra ke is khel main
saath mere itni door chale aaoge

Mere baabul ko mili hai aaj kushi
Apni beti ke haatn unhe peele karne hai
Socha na tha is asat mohabbet ko dil se laga
tum kayamat tak mere saath nibhaoge

tere khayalo main gumsum hun baithi
hawa ke jokhe mere zulfo ko bahekate hai
socha na tha yuh lajja jayengi yeh aakhen
tum jab mere deedar ki preet manaoge



Hee ee ee heheee ... Yaar saal hua hai aab to koi love-shov ke kavita kilhe ...  :wink:

feel free to critics me.

and i'v drown inspiration from Talat. ha ha ha !!



A'illa apni Tosha bhi shyaar ban gayi ...   Shocked   yeh kha hoon mein ....  yoindia hi hia na .... m'aam aap tosha hi ho ?  waseey bahut achi khosish hai .....  jaar'i  rhe ......  hamari traf se aap ke liye danda hazzir hai .....  offoo offooo  sorry sorry typo ho gya ... i mean daad hazri hai .... ab qa'buul bhi kar lijiye na !!
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«Reply #33 on: December 22, 2006, 09:44:31 PM »
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qu'bool hai tongue3
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«Reply #34 on: December 22, 2006, 09:48:55 PM »
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Ab do baar aur keh dijiye to baat bhi ban jaye ...  hahaha ....  :lol:  waseey kehte hai:

Gum na karo ke apni baat ban na saki
Jinki baat ban gayi woh har lamha rote hai !!

Ji aap s'her pe na jayiga ...  apne dil ki suniyega !!
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«Reply #35 on: December 22, 2006, 11:06:50 PM »
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Gum na karo ke apni baat ban na saki
Jinki baat ban gayi woh har lamha rote hai !!


 Puzzled !

jinki baat ban gayi wo her pal rote hai
per phir bhi dil hai aage kisi ki na chal saki
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«Reply #36 on: December 28, 2006, 04:49:49 PM »
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is dil se tammana hum teri mita na sake
teri bewafai ka vajood bhi hum thukra na sake
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«Reply #37 on: January 16, 2007, 03:32:55 PM »
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B'ful Tosha,bohat acha likha hai.Waise ek baat bataaun :D jab mere se bhi kuch likha nahi jaata to main bhi TalaT se hi inspiration le leti hoon :lol: ,and the magic really works.

Gr8 work Majid,pinky.


Thanx Ya .. wo kya hai ... Talat busy raheti hai kafi ... aur mujhe pata hai ki yaha ki life kaise hoti hai ... aadmi ko sochne ka time tak nahi milta ... lakin aise TOUGH time main bhi talat poems pe poems likhti hai... I wonder usse time kab milta hai ...  Puzzled !

SO i took some inspirations from her  :D and took out time to write  :D
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«Reply #38 on: September 30, 2007, 09:46:08 PM »
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Puzzled ! after corrections  Puzzled !  Puzzled !




काश-म-काश से गुज़रती, उठती, गिरती
ये मोहब्बत आज रंग लाई है
सोचा ना था रह मे साथ देते देते
तुम ज़िंदगी में हमसफ़र बंजाओगे

बैठी हूँ रीत मे सीपे बटोरती
और समुंद्र के ठंडी लहेरे तन को छूती है
सोचा ना था पॅंच तन्त्र के इस खेल मे
साथ मेरे इतनी दूर चले आओगे

मेरे बाबुल को मिली है आज ख़ुशी
अपनी बेटी के हाथन उन्हे पीले करने है
सोचा ना था इस अस्त मोहब्बत को दिल से लगा
तुम क़यामत तक मेरे साथ निभाओगे

तेरे ख़यालो मे गुम्मसुम हूँ बैठी
हवा के जोखे मेरे ज़ुल्फ़ो को बहेकते है
सोचा ना था यूह लज्जा जाएँगी ये आखें
तुम जब मेरे दीदार की प्रीत मनाओगे


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Kash-m-kash se guzrti, uthti, girti
Ye mohabbt aaj rang layi hai
socha na tha rah me saath dete dete
tum zindgi mein hamsafar banjaoge

baithi hun reet me seepe batorti
aur samundr ke thandi lahere tn ko chuti hai
socha na tha panch tantra ke is khel me
saath mere itni dur chale aaoge

Mere baabul ko mili hai aaj khushi
Apni beti ke haatn unhe peele karne hai
Socha na tha is ast mohabbt ko dil se laga
tum kayamat tak mere saath nibhaoge

tere khayalo me gummsum hun baithi
hawa ke jokhe mere zulfo ko bahekate hai
socha na tha yuh lajja jayengi yeh aakhen
tum jab mere deedar ki preet manaoge
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«Reply #39 on: October 01, 2007, 12:16:21 AM »
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Puzzled ! after corrections  Puzzled !  Puzzled !




काश-म-काश से गुज़रती, उठती, गिरती
ये मोहब्बत आज रंग लाई है
सोचा ना था रह मे साथ देते देते
तुम ज़िंदगी में हमसफ़र बंजाओगे

बैठी हूँ रीत मे सीपे बटोरती
और समुंद्र के ठंडी लहेरे तन को छूती है
सोचा ना था पॅंच तन्त्र के इस खेल मे
साथ मेरे इतनी दूर चले आओगे

मेरे बाबुल को मिली है आज ख़ुशी
अपनी बेटी के हाथन उन्हे पीले करने है
सोचा ना था इस अस्त मोहब्बत को दिल से लगा
तुम क़यामत तक मेरे साथ निभाओगे

तेरे ख़यालो मे गुम्मसुम हूँ बैठी
हवा के जोखे मेरे ज़ुल्फ़ो को बहेकते है
सोचा ना था यूह लज्जा जाएँगी ये आखें
तुम जब मेरे दीदार की प्रीत मनाओगे


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Kash-m-kash se guzrti, uthti, girti
Ye mohabbt aaj rang layi hai
socha na tha rah me saath dete dete
tum zindgi mein hamsafar banjaoge

baithi hun reet me seepe batorti
aur samundr ke thandi lahere tn ko chuti hai
socha na tha panch tantra ke is khel me
saath mere itni dur chale aaoge

Mere baabul ko mili hai aaj khushi
Apni beti ke haatn unhe peele karne hai
Socha na tha is ast mohabbt ko dil se laga
tum kayamat tak mere saath nibhaoge

tere khayalo me gummsum hun baithi
hawa ke jokhe mere zulfo ko bahekate hai
socha na tha yuh lajja jayengi yeh aakhen
tum jab mere deedar ki preet manaoge


Tosha... bahut khoob  wah wah..Keep flowing ..

Nazar ke mod per jo khade tum raho
Raah dil ki hamare nazar aayegi..
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«Reply #40 on: October 16, 2007, 09:26:57 PM »
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Thanx Roja!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: October 17, 2007, 05:03:03 AM »
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Very nice tosha..
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«Reply #42 on: October 17, 2007, 07:22:55 AM »
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Thanx a lot sapnaa!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #43 on: June 16, 2008, 10:59:25 PM »
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Done!!
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«Reply #44 on: June 16, 2008, 11:23:36 PM »
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bahoot bahoot khoob tosha........... Applause tumhari kawaitaye bhawanao se bhari hoti hai bahoot acchey Applause
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