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Main ho na jaaun kahin phir juda mere mehboob
Jo tere dil mein hai mujhko bata mere mehboob
Main tujhko chaah ke khud se bhi ho gaya ghaafil
Mujhe pata nahin achha bura mere mehboob
Bas aur kuchh nahin kehta main teri chahat mein
Main jano-dil se hun tujh par fida mere mehboob
Ye zehno-dil tujhe har waqt karte hain mehsoos
Tu faaslon hi se de de sadaa mere mehboob
Na jaane hoga mera kya jo toone thukraaya
Hain ashk ankhon mein lab par dua mere mehboob
Ye theek hai ke wafa ka nahin chalan lekin
Na khwaab mein bhi karunga jafa mere mehbob
Bas ab to faisla kar de meri muhabbat ka
Tu “Ashna” ko bana ya mita mere mehboob
Riyaz "Ashna"
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2010, 05:33:48 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2010, 09:17:19 AM » |
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Thank you very much Hashmi ji, for liking my this creation. |
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2010, 09:23:07 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2010, 11:43:54 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI RIYAZ106 JI......
TERE KADMON MEIN HAMNE PAAYI HAI JANNAT MERE MEHBOOB
IS JAHAN MEIN SABSE TUM HI HO KHOOB MERE MEHBOOB
TERI CHAHAT MEIN HAM JAANA CHAHATE HAI DOOB MERI MEHBOOB
DILO-JAAN KI KASAM TUMSE JUDA NAHI RAHE PAAYENGE HAM MERE MEHBOOB..
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riyaz106
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2010, 12:12:17 PM » |
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Suresh ji, ghazal pasand farmane aur hausal afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya. |
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2010, 12:38:20 PM » |
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G H A Z A L
Main ho na jaaun kahin phir juda mere mehboob
Jo tere dil mein hai mujhko bata mere mehboob
Main tujhko chaah ke khud se bhi ho gaya ghaafil
Mujhe pata nahin achha bura mere mehboob
Bas aur kuchh nahin kehta main teri chahat mein
Main jano-dil se hun tujh par fida mere mehboob
Ye zehno-dil tujhe har waqt karte hain mehsoos
Tu faaslon hi se de de sadaa mere mehboob
Na jaane hoga mera kya jo toone thukraaya
Hain ashk ankhon mein lab par dua mere mehboob
Ye theek hai ke wafa ka nahin chalan lekin
Na khwaab mein bhi karunga jafa mere mehbob
Bas ab to faisla kar de meri muhabbat ka
Tu “Ashna” ko bana ya mita mere mehboob
Riyaz "Ashna"
Bohot khoobsurat aur jazbaat se bharpoor ghazal likhi hai aapne Riyaz Ji... |
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riyaz106
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2010, 02:09:42 PM » |
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Bahut Shukriya Kaash ji. Meri khushnasibi ke aapko ye ghazal pasand aai. bahut khoob Riyaz ji umda peom
bahut khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2010, 02:30:58 PM » |
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KHUDA KARE TU HO SIRF AUR SIRF MERI HI PASAND
KOI AUR TUJHKO BHOOL KE BHI NA CHAHE MERE MEHBOOB.
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2010, 03:03:34 PM » |
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bohat khoob Riyaz sahab...bohat hi achha likha hai aapne..  |
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riyaz106
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2010, 05:32:32 PM » |
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Bahut shukriya Cara ji. WAH KYA BAAT HAI RIYAZ106 JI......
TERE KADMON MEIN HAMNE PAAYI HAI JANNAT MERE MEHBOOB
IS JAHAN MEIN SABSE TUM HI HO KHOOB MERE MEHBOOB
TERI CHAHAT MEIN HAM JAANA CHAHATE HAI DOOB MERI MEHBOOB
DILO-JAAN KI KASAM TUMSE JUDA NAHI RAHE PAAYENGE HAM MERE MEHBOOB..
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«Reply #11 on: February 24, 2010, 08:15:37 PM » |
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G H A Z A L
Main ho na jaaun kahin phir juda mere mehboob
Jo tere dil mein hai mujhko bata mere mehboob
Main tujhko chaah ke khud se bhi ho gaya ghaafil
Mujhe pata nahin achha bura mere mehboob
Bas aur kuchh nahin kehta main teri chahat mein
Main jano-dil se hun tujh par fida mere mehboob
Ye zehno-dil tujhe har waqt karte hain mehsoos
Tu faaslon hi se de de sadaa mere mehboob
Na jaane hoga mera kya jo toone thukraaya
Hain ashk ankhon mein lab par dua mere mehboob
Ye theek hai ke wafa ka nahin chalan lekin
Na khwaab mein bhi karunga jafa mere mehbob
Bas ab to faisla kar de meri muhabbat ka
Tu “Ashna” ko bana ya mita mere mehboob
Riyaz "Ashna"
Bahut khub Riyaz Sahab...aapki is ghazal mein mujhe behtareen Sufiyana andaz nazar aa raha hai, I am speechless..
"Ye theek hai ke wafa ka nahin chalan lekin
Na khwaab mein bhi karunga jafa mere mehboob
Bas ab to faisla kar de meri muhabbat ka
Tu “Ashna” ko bana ya mita mere mehboob"
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Sheenali
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«Reply #12 on: February 25, 2010, 02:13:22 AM » |
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riyaz106
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«Reply #13 on: February 25, 2010, 04:53:35 AM » |
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Talat Ji aapka tahe-dil se shukriya, meri ghazal ko pasand farmane aur tareef ke liye. Bohot khoobsurat aur jazbaat se bharpoor ghazal likhi hai aapne Riyaz Ji...
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«Reply #14 on: February 25, 2010, 12:11:53 PM » |
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Wah wah Suresh ji bahut khoob lines likhi hain. Shukriya. KHUDA KARE TU HO SIRF AUR SIRF MERI HI PASAND
KOI AUR TUJHKO BHOOL KE BHI NA CHAHE MERE MEHBOOB.
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on eTI community..
