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Dekh unhe saamne aankh mila nahi paati hun
sharam se aankh yun jhuka leti hun
zulfon ke saaye me chupne ki koshish karti hun
paas aake woh jab zulf hatana chahe
haathon se chehra chupane lagti hun...
nazar ke teer se ghayal kar ke
poochte hain mujhse..
chehre se haath kyun hatati nahi hun..
kehete hain woh sharmati kyun ho
pyar karti ho toh chupati kyun ho
kaise kahoon unse kitna pyar karti hun
failaye jo woh baahein toh...
samake khud ko bhul jana chahti hun...
bin unke ab jeena hai dushwaar
apna le mujhe bas unse yehi kehna chahti hun....
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2007, 11:03:41 AM » |
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Dekh unhe saamne aankh mila nahi paati hun
sharam se aankh yun jhuka leti hun
zulfon ke saaye me chupne ki koshish karti hun
paas aake woh jab zulf hatana chahe
haathon se chehra chupane lagti hun...
nazar ke teer se ghayal kar ke
poochte hain mujhse..
chehre se haath kyun hatati nahi hun..
kehete hain woh sharmati kyun ho
pyar karti ho toh chupati kyun ho
kaise kahoon unse kitna pyar karti hun
failaye jo woh baahein toh...
samake khud ko bhul jana chahti hun...
bin unke ab jeena hai dushwaar
apna le mujhe bas unse yehi kehna chahti hun.... wow Punam gudia bahut accha likhti ho dear... bahut khoob |
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2007, 11:07:43 AM » |
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Thax di...aap ko acha laga...
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2007, 11:51:20 AM » |
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It is good Punam.. !
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2007, 01:09:22 PM » |
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Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai PUNNU... Behad Khubsoorat Rachna Pesh Ki hai Tumne.. !!  Padh kar Maza aa gaya.. har Lafz Ishq Bikher raha hai.. !! Sharm-o-Haya Ko Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya Hai Tumne.. !! :wink: :wink: |
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2007, 03:46:05 PM » |
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Thanx Ricky ji....
oye viku kya baat hai bari tareef kar di aapne toh...
tanku tanku ....
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2007, 05:31:47 PM » |
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Punam
Very good ! =D>
Lage raho :D
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2007, 07:51:07 AM » |
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Thanx bhaiya...
Tanha jab rehti hun khayalo me tumhe paati hun
her jagah tumhe main mehsoos karti hun..
apne saaye mein bhi main tumhe hi dekhti hun
kyun tum hi tum nazar aate ho..sochti rehti hun
yeh kaisi hulchal hai dil me..jo pehle na thi
her aahat se kyun main chounk uthti hun
nazar hamesha tumhe hi talashti rehti hai
kya tumhe bhi aisa lagta hoga..sochti rehti hun
aate hi khayal tumhara lab yun khil jaate hai
dil hi dil me tumhe sada deti rehti hun
saamne na ho phir bhi kyun palak jhuk jaati hai
yeh kaisi uljhan hai kya hua aaj mujhe...sochti rehti hun
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2007, 08:01:14 AM » |
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nice.......behut khoob likha hai aapne punam ji..........per 2nd wala jyada behter laga....keep writing.
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2007, 08:12:58 AM » |
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thanx...purani_jeans_aur_guitar...ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2007, 08:42:07 AM » |
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Punam
Bahut khoob ! =D> =D> =D>
Tum humare dost ko Fahi bula sakti ho. Tumhara bahut achcha saath denge shayari mein. :D
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2007, 09:08:29 AM » |
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shukriya............
meri chahat ki dastaan ko pad paaoge tum kaise
ki ye to haawao mai likhi hai alfaaz-e-ehsaas se
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2007, 01:12:19 PM » |
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nice one .... fahi ji..
meri chahat ki dastan kya kahu tumse
chupane se chupta kaha waise
aankhon se chalakta hai kuch aise
zuban khulne ki zarurat nahi waise...
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«Reply #13 on: August 20, 2007, 03:28:25 PM » |
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hhhmm............
apne dil mai is ehsaas ko yaaro bharne se pehle
ishq ko mere tum salaam yaaro karne se pehle
likh lena khudki dastaan kisi paane pe zaroor
meri chahat ki dastaan ko yaaro padne se pehle
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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2007, 06:16:15 AM » |
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waaa .............waaa...........
kya baat hai aap ki
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